Under One Person, Ink Painting

Which old thing is this reincarnation?

Is it the reincarnation of the dirty earth or the devil from outside the territory?

Just because the title of this book suits me so well, I have to give it a try

Eunuch, let's break up, brothers.

The writing by one person is very good, but the pace is a bit slow. It would be better if the pace was faster. I stick closer to the original work, but I have a little bit of my own settings, which is acceptable. What I want is this book, and it is well written. I hope the author can keep it like this.

Is the author the trumpet of the book Five Blessings? Strong knowledge base

Can you understand the author? Why did you stop updating more than 50 photos? Can you tell what the results are? Really, just tell me if you want to run away. The body is speechless

After reading a few chapters, the protagonist's methods have nothing to do with the title. In the first chapter, he played with weapons and then competed with others on sun refraction and painting the ground as a prison. Are these two things related to ink painting?

The refining method of Mo Bao should be different from others 😰, why does it look like refining Love Gu is no different from ordinary ones!

There's something, but it's a pity that I discovered it too early

Very good, the character creation, plot arrangement, detailed description and writing are all in place. It's not like it was written by a newcomer. There are some minor issues though. First, too many long dialogues are not divided into paragraphs. Secondly, some parts of the battle are too detailed and a bit verbose. The last time I saw such detailed writing was in "Martial Arts Master". This takes away a lot of the urgency of the battle. Currently, the volume is not large, so I can't see any other problems, but there are some small suggestions. I hope the author will not completely abandon the main plot. There have been several one-person novels that completely let go of themselves, and in the end it became unreadable. It is recommended to use Luotian Dajiao as an opportunity to connect to the main plot, and also let the protagonist participate in the subsequent plot through the emotions of the two Lu brothers and sisters (at least don't let Linglong get infected in Nasen.) This will not completely follow the plot. You can also cooperate with the Feng family appropriately based on your grievances with the Wang family. Or increase your own influence and form a new alliance with other Danqing sects (there are not many descendants anyway, and the higher-ups will definitely be happy to see a new organization to check and balance the Wang family, which will also help protect the inheritance.)

The writing is very good, and it has the feeling of being under one person. It is a rare good book.

Is this Lao Deng from the dirty land or a demon from outside the realm?

Is this a direct cut off due to poor performance?

Why did you abandon the book😐