Naruto: I Live in Konoha, My Name Is Uzumaki Menma

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The writing in Chapters 27 and 28 is too contradictory. With a big sister here, you can't have enough to eat. Don't talk nonsense about sleeping most of the time. According to what you wrote before, you have time to curse, so why don't you have time to talk about the problem of not having enough to eat...

I thought it was the original version of Menma replacing Naruto, but it turned out that the time traveler returned to Novice Village 😂

I have read about a hundred chapters where the protagonist is still three years old, and I want to know when he will turn four 😰

No, buddy, you started writing about the collapse of Konoha at the end of last year. It's almost April now, and Konoha hasn't collapsed yet! What about playing with eggs? 🙂

It seems like the book I read before, Escape from Konoha The same founding of the country, the same liberation of productivity, and the advancement of science and technology The same invincibility in the mid-term Then it felt like the next step was a big deal, and I beat Ming Sao Sakura in the later stage It couldn't be written by the same person😓

It's okay at first, but it's really toxic later on. It depends on your acceptance level. If you can be immune, it's okay. If not, don't watch it.

The latest updates are not on time, and the plot is too watery. Why, I can't write anymore?

Now that it is powerful and has established a new country, why is it still unwilling to touch the key plot? After all, this country will change the world sooner or later and will definitely destroy the plot line in the later period. So what is the point of protecting the previous plots to death?

In fact, I feel that I can extract the chakra of the eldest sister, Hinata, and so on, and then reincarnate using dirty soil, and then borrow Nagato's reincarnation and resurrection. In this way, there will be 4 Earth Blast Stars and 3 people's happiness. I also hope that for the others, you will not keep the original character of the anime like before, and do not have an extended version.

When I asked this question, I suddenly remembered that there were many girls who liked Naruto in the movie version, and there was no shortage of girls who liked him. 🙂As long as it's not Sakura, I think it's fine. After all, she has been chasing Sasuke for many years.

This is good

Gentle Hinata

I want to ask, the protagonist has beaten the Kingdom of Thunder to death before, how can these small ninja villages dare to jump out? ? ?

In more than forty chapters, it is said that Ye Cang is dead but unfortunately he cannot be taken as his subordinate. In Chapter 68, Ye Cang leads a team to investigate the Star Ninja Village. He has seen fans who conflict with the original settings, but he has never seen fans who conflict with himself. And even if you look at the setting of the original work, Ye Cang died in three battles, how could Naruto still be alive when he was three years old.

Strictly speaking, Tsukuyomi is a real world. If it is fake, then how did Sakura physically go to Shippuden World? The existence of dragon veins shows that different timelines exist, and some of the comic's extras represent parallel universes.

I know you want to write the original plot, but you have destroyed too much before, and it is no longer suitable to write the original plot, especially the plot of the Land of Waves. The two most important characters in the plot of Wave Country are Momochi Zabuza and Shiro. The relationship between them reflects the kind of transcendence of tasks, the bond that transcends the relationship between superiors and subordinates, and the love between them that follows life and death. This leads to the feelings between Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura, as well as the bond between companions. But now Haku has been taken away by the protagonist, and Momochi Zabuza no longer has Haku around him, so how could such feelings appear, unless the author adds one to him, but then this is superfluous, you might as well not write about taking Haku away. So there is no need to continue writing according to the original plot. You can create based on the original plot and change some things, especially for a plot like this, which is not particularly important. You can change it. Your latest breaking point is the Konoha Collapse Plan. You have to write about this one in detail. Others like exams and some small battle plots can be written briefly. You don't need to write so carefully. After the Konoha collapse plan, the protagonist has to take Naruto away and bring him back to the Star Wave, otherwise his plan will have no meaning, and if Naruto is taken back, then all his bonds in Konoha will be useless, okay?

Hey, there's no explanation, so I won't write it down.

The overall writing is very good, but the latest part is a bit deliberate. It can be seen that the author is not very old, and he always has a kind of craftsmanship in portraying family atmosphere. However, these days, there are too few authors who are willing to honestly write about the warmth of family. Tiansha Lone Star is the mainstream. Come on author

Can you write more emotional lines 😍, especially light ones, and have more interactions.

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It's almost coming to an end. Before, I updated a chapter every three to five without saying anything. Unexpectedly, in August, this time for eleven consecutive days, there was no movement at all. Don't you even know how to ask for leave?

It can only be said that the author didn't know how to end it. Kaguya was too bland, and Tengai Otsutsuki was afraid of being slapped in the face, so he scrapped it.

No, buddy, why are your updates so slow?😥😥

If God wants to destroy him, he must first make him crazy

Fortunately, I watched part of it, so I went to QQ Reading and watched it as a member. I originally spent three days fishing and two days surfing the Internet, but now I am just a eunuch.

Can I tell the truth. Since the founding of the People's Republic of China, there have been a number of ugly people😴

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