Dream of the Red Chamber: I’m No Traitor to the Han

Why bring a system and a panel? It looked good at first, but it turned out to be like eating a fly in a meal. It was so unappetizing. In addition, the writing style is not bad, just describe it appropriately, don't show off all the time, it will make your teeth hurt when you look at it.

I just read Chapter 10 and found a lot of objections. Some people commented that the protagonist is sentimental and his desire for the golden hairpin is shallow and annoying. I don't feel so happy looking at it myself. I feel like my poor grades are probably due to this problem. I have read several books of Red Mansion. Those protagonists with good rhythm are basically determined and have clear goals. The author of this book is not bad at all, but the literary youth's enthusiasm gives him a toothache when he reads it. Jin Chai is highly praised. I think these female characters are certainly one of the main characters of Red Mansion, but they should never be the only scenery that the protagonist can see. At best, they are the icing on the cake among the flowers. The protagonist is the backbone. He turns into a sycamore and a phoenix comes from him. But if you take them too seriously, it means that there is no distinction between priority and priority. Chapter 10 is, in the author's words, the first 'interview'. At this moment, you are still in a daze, which is really disappointing. The attitude during the interview was too lax, and it didn't look like someone could get anything done.

The writing is very good, and the garden scene is also good, but the plot progress is too slow and too detailed. The protagonist and the sisters only get along for a few days. Guang Daiyu gets misunderstood and gets angry several times, and then the protagonist apologizes and coaxes her. It feels very bad. There is no emotional basis, and it is a bit too abrupt. It would be better to lengthen the timeline and give them some time to get along. The protagonist's age is also a drawback. He is only ten years old. As a result, Mrs. Wang wanted to beat Li Wan because Li Wan was a little close to the protagonist (she just looked at Yu Ci's pocket watch and had a meal with her deskmate). The protagonist is just a ten-year-old kid? Moreover, when people get along with each other on weekdays, it is impossible to tell that the protagonist is a ten-year-old child. It would be more appropriate to change the protagonist's age to fifteen or sixteen years old. After all, in the ancient setting, even if Da Baodai is five or six years old, it is actually okay And then some plots are really unreasonable. For example, a ninth-rank official of Jin Yiwei actually dared to molest and humiliate Aunt Xue, the head wife, in public. Is this really a shameless thing? It wouldn't matter if the two families had a feud and there was someone behind him, but it was just the simplest thing to do, and then he felt that his uncle would support him, and he bet that the four major families of King Xue, the king of Jia Shi, would not dare to go to war. And even if this person is a real person, he can obviously tell the story in a few words, and then the protagonist comes to the rescue. However, the writing is so detailed that I almost thought I was on the wrong website.

After all, Lin Daiyu is also a talented girl from the south of the Yangtze River. She looks like a little girl with every mouthful, but the smell of big dirt hits her face.

The writing is good, but the background of Wu Sangui and the protagonist is so disgusting, like a piece of chocolate with a little bit in it💩. I really don't understand why you wrote this kind of background?

When I see this 6/7 year old, she looks as beautiful as a fairy! A book that looks ridiculously handsome at the age of 7/8 is really... Anyone who is around 12 years old can barely read it! Do you know what a yellow-haired child is? This is when I was 6/7 years old

The writing is good, but the portrayal of the protagonist is always "obscene", and the plot is not so free and frank. He always looks like he has never seen a woman before. I assume it is not vulgar. Is this the author's self-analysis?

I'm tired of watching it. The age setting of the main character is so completely unnecessary? The underdeveloped elementary and high school students feel completely unnecessary. Secondly, perhaps it is because the protagonist is so young that he just licks him blindly in front of Wang Xifeng. He dared not offend Wang Xifeng but dared to intimidate Aunt Xue. Third, regardless of priority, the psychological activities of the n-line supporting actress must also be written repeatedly and non-stop. The same similar psychological activities should appear repeatedly in the same chapter. It seems like a 5k chapter, but the actual plot advancement is 0. But the general background of the setting is that Lu Shen of China is about to arrive.

This is the most detailed Red Mansions novel. This kind of detailed writing gives people a feeling of the real world. You can better feel the fun and joy of the people in the article. Compared with most other Red Mansions novels, the difference between 4k and 1080 is the only difference. As long as the plot is not too confusing, I will give it a solid 5-star rating. Monthly votes have been cast.

It's disgusting. Even if the author is Wen Qing, he's still very arrogant.