Stop Hypnotizing Me, Villainous Princess!

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1. The ending is cut in half. Whether it is good or not is a matter of opinion. From the perspective of this book, it is a failure, but from the perspective of a creator's career, at least it is not sloppy. I wish the next one will be better. 2. The first 110 chapters or so of this book, which is before the first climax, are exciting and interesting, and that is why I follow it to this day. The author knows how to write, at least he understands what the average online reader likes and reads, and knows what he is doing. 3. The starting point for the gradual collapse of the story: the original heroine had a split personality around 100,000 years ago and regarded herself as the enemy. It is a very special and interesting setting. However, when I later looked back and saw where I started to write the book, it also started from here. In order to distinguish the different personalities of the original heroine before and after, the characteristics of the heroine were divided and the character was flattened. The original heroine became a crazy yandere, and only a yandere remained. 4. At the same time, from a single heroine novel to a harem NTL novel, the number of female protagonists that need to be controlled changes from one to three or even four, and the world view has also entered from the local border to the core of royal power. At the same time, it has to take into account the changes in time and space one hundred thousand years later, as well as the response to the old enemy. The ambition is strong, but it seems to be beyond the original outline, and the uncontrollable ambition is finally out of control. 5. Until the last two chapters, I was still waiting for the author to compile a new outline to see if it could be revived, but it seemed that there was no way to save it. 6. Summary: The character setting is brilliant, and it was also a potential hit. However, the failure was that the author wanted to control too many characters at the same time, and the pace of the transition period was too big, and it went beyond the outline setting. It can only be a story that was originally read with gusto, but it is a pity.

Report to all sirs, demining soldier report! It took me an hour to read the first twenty chapters. It is really interesting, the writing is good, the characters are well drawn, and it is very comfortable to read.

Is this planting yours

To be honest, I'm scolding you now because I think the front part looks good. I really can't understand that this book's grades are not bad, right? Why was it cut off when it was at its peak...

Villain Noble Young Master: In the beginning, there is usually a distinguished background, such as a title of earl or above, or a royal family, with elders, but in most cases he is a strong man who can shake people up The advantage is that there will be no inexplicable villains, and it is easier to show his dignity in front of others. The disadvantage is that the difficulty of the plot is generally higher. A common plot is to resolve death flags related to bloodline, plot, and heroine Passenger Chamber of Commerce Young Master: There will be enough squanderable property at the beginning, and there is no strong plot death flag like the noble young master. The advantage is that the plot is relatively easy, and the elders are more marginalized in the plot. The disadvantage is that the family elders basically only have money, but no fighting power or connections in the extraordinary world. A common plot is to solve the weaker death flag, or use the plot to gain the heroine's wool The villain's daughter's staff At the beginning, she has no relatives or was adopted, knowingly or unknowingly, and In the story of the game, young girls who are bosses mix together and become his subordinates or friends The advantage is that after the start or a short period of time, there will be a number one heroine who will easily fall in love with you due to her withdrawn personality and pay special attention to you, and the further you go, the better she can be. The disadvantage is that it is easy to be in a weak position in the relationship between two people, and even be trained to lose the initiative that the protagonist should have. A common plot is to save the villain's daughter and emotional tension Members of a secret organization The starting point is usually with no relatives or ordinary family background. In the early stage of the plot, actively or passively enter a certain relationship with A secret organization with strong official power, becoming a transcendent and gradually being promoted The advantage is that the start is low, the sense of substitution is stronger, and there is no burden of life experience. The disadvantage is that the plot is generally the most difficult, there are villains, and due to the identity, the attack speed of the heroine is slow The common plot is to gain power and conflict with the boss.

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Ending 1: The Perfect Container For the smooth arrival of the Moon Goddess, the church has been secretly preparing for hundreds of years. The result of countless failures is an elf girl who is not stained with dirt and is like porcelain. "Call! Call! When the goddess comes, the container itself will shed tears of joy!" But who cares about the thoughts of that kind of thing (laughing) Ending 2: False redemption "Let's escape." In the pattering rain, two figures, one tall and one short, cuddled tightly together. After months of tense escape, the two finally arrived at the border without any danger. "I want to raise a brown dog... And a flower garden! In the past, grandma would not let me touch anything, and she said that a saint only needs to pray to the goddess!" The girl next to her had a cold face, and her words were clearly complaining, but she was full of agility and joy that belonged to her age.          ""，"，...！"， After "punishing" the boy with a moderate kick, the girl turned her head to the side as if she was sulking, but still hugged the boy's arm tightly. Lin En chuckled, feeling the quiet and elegant fragrance around him, and rubbed his brow tiredly. After months of running away, all this is finally coming to an end. He has turned his back on Miss Witch and His Royal Highness without permission, but has decided to shoulder the life of the girl in front of him, and cannot allow himself to think about other things. "Lynn!" After coming back to his senses, he realized that this was the call of the girl in his arms, followed by a sharp pain that went straight to his soul, and blood bloomed around him like a bead of sand. "Lin... En..." In the night rain, I couldn't tell whether it was the whisper of a girl's lover or the cursed whisper of the white-haired devil in front of me Ending 3: The dream of two people The goddess of the bright moon has arrived. What makes people think endlessly is that this god neither conveyed divine revelation to the believers nor expanded his faith, but immediately attacked the stronghold of the three princesses, causing a tragedy of severed limbs and then kidnapped a man. At this time, in the God's room of the Silent Church, a young man was naked and restrained. The girl beside him buried her head in his neck, and her slender little hands were not idle, roaming and rubbing his skin. "How can you let Tiya go!" The extremely ambiguous scene was broken by the young man's cold voice with suppressed anger. Although she has the same appearance as Tia, the girl in front of her is undoubtedly the moon goddess Beatrice. Originally, the worst outcome of the world line was for Her Royal Highness to sleep. However, due to her arrogance and self-righteousness, she was already dead at this time. In the end, she was unable to protect anything. Now her only extravagant wish is to obtain a glimmer of life for Tiya from the hands of the Moon Goddess. "I am Tiya." The girl in front of him licked his earlobe flirtatiously. They had the same facial features, but she looked charming and coquettish. Lin En glared at Yun Chang with hatred. He was clearly surrounded by enemies who had killed many of his relatives and friends, but under the instigation of the Moon Goddess, he was still eager to fight at this moment. "Bea... Hiss..." At this moment, he was shocked to realize that there was a pair of cold and delicate little hands, gently soothing his murderous intention and restlessness, just like that distant night, raw and slow, like a novice who had just started on the road, stumbling and stumbling. "Tia... Ya?" Lin murmured, grabbing this slightly absent-minded gap, followed by a faint fragrance that was close at hand. But what was different from the past was that this kiss seemed to be trying to make up for something or to catch something, long and long. "Tiya... Ya..." In the quiet shrine, only the sound of water and the breathing of young men and women were left from time to time. "Lin... En..." In the end, there was only a sound that sounded like a response and a sigh of contentment.