Warhammer: the Godfather of the Night Lords

What needs to be said is that the Emperor's deification was entirely his own fault: Wearing frighteningly gorgeous gold armor all year round There is a giant halo behind his head Holding an ever-extinguishing flaming sword Building a continent-sized monument for himself To himself The guards also wore frighteningly gorgeous gold armor Carried out as many genetic experiments as possible He was over three meters tall Created a functional pantheon of genetically engineered demigods One of the demigods looked very much like (literally) an angel If you look like a god and act like a god, people will think you are a god. For example, the "Holy Words" written by Luojia, the eldest son of the family, can be summarized in one sentence: "Because ordinary people cannot blow up the sun or make light shine from the back of their heads, only gods can, so my father is a god. It is proved."

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The author's writing is obviously too unrealistic. If this group of untouchables were to be replaced by other hive worlds, they would not even be qualified to be absent from work as the bottom hive. Their parents' corpses would even be taken to the corpse starch processing factory as inedible. They still dare to complain and criticize the protagonist. They have never seen the "care" and oppression of the upper-class hive people (of course, if they can tolerate the abilities of the soulless and are recruited). This chapter's description of the scavenger is too childish. If they are really sent to other planets and worlds, they are not even human beings. My family didn't know that they were eaten by that beast.

At the beginning, the author used a lot of descriptions and words to give the protagonist a very high tone. Repeatedly and repeatedly emphasize how powerful the protagonist's intelligence and abilities are. This gives readers great expectations for the protagonist's performance in the subsequent plot and the battle of wits and courage with the enemy. However, later on, the plot does not show the protagonist's wisdom and abilities that were previously heavily foreshadowed. What kind of feeling does it give people? It's like praising a military commander at the beginning as being the pinnacle of the art of war, a god of war, comparable to the military commanding ability of the reincarnated Marquis Wu. As a result, when there was a fight on the spot, they lined up and shot them with one hand, and nothing else. It just gives people a loud and powerful sound, and this is the result?

It can only be said that with Batman's character, he will definitely have a fight with the Emperor of God. In addition, Malcador is a restless master. Grandpa Bat has already launched some anti-Justice League plan before, and even he was on the list. Plus there are four gods causing trouble... It's even easier. Horus's birthday wishes are so weak 😍😍

Why is the adopted body still called Conrad? Can't it be called Bruce Wayne?

I quite like this book. Compared to Midnight Blade, this book is more humane. And I am a human being, so I still like books with a humane touch.

Is it popular to adopt the original body in 40k nowadays?

The setting of this book makes eating books very serious

Conrad smashed through the Nostramo adamantine vein, I knew it, so it was written at the beginning that Conrad smashed through the Wayne adamantine barrier, further smashed through the Wayne Group's buildings, and then smashed into the vein. The adamantine shield extracted from adamantine minerals has been smashed through, and the group buildings have been smashed through. It is impossible to hit the center of the earth to slow down. After all, isn't it normal that the adamantine shield is stronger than the ore veins? Then Nostramo is too good, indeed, the original Nostramo is a place where there is rape in seven seconds, Wayne Group. There is no Wayne Group in the original work, and the protagonist also travels through more than forty years and solves problems by killing. Conrad's original work was skinned and cramped. Wayne directly killed the whole family. The nobles were made into flesh and blood machines and danced to death. He eliminated many nobles in one go and then established the Wayne Group. This is written in the article.

No, you started eating books at the age of twenty-two. If you don't go to GW to write novels, that would be a disgrace to your talent.

The style is too high and the performance is too poor, especially when writing about the Warhammer universe. It feels like a kid who kills chickens is trying to show off his darkness and cruelty in front of the murderer. Putting this aside and not talking about other plots, it's okay. It doesn't pay much attention to setting and performance, so it can be used as food.

I still remember what Horus said in "The Spirit of Vengeance", the suffering of all living beings is due to disobedience to the commandments and indulgence. If you want me to say, fart Avoid killing, hatred will never end Avoid killing, how different is the strong and weak like me Avoiding, all sentient beings are evil Avoid, dreams are empty Avoid, worry and fear are ebb and flow Avoid, youth is just a moment If you don't kill, there will be no relief from suffering. If you don't kill, there will be no interest in life If you don't kill, what's the use of being filial to me If you don't kill, the four gods will not be happy If you don't kill, how can the emperor love me If you don't kill, how can human beings be saved? If you don't kill, how can aliens be killed If you don't kill , how the empire survives Ahimsa, how do legions survive Ahimsa, why do all living beings survive Ahimsa, how can the galaxy be peaceful Ahimsa, where do taxes come from Ahimsa, how to sell chess pieces Ahimsa, how can we harvest leeks?

No, the author, when you write Batman, at least read the original work before writing. Curze's cultivation cabin directly smashed through the adamantine stratum surrounding Nostramo. When he entered the magma, Curze climbed up by relying on the original body's constitution... How did the protagonist get inside and see the cultivation cabin 😅

The author wants to build a library that can serve 50,000 people at the beginning. Is he really not afraid of Tzeentch?

Can there be fewer typos? And it suddenly seems as if the author just went to play with his mobile phone for a while and then came back to write. Many places are not coherent at all. The previous paragraph and the next paragraph are completely disconnected, and it is easy to skip the scene. I suggest that after the author finishes writing a chapter, he reads it himself and corrects it.

The male protagonist looks too much like a villain, he makes a lot of nonsense before killing people

There are a lot of typos, which affects the perception The settings before and after are different, and the settings have not been changed properly. There are hundreds of chapters, and the first dozen chapters have not been changed The writing style is still poor, insisting on relying on the history of human beings in the 18th and 19th centuries. What you wrote is 40k, not 4k for minting.

The author is really from Warhammer. As far as land control is concerned, it has changed three times in less than thirty chapters. It is very good and very Hammer! 👍

The writing structure and characters are not enough. The world view of Warhammer is too difficult to control. It is better for new authors to write about other themes.

Ah? Am I a monthly ticket holder? It's so surprising, hehehe

Understand?