People in American Comics Just Want to Show Off

Can't you choose them all after reading the introduction? First tell the meat ticket that you don't understand English, then report the meat ticket backhand, and finally kill with the meat ticket.

No time traveler would want to bet on Thanos's half-snap of his fingers and Stark's snap of his fingers in different time and space, right? ? ?

What the hell? The protagonist is called the Passerby King? Wouldn't it be better to choose a more normal name?

Sorry, I really can't understand English.

To be honest, I think the biggest failure was the addition of mutants, because I have never seen a book that did not collapse, which instantly lowered my expectations for the follow-up.

Before I started, I read the introduction. From the introduction, I can see that the protagonist is the kind of character who doesn't want to get into trouble or get involved in right and wrong. But! How can you write a novel without causing trouble? That is the difference between actively making trouble and passively making trouble. If the author is not good at it, it may lead to a situation where he says he doesn't want to make trouble, but he keeps making trouble, and the protagonist is very hypocritical. So I hope the author pays attention to this issue, or simply creates an opportunity in the article to let the protagonist change his mentality and let the protagonist be more magnanimous, because if the fandom wants to write, it is impossible not to come into contact with plot characters and plot events. Otherwise, what should I write? Right, you are destined to participate, so don't make it a reluctant and blaming one. When the time comes, you get the benefits and complain about God's unfairness. The plot is very boring, because I have read too many similar novels, which are really pretentious, hypocritical and contrived.

After reading the introduction, normal people would choose CBA, right?

New authors always want to be unique, but as everyone knows, those who want to be individual are suppressed. As an author, you are a newcomer, but as a reader, I don't think you are. Don't do anything fancy, for the sake of your data. Of course, if you write for fun, please feel free to do so.

The name is too bad, it's better to change it as soon as possible. Because the protagonist is actually not bad at all, and he has to get along with everything.

It felt pretty good at the front, but it was very sudden when I saw the mutants popping up halfway through.

I think it's pretty good. If it continues at this level, it would normally be a high-quality movie. But at the moment, I feel like it's not interesting enough (fighting, characterization, main plot, hidden plot, climax, etc.) And I can't point it out. Maybe there is still an attractive goal. The protagonist's current goal is to avoid trouble, use the system, and try to protect himself. It would be almost boring to write it for a long time, but to be honest, it is difficult to write new ideas from the perspective of the goal. Someone has written about becoming rich, becoming powerful, becoming a boss behind the scenes, or redeeming the role...

It's really a mess. After watching it for a long time, I felt like I hadn't watched it.

Just reading the introduction, what makes you think that anyone can be strengthened by the serum? The comics and movies have made it clear enough. There are requirements for serum injection, and not everyone can bear it.

How long will it last? Will he be a eunuch? 😁

The protagonist now has a super stomach and food cells so that he can continue to become stronger by eating food. The best style is also towards the Taijutsu style, introducing a system with a higher upper limit such as Qi or Microcosm. Forget about illusions such as the Sharingan, just add the ability to increase dynamic vision and nerve reaction speed.

Oh my god, can't you sustain one chapter a day? Stopped updating?

Everything else is okay, but the writing is very wordy. I can't imagine what the scene will be like after it's put on the shelves.

Thoughts after viewing: It doesn't seem to be messed up