Zhutian Game Panel Starts with Xiaoao

This is just my opinion on the dozen or so chapters I've seen so far. 1. First of all, system flow, although it is badly written, there are still many books that give a different feeling. This book has a very conventional system flow, and even every task is arranged for you, which is very troublesome. Then whoever you meet will trigger what task, and what plot will follow will be clear at a glance. It can basically be classified as the main line type. It's not impossible to follow the main line, but it seems that there are no new ideas at the moment. Let's wait and see in the future. 2. Judging from the tasks released by the system, the protagonist's behavior is determined by the system, and this is a wish system, so the protagonist is trained as a nanny and highlights the attributes of a tool person. Such a protagonist is probably not likable. Most people still want to see someone travel through time and experience their own story in a book, rather than be the nanny of a plot character. And the task is quite simple, to solve it by force, to solve it by force, or to solve it by force. Wishes can be written, but they should not be written one after another, just like doing tasks. I think a world should have one big mission and two or three smaller missions attached to it, so that there is room for free play. 3. The protagonist description, character description, and plot description are all relatively weak. The protagonist currently seems to be a majestic and upright person, even a bit like a virgin. Well, the character is quite thin. Maybe it will be different later. Currently, Wei Guangzheng's character designs are no longer popular. The ones that are popular are mostly funny and shady characters who don't care about the original work. Yu Canghai, I have practiced the evil-repelling sword manual. Not to mention how long I have been practicing the evil-repelling sword manual. The protagonist has the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms. It is much stronger than the evil-proof sword manual. I remember correctly that the martial arts evaluation is the best in the world. How about beating Yu Canghai and drugging him? Are you confused at this time? Finally, the plot seems to be as smooth as playing a game and completing tasks with automatic pathfinding turned on. This is probably the first book for newcomers, so I can practice my skills and hope for good development. The most recent Infinite Martial Arts book I read was Gu Long's Melon-eating Swordsman. The score in that book was not bad. The author can see if he can learn anything. I wish you a bright future. If you write well, we can see you again in the future, or... We will never see you again

The feature of the game panel is upgrading. You can obviously redeem items by completing your wish points.

How about changing the title of the book? I work as a nanny in all the worlds

Thank you brothers and sisters for your support. The work has passed the contract review and will continue to be written.

I guess you are still struggling with signing the contract. Probably thinking that no matter what, if I keep writing, if I write hundreds of thousands or even millions of words, I will always be able to get signed. People who have experienced it will tell you that this is wrong, and it will never work if you follow this path. Sign the contract first. Because signing him is not the signing itself. But the editor, after reading hundreds or thousands of books, will judge the value of your book based on his own understanding of the content and market of the book. That's why many people say that signing a contract is only the first step.

Poor writing and ink, inappropriate details, unclear narrative

After reading these chapters of Xiaoao, it's not bad, but Zhutianliu needs more words to make it readable, so go for it.

It doesn't look good if you don't make a living, it's fun if you drag everyone together to perform the Emperor's New Clothes. Specifically, it's the kind of deception that comes from the Dream Master.

Does the author plan to sign a contract for this book?

🤓👆 Give it a try, although the introduction doesn't look good, hey, I hope the protagonist of the story is a savior who can clearly distinguish right from wrong, doesn't drag out the plot, and kills when he needs to, OK, let's try it

On the first panel, why is the wish value displayed as O? Numbers are just numbers, letters are just letters Does it affect the look and feel a bit, or is it just O?

Comrade Author: Is this a novel?

I've written so much that I voted for a monthly vote as an incentive.