Warhammer: I Am a Bat Cub

The numerical monsters in Super Beast are Ye Linyun and Yunpan Stacking Formation 😁

Bat cub? Big bat! Before you are the eldest (crossed out) brothers of the Eighth Primarch! Regent of the Legion's home planet Nostramo and its hundred worlds

The setting is reasonable, and it doesn't overwhelm combat capabilities, nor is it an invincible fool. What I follow is the management plus combat flow. The only pity for the fodder level is that it is too conventional. Basically, many Warhammer fanfics are about Astartes. The main reason is that the protagonist is already an immortal, can learn shadow words from Orpeson, and has powerful psychic abilities. You can try the Forbidden Army transformation, or even use your imagination to get even bigger. It's just a fly in the ointment.

The emperor is still too anthropomorphic. This savage is wise.

The writing is still good, but the atmosphere is a bit relaxed and the flavor is a little less hammer-y. I personally suggest that the author can write more appropriately. The characters should be classy and not be laughing and joking all the time. The protagonist is okay and others can't be like this.

He Baldhead is the most annoying of the many primarchs. Much of Moon Wolf's glorious achievements are set off by other legions that have not yet returned to the primarch. He extremely looks down on ordinary people and feels that he and canned people have sacrificed a lot, while ordinary people have not sacrificed much.

The Conrad Coates in this book feels untortured by prophecy. The overall style is not quite like the dark and deep character in the original work.

I thought it was DC's Batman

Does the author plan to engage in extravagance during the rebellion? Tie Yong and the Death Guard can still pull them back.

Can this legion of bat cubs be defeated? The most common thing I heard is that these people like to torture vegetables and play with corpses, and they love to carry out sneak attacks.

There's nothing sinister about it, the protagonist's character is quite interesting, and it's not impossible to use an innocent heart to counter Kang Laoba's dark crawling. However, I feel like the author is setting things off. He hinted that the protagonist's optimism is not so normal (?). Some minor flaws are that the direct continuity and transitions of the chapters are a bit stiff. The shaping and description of other characters other than the protagonist need to be strengthened. At present, it is still a bit stereotyped and does not leave an impression on people. However, the author's Mensao Imperial Army is quite interesting. As for the setting, I feel that it is a bit weak at the moment, not only for the protagonist, but also for the overall world line, but there is no big problem. I just need to slowly improve it. The quality is already good for a new author.

Not bad, keep up the good work, it's considered food and fodder

It's okay, but the updates are too slow.

Not bad, I like it😄