Wasteland: Unlimited Upgrades for My Items

The writing a hundred chapters ago was pretty good, with basically no glitches and no seriousness. But after more than a hundred chapters, when entering the dungeon, one thing can be narrated several times. The writing is so serious that it feels like it was written by another person. Things that can be written in one or two chapters have to be written in five or six chapters, and what can be reduced to a thousand words can only be reduced to 6,000 words. Are all my readers taking advantage of me? Pay money to see you come to me?

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After reading about ten chapters, I discovered a question. The protagonist has no shortage of bullets now. Why doesn't he practice marksmanship? It's not like he's 100% sure to hit when shooting. The protagonist is so confident in his marksmanship. From the beginning until now, he has never thought of practicing his marksmanship...

Bullets regenerate once per second, and they are hard currency for transactions. Just cut them out, save them and sell them. This is a bug.

It's a bit watered down. It's almost 300 chapters and I haven't left Oasis yet. If I haven't figured out how to write other maps, I won't write it yet. Instead of letting this water go and write dozens of chapters for a turmoil, if they have these dozens of days, they can finish the settlement.

There is a girl named Chen Shanshan in one team. Not only is she a virgin, but she is also a drag. She has high strength and is very useful. I don't know why the author put such a girl in the protagonist's team. It's better for the protagonist to play by himself!

Damui B, can you give me some content? Can you stop using AI to expand the writing? It gives me a headache.

Since the ability is an upgrade item, you can directly purchase low-level meat, upgrade it to high-level meat, sell it or eat it yourself, and you don't need to go out to take risks at all. The low-level evolution agent is used to upgrade to high-level ones. There is no need to fight to death with high-level monsters before extracting them. I keep writing about upgrading guns and cars, which is sick. In fact, upgrading yourself directly is just one step away!

There are a few bugs. Since the wildebeest is so important, did the Li family put a bounty on it during the migration? As a big family, the Li family has so many subordinates, so they won't arrest them themselves? You can tame wildebeests if you still have anesthetics. I don't believe that so many forces can't do anything about it. Do you have to wait until the protagonist team comes up with a reagent that can anesthetize wildebeests to tame wildebeests?

It looks good, and the setting is somewhat similar to a previous one. I forgot the name. The protagonist starts with a nail gun. That one is faster paced, this one is too slow. It's cliche, with too many annotations, most of which describe the environment and analysis. There are very few plots in each chapter, and some don't even have any. In the early stages, it seemed quite fresh, but after reading dozens of chapters, it felt too watery. The plot can't be promoted. Many analyzes are said but not said, and there are repetitions. The author's writing style is quite good. Maybe he can reduce the analysis a bit and add more plots about going out to fight monsters and increase income. The ability is already very strong. It is impossible to keep doing it on the tightrope. How many survivors can survive like this? Of course, any novel that wants to satisfy readers can find shortcomings, and explaining it too fully may reduce the reader's imagination and sense of involvement.

Just take your time in the town and have fun. More than two hundred chapters, still in the small town. The pace is slow and there are few updates, so there is no way to survive.

There are too many psychological descriptions and situation introductions, and Che Zhulun talks too much. There are just a few things that need to be said over and over again. For example, in Chapter 171, the first 11 pages are all about why the Wolf King wants to attack Oasis Town. That stuff is nothing more than that. At such a time, a troubled world is about to arise, and I want to seize the opportunity to give it a try. One is a snipe and a clam fighting so that he can benefit from it. The other is that he is not greedy so that he will not attract the Holy Spring Cult to stare at him. Is this thing worth explaining over and over again for 11 pages? If the author did not do it on purpose, then the writing style really needs to be rethought. If it was on purpose, then you are just cheating money with just a few words. The results are dropping rapidly. Isn't the author keeping track of it? From about chapter 110 onwards, it became more and more obvious that there were a lot of words, the plot progressed extremely slowly, the supporting characters were less and less portrayed, and some things that should have been passed over had to be explained in one or two chapters. I've given up. Maybe I'll come back to see the situation after a while. As the author writes now, whether you can persist until chapter 250 is a big question.

One thing to say, if you can really pull out the bullet, it will look better, instead of forcing the setting for the sake of setting.

Do you want to be so cool... A Li family rebellion has been told for more than a hundred chapters. The results have not yet begun, and the interest in following has been worn away.

The beginning of the book felt exactly the same as the one I had read before. I remember that the next step was to go to the oasis and then there was a conflict. The protagonist took out his upgraded pistol and killed a bunch of people with one shot. I forgot some things in the middle. I remember that the protagonist team had to face the crisis of a group battle, and then built something to attract people (like a trumpet), and then many times After upgrading, it turned out that this thing was so powerful that it pulled down the game planning department in the sky, and then the world where the protagonist lived collapsed inexplicably, but I forgot why the protagonist did not die. The protagonist came to a new world, and then became a logging businessman because he could upgrade the equipment. The protagonist here is almost level 50, so I stopped watching when I saw it. I remember watching it a long time ago, certainly not last year. So is this the author changing his vest?

Two-thirds of a chapter is devoted to explanations, meetings, discussions, thinking, and only a little bit of actual plot advancement. Why not raise it? What to watch if you don't raise it? If you spend 8,000 a day to write about the background of 2,000 to 3,000 yuan, that's no problem. If you spend 4,000 a day to write about the intracranial storm of 2,000 to 3,000 yuan. It would be inappropriate to go into detail.

I thought the author didn't update anymore, but it would be best if he could update. I want to see a complete ending.

Can anyone tell me if he has opened a new account?

This is a good book. If you write it slowly, you will definitely get a good product.

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