Warhammer: the Emperor's Dragon Daughter

After reading the first dozen pictures, I feel that the author may have ideas, but his writing skills are not very good. Many things that should be expanded and written are not expanded, especially in terms of emotions. Many times there is no foreshadowing, which often makes people feel a little inexplicable.

Some things were scrawled and taken for granted. Come on, this is gold🚽Sit down and do it for 13 days before you write it, give it a try first.

The introduction was confusing at first glance, and I saw him as War Commander Ran Dan. I thought the protagonist was adopted by Ran Dan and grew up to be Ran Dan's War Commander <(_ _)>

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This heroine theme is a test of writing skills. In addition, this IP has been used for decades, and it is really just for love.

If any human civilization is in line with the emperor's wishes, it is the witch civilization, which will forcibly transform you into a witch. Your original race has just become a characteristic, and your consciousness and soul will be transformed into a witch (extreme witch racism, other races can only eat or convert into witches or use them as materials). Active in foreign wars (forbidden troops per capita)

After reading a few chapters, the writing is poor, and the mother-daughter communication process does not reflect the warm and growing feeling. It feels strange to read.

I don't know why, but the more I read, the more strange it is, and I can't explain it. Is there a sense of separation between the front and the back? Who is the definition of protagonist?

Why was it necessary to write the Second Primarch as a female? Will it have any impact on the subsequent plot?

Huangpizi

Dear author, can I ask Shan Baiyuan?

Let's put it on the bookshelf first and see what it will develop into in the future. Whether it's a mule or a horse, it'll come out and run around.

1. According to the principle of matching the abilities of the Primarch, the two of them must be one specializing in psionic power and the other specializing in espionage 2. One of the eradicated legions has a stronger genetic mutation than the Thousand Sons, and this mutation is so intense that even the Emperor cannot bear it 3. No. 2 And No. 11 Did not vote for Chaos, nor are they engaged in AI, otherwise the Four Vendors would definitely disgust the Empire with this matter 4. The great work performed by these two Primarchs must be mentally polluted

Not bad, a good idea. I want to laugh when I think about what will happen when Horus celebrates his birthday

Okay, the author's talent has been exhausted. Two chapters have been updated recently and it's starting to get boring.

Coupled with the remaining original bodies in the official history, let's see if the protagonist can reverse the situation.

Long Xiaonu looks like the one next door 😄

I have an idea, but the writing is a bit poor. It's uncomfortable to watch

The title was confusing at first glance I thought it was a filial dragon girl. After thinking about it again, it sounds easier to pronounce "filial piety dragon girl".

In fact, I have always had an idea. Why doesn't Kang Laobao want a Sister of Silence to come over and suppress his talent? Because of his righteousness?

Why haven't you updated it? Isn't it cool?

Author, please don't be disappointed. I quite like this book. I can still get to 45 in the reading list at 8pm