My Bond with Them Connects the Galaxy

I was surprised to hear that Xiaojiang came to Qidian to preach again, so I came here to catch up on the latest chapter. First of all, this world view is too much for Genting at first glance (laughs), but it includes gods and many planets. I hope to write the feeling of a starry sky novel, instead of each planet being a copy of the small world. Then there are the supporting actresses. There are only two of them in Chapter 30. I feel that the emotional foreshadowing of these two is still a little interesting, but so many people have been added to the protagonist group at once. If it is a bulldozer style, it would not be bad. Finally, there is the protagonist. I saw Father God in the late period of Lone Wolf, and I always felt that Xiaojiang's protagonist image was a bit thin. This book currently has too few words and the protagonist's life story is unknown. We will wait until the first plot climax is revealed before drawing a conclusion. But so far, I still don't have much of an impression. It's like a doll that is pushed around without taking the initiative, refusing, or taking responsibility. Although it was written that the protagonist joked with others and made some actions, it was brushed off and there was no specific description, so no image was basically created. Personally, I prefer protagonists with flesh and blood and emotions. I don't know if Xiaojiang is determined to come here seriously this time. I have quit the group for two years. I would like to say hello to Xiaojiang, the group leader and everyone in the group, and I also wish Xiaojiang's book a great success!

🔱🐭👉 I'm here to help you!

I feel that the protagonist has nothing to highlight his ability or charm, so he simply said that he has a good-looking face and is weak in combat power. It's just that the light novel may not have much requirements for this, but it does feel like he's in the wrong place.

How should I put it, if you give up when you see the girl from the royal family acting for that royal family, it will not create a male protagonist, or a male protagonist who cannot control his beauty? When writing harem stories, don't treat the male protagonist like a waste. Waste doesn't mean ability, but thinking? What kind of person really writes what kind of novels? The plot is not interesting either

If you want to write about the promotion of civilians to give everyone a sense of belonging, don't write about God's darling or about how profound the background is. You started at full level and we came to see you wash your account and practice? Is it fun to trick people into killing people who want to watch the flow of civilians? You are already invincible, so you can only take shortcuts and avoid detours. 500,000 Words to reach the gods quickly 😁😁 Ancient routines are still used today.

No, why don't you use half the energy to describe the male protagonist with making up those nouns? Writing such a wretched country bumpkin male protagonist is not interesting at all. The protagonist has not polished off all the mess. Are you starting to write a novel without clarifying any key points? Unfortunately, I went to other websites to spend money to order your book. Not only did I not make progress, but the more I wrote, the more rubbish I wrote. I am used to writing small white male protagonists. I am sweating when I get a little more difficult.

Is it appropriate to dig so many holes in the plot? The protagonist's identity is unknown, his abilities are unknown, his position is unknown, and his goals are unknown. He also likes to be the Riddler. In this case, they kept changing dungeons to create supporting characters. It looked too messy. At least I lost my patience after Chapter 40.

Gradually it has no features (no cool points, no Sesei, no plot, no main line), the plot is short and weak, and most of it feels like there is no explanation of skills.

The main reason I came here from Toxic is that these days, my writing skills are good, but there are too few people who write about harems.

OK, Xiaojiang's starting point failed to achieve enlightenment.

Why do you always like to break up the suspense at the end of the previous chapter and not continue it at the beginning of the next chapter? I want to criticize you for this way of writing. Don't write like this when writing online articles. I have never seen an author who writes like this.

Master Mint really made me laugh

The first dozen or so chapters are quite exciting, but once you enter the blood and wine instance, it becomes very confusing! The first point is the fight between the 20-person team of Sake and Nuerhong. In terms of appearance, it is just two and a half fighting. Nuerhong releases lava, Heartbroken runs in, and the other half is assisted by champagne. The second point is that before entering the dungeon, I had been stressing to be careful with Whiskey, but when I met Whiskey later, Whiskey directly said that you guys should come together to deal with me, and then the male protagonist opened a bond and killed him instantly. This was too hasty and not fun. Even if it was to write about the two ancestors who faked their own death, they shouldn't be so quick. The third point is that the strength of the male protagonist is a bit vague. It may be because the author is considering it to hide the secret of the male protagonist, but my current feeling is that the male protagonist is quite strong, but I don't know where he is strong, or to what extent he is strong (I haven't seen any grade classification so far. This is a bonus point for me, but if it is not well written, it is better to add it).

What has the author written before? It's nothing. I'll ask my brother. He wants to read it 🙂

As long as you make the names of these characters more normal, their popularity will be much higher. These names are so normal, it makes me pick my feet.

The author is awesome, the content is so awesome, I can only say awesome.

Please give me a break, can you write seriously?

The book is very good, but for online articles, the creative concept is a bit outdated. If it is a particularly famous author, relying on the quality of the book and the author's own reputation, he can quickly filter out some loyal readers, and the book can immediately become a minor hit. It's a pity that you are not, the rest depends on luck I mean, this book is not very good, and it is suitable for a famous old author to rest on his laurels.

I just got the August book now.

Don't cut it, I'm done with it 😅🔨

What was the author's previous name and what was the book called?

Are you a eunuch?😅😅😅

Can't the author update be fixed? Can't you even update it every day? How do you gain popularity like this?

Live up to my expectations😭🔨