Siheyuan: Can I Provide Emotions and Value?

The writing is good and I can read it... But I feel there is something wrong with the logic. The fact that Xu's father found someone to beat up the protagonist is basically a plot by the accountant to plot against the owner's daughter. It would be easier for Lou if he didn't kill him, so why would he help the Xu family? And the 1954 War to Resist U. S. Aggression and Aid Korea had just ended. How could the factory be full of workers? The reason why Cui's father went to support the construction of the factory was not valid...

From the beginning, there were too many characters, saying something about this and something about that. It was a headache to watch, as if everyone was the protagonist.

Is this book going to be a craftsman style? I don't understand the specific work of the steel rolling mill. I feel that the writing in the book is quite detailed and professional, but I can't actually understand these professional things. It would be better if it could be more popular. In addition, Golden Finger does not provide much effect on the technical plot, but now it focuses on the technical plot, which makes it feel a bit fragmented when reading.

After reading the first few chapters, I felt that it was long-winded. In the five chapters, the visiting patient did not even leave the hospital door. Don't try to write everything in, but pay attention to the details and the content. The continuation will definitely have a lot of content related to Lou, which can be completely broken up and released in several times. There is no need to concentrate it in a few chapters. It is best for the author to read the finished thing himself. The feeling of writing it is completely different from that of reading it. It may not feel like writing it, but after reading it, it will be clear that the content is not verbose. This paragraph is completely unnecessary.

I've given you the ticket. Let's see how you can get gold bars if you don't have space.

You can still watch it now. It should be written with reason and evidence. Upper and lower series connection

What I don't like most about the Siheyuan era is the kind of young and ignorant Qin Huairu slowly sinking, silly Zhu is in jail, Bang Ge is either dead or disabled, and then Jia Zhang and Yi Zhonghai have a good death, which becomes more and more depressing the more I watch it. Maybe it's because I haven't watched the TV series?

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The writing about those two women was too unpopular. They teased them, called them names, and exposed them even if they didn't know each other.

Without a brain storage place, what would I eat? Where can I make up for the lost brain? 😡

Whether the heroine is Fatty Lou or not, I don't care if she is Fatty Lou.

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There is only one bad guy in the courtyard, Xu Damao. The first seven days of release to Hong Kong have passed early. Everyone else has prototypes around them. It's just that in which episode does that Jia Zhang family show up in the mourning hall, beat people, summon souls and curse people? Didn't see it