Immortality: One Lot for Each Day of Life

I don't care if you bring your family or not, but can you not be such a refugee? I'm tired of seeing it, and there's also a problem with the logic. If you become an immortal and still don't have enough to eat, don't wear warm clothes, and don't live long like ordinary people, how stupid do you have to be to be willing to suffer that?

In the mortal world, evil worship dominates. How do these mortals survive?

The writing is okay, but it's too slow, and I can't bring myself to catch up. I'd better wait until I'm fatter before reading it, and don't play the "why do you have to force me" joke? It's okay to play it once, but it's boring to play it every time there's a fight.

To be honest, the writing is okay, but why is the novel filled with such ignorant and clear stupidity? It's true that your protagonist was a college student in his previous life, but it's too much to be so brainless when he's already doing an internship. After all, isn't he unskilled in watching videos and playing games in class every day? What's the difference between working the night shift, drawing talismans, practicing swordsmanship, and refining qi? You have to think that you are a genius... When something happens, your mind will be confused... The protagonist is a low-level monk who can steadily improve his proficiency and live a stable life. He only writes about the ups and downs for fear of having nothing to do...

I'm really convinced, almost every chapter has the plot of missing a woman, but in Chapter 30, I still smell the handkerchief? ? ? ? So disgusting-_-||

That's all I've seen so far, so I won't comment on the writing, because it's not that bad, and the narrative is fairly organized. But! ! ! I came here to read the articles about cultivating immortals, not the articles about nannies! Do you think it's appropriate? You have been so arrogant, but you are so generous to your nephew and niece? You can change your name: The Story of Nanny Cultivating Immortality

Well written, so far. There are royal sisters, lolita, and young women; lottery draws, killings, and talisman drawings are all done; but with the family, it is difficult to be free and easy in the future. The nerd who is just starting out in society is well portrayed. He is sensitive but clumsy in the world, which is relatable. Come on!

The output looks like a pornographic film, a serious shooting scene, when will it be edited?

It looks like it was written by two people before and after it went on the shelf 😤 You can read it before it goes on the shelf.

The writing is good and the inner activities of the characters are described very realistically.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down, work hard and encourage each other 😁

This book should have been updated 5 times just yesterday when it was put on the shelves. Due to an operational error, I can only update this much today. Anyway, I have never seen anyone update it before it was put on the shelves.

Very well written

Well done, I vote for another monthly ticket, can I add more updates?