
Ultra: They Are All My Human Bodies
奥特:她们都是我的人间体
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 451k Words
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Myriad Worlds
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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3kFans
209Chapters
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Please optimize your words and sentences, author
If you can't write a picture, don't just make it up with a running account. The written dialogue is also awkward. There are few books I have read in Daily Guide to Drugs that are as rough as this one in the first chapter. Even the free chapter hydrology is not such a water method. I don't know how to write about random classics, such as Snow Country and One Hundred Years of Solitude. I can just pick a few verses and imitate dialogue scenes. I have read no less than 20 books of the heroine Ou Wenguang this year. Although it is true that there is basically no writing, you are not so lazy that you are always confused when dividing the chapters.
Some suggestions for the author: 1. Don't make the opponent too smart and powerful, and the protagonist will be fooled by all kinds of schemes. A pawn trained offline for the final BOSS is faced with such difficulty. His life is in danger in dozens of chapters. It always feels like the protagonist is more incompetent than the enemy. When you write like this, readers will be so frustrated that they can't even stand it. 2. It's best not to use the original style of play for Jayden, otherwise there will be nothing new and the protagonist will not feel involved. It is best to come up with a play style that embodies the spiritual core and powerfulness of the Giant of Light, and can contrast with the Scientific Arcana of the New Austrian worldview.
It can be seen that the author put his heart into it, but his ability is limited. There is a childish feeling of trying hard to write something mature and thick, and there is also a feeling of trying hard to be sophisticated but not understanding.
Some ideas for writing a book
The inspiration for this book actually came very early. After watching Gauss's theatrical version, I became very curious about Justice, the Ultraman. The key is that she is the only mature and decent female interbody, and she is very handsome and cool after the transformation. (Griggio, I think the human body is still acceptable. Ultraman's appearance is really cool, and the black version is natural.) Later, by chance, I read a Justis novel at an external station, and I liked it even more, so I wanted to write a Justis novel of my own. (I actually wrote a book about Justice at the beginning of the year, but I deleted it before signing the contract. I recently picked it up and re-conceived it.) The character style I like is the one that is more mature and steady, and in my mind Justice should be that type. Therefore, the tone of the entire book should not show the protagonist being frivolous, unless it is abnormal. Most of the time, the protagonist should be more serious. If I want to lighten up the mood, I would probably focus on supporting roles. And as the name of my book suggests, Justice travels through the multiverse, and she will meet many human beings, such as Hiroko Asami, Megumi Nakama, Mizuki, etc. This kind of thing is not clear. When it comes to her relationship with the human body, I am actually more inclined to deal with transcendent friendship and more like family affection. Of course, this depends on my writing skills. There may be some flavoring occasionally, but not much. The story line of the book is actually relatively simple, and what is more important is Justis's experience in each world. There will be some original characters in the middle, just to satisfy my story line, but they will not overwhelm the fact that this is an Ultra fan. This is a simple original intention of writing a book. If you like my book, you can read it more and comment more. If you feel that my book is not to your liking, you can give us your opinion and I will seriously consider every reasonable suggestion.
What the hell? Why did the armored warrior pop out too?
In fact, it's a bit baffling to watch and I'm not happy about it. I hope things get better in the future.
You'd better stop writing it. If you want to write the minimum settings, you have to understand it...
Hiss, is this still a male video? Or is this the only way to start with male videos? Heroine?
I came across this in the daily guide, and I'm a little interested in Xin'ao fics. Do you have any Shen Nong?
Let's get over the self-created character plot. It didn't feel like anything before and now it's a bit weird.
I came here when I saw a new Ultraman heroine.
I feel like the combat writing in these dozens of chapters has been a bit dry recently, but I don't know why. I just feel it's a bit dry and makes me want to skip reading.