Lin Pingzhi: There's Something Wrong with My Martial Arts

There are some problems with the latest chapters. Anyway, I don't understand what the protagonist's mentality is when he calls Linghu Chong and Chong'er. Not to mention that the protagonist is about the same age as Linghu Chong in terms of time. In terms of plot, the protagonist and Linghu Chong are not familiar with each other, right? Even if you marry Ning Zhongze, your mentality should not change so much. Linghu Chong is not the protagonist who grew up watching him. How do you call him this name?

After reading some, I understand why so few people read martial arts novels nowadays. The plot structure attracted me at the beginning, but later it felt like it was written by someone else... I saw the protagonist in the Five Poison Sect being ambushed. I was thinking about these plots and the protagonist's behavior of saving people. How come they are familiar? Isn't this the template for the protagonist's routine in novels like Jin Guliang in ancient times? In terms of personality and actions, the protagonist is just like that... In today's martial arts novels, the protagonist is decisive and does not kill, the protagonist is always plotted by others, the protagonist always does nothing, how can it retain readers...

I'm curious about the reason for writing about Lin Pingzhi? ? You can give the protagonist any identity you want, Why do you want him to wear Lin Pingzhi...

I felt relieved when I saw so many people scolding me. I thought I was the only one who was upset👏️👏️👏️👏️

To tell the truth in these recent chapters, getting drunk and traveling through time in public is really smart.

No, this is the first time that I have gone through many twists and turns when I go to Huashan to propose marriage. Are you kidding me? Also, is this a self-pleasure book?

It's right for you to rush to the street. What you get are all rubbish martial arts. Or you have top-notch external skills without deep internal strength that can't activate the pressure of changing methods. The enemy is a lazy ass and rolls around to avoid the fatal blow. You are poisoned and injured in various ways. You are destined to play with snake skin.

The heart-piercing dragon's claw hand, which can hit all the marks, ignores all distances and obstacles, and ignores all defenses. It is a completely conceptual skill. It is given to you from across a universe.

With such an introduction, is there any Shennong?

Can you please stop writing about being injured? It gives me a headache when I look at it. I am either injured or on the way to injury. The protagonist's brain is not working very well.

The pig's feet are either injured again or on the way to injury. When can they be completely highlighted?

To be honest, when I saw the title of the book, I thought it was the legacy of Wei Wu. I didn't expect the author to design it this way. It's so wonderful. 👍👍👍👍👍

After reading the introduction, doesn't Lin Pingzhi know martial arts? Why do you want to wipe out the family and still don't know martial arts?

Just by looking at the introduction, you can tell it's rubbish and a piece of shit💩

Readers want to read a novel with a compact plot and no procrastination. What the author wants is to keep the word count as low as possible. After all, the author charges by the word count. This contradiction is irreconcilable.

It was fine before Chapter 20... It had a bit of flavor. After 20 chapters, it felt boring, and it felt like a novel that wasn't enjoyable. The emotional scenes dragged on, and some of the plots were incomprehensible. Even if you open a harem, it's better than this. If you want the emotional drama to be profound, that's not how you do it.