Perfect: After Becoming a Fairy from This Mortal World, I Went to the Lower World to Fry Fish.

Your introduction is weird, why are Shi Hao written between the lines? That's not to say you can't mention absurdity, but you have to at least give a rough idea of ​​who the protagonist is.

The poet holds this introduction, the author has been deceived

Author, you are on fire. Poor baby, was deceived by the seller

I feel like the author is Yun. He actually said that Liu Shen was the giant in the original ancient world, and the True Dragon of the Six Paths of Endless Realm was just the top one.

In the original work, there are no more than 10 people who can become Red Dust Immortals. Many fans wholesale Red Dust Immortals. What Liu Shen needs now is to regain his strength as soon as possible. It is only more than ten years before the Immortal King of Foreign Lands knocks on the pass. I remember that in the original work, Shi Hao was in his 20s. The Immortal King of Foreign Lands attacked Nine Heavens and Ten Lands and kidnapped Suizhou. You don't remember many details. There are also immortals There is another level for the king to break through to the quasi-immortal emperor, which is the Emperor Light Immortal King. The Butcher and the Burial Master are at this level. In the original work, Liu Shen breaks through to the level of the Immortal Emperor, and the ruthless empress breaks through to the sacrificial level. It is clearly stated that the empress can break through to the sacrificial level if she has not accumulated enough. As for the finale of Duan De Shengxu, she also breaks through to the immortal emperor level. In fact, it is like If you want to write a perfect fanfic, you need to pay attention to the fact that there is no shortage of immortal material in Nine Heavens and Ten Earths, and there is no shortage of the kind of death that leads to rebirth. I remember that the Great Elder who guided Huangtian Emperor to become a seed in the Saint Ruins finale is also a quasi-immortal emperor. In the perfect finale, the Great Elder is an Immortal King, Huo Ling'er has also broken through to the Immortal King, and Liu Shen is currently Nirvana. To restore your own body and cultivate the light of your own Emperor Light Immortal King, and then break through to the Quasi-Immortal Emperor, you can only provide an idea. How to break through requires your own talent. In the original work, why the method passed down by Emperor Huangtian does not have the sixth secret realm? It is because he is worried that his own path will be blocked and the successors will break through to a higher realm. Therefore, the sixth secret realm is different for everyone.

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To put it bluntly, the Red Dust Immortal can wander around in the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths, but he really can't pretend to be in the Eight Realms. There are a bunch of old and immortal immortal kings lying underneath.

Currently, there are many supreme beings in the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths, but there are no strong ones who have broken through to the immortal realm. The Nine Heavens and Ten Earths were crippled in the Ancient Immortal Era, and the great path is lacking. After all, you are not Shi Hao and Ye Fan. The ruthless empress and others can reverse the ninth life. Basically, according to my estimation, even if the time traveler can successfully reverse the ninth life, it does not mean that it will help. Others can live nine lives in reverse, because it is too difficult, but if you go further on the road of the Red Dust Immortal, even if it is not perfect, at least it is not difficult to break through the Immortal King. What I am more curious about is how to deal with the powerful Immortal King. At present, you, the Red Dust Immortal, the time traveler is between the quasi-Immortal King and the Immortal King. It is basically impossible to fight against dozens of Immortal Kings in foreign lands.

Hmm, I don't know what I want to say. The author's plot really left me speechless. Should I say shameless or confident? After thinking about it, I can only say one word "six"

Come and take a look. I heard that an author was deceived by someone selling online courses. Come and take a look.

No, you have to accept a disciple when you see someone. Forget it, number ten. This is the future Immortal Emperor. Is it necessary for others? What kind of Kunpengzi, a girl with double pupils, whether she is a giant in the future or a supreme immortal king, is it necessary to accept her as a disciple and bind her relationship so deeply? Rare things are more valuable, which will make pig-footed disciples look cheap. You don't have any system to insist on accepting disciples. Not to mention if they fail, will you accept every one you meet in the future? Will you also accept the great elder Meng Tiangang? This future will be a quasi-immortal emperor. It's all boring. Recruiting disciples is the main line of this book. From the lower world all the way to the sea, I can imagine the "spectacular scene" of hundreds of disciples in this book.

The iceberg fog writing method is suitable for old authors. These authors have a certain following group of readers. After enduring the last fog, they suddenly discover the truth and will have a sense of accomplishment. This is the true meaning of Iceberg Mist, which is to refine fans and increase stickiness. Come on, author, I believe you will get better and better as you write!

Do you accept Yue Chan, Huo Ling'er, Yun Xi, Liu Shen, War Goddess, Witch, Yao Yue, Wang Xi, Yue Liu, etc.?

Why not be more bold and write about the immortal emperor or the priest coming to fry the fish pond again? As long as the writing is not bad, it will be more interesting.

Looking at the introduction, I thought there would be several figures standing behind the protagonist, watching him smile there.

The author should resolve the matter of sin and blood! Even if Shi Hao is planning to let the immortal creatures become stronger and settle the matter himself, he can first improve the living environment of the descendants of the Seven Kings, clean up some complicit sects, and bring back the descendants of the Seven Kings from the Border Desert Imperial Pass and the original imperial city. When I first saw what those immortal families and great sects in the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths were doing, I felt moved. It's disgusting. It feels more like a villain than a foreign land as a villain. If Shi Hao hadn't been such a beast in the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths, he would still want to make a comeback, slandering the descendants of the hero and treating them as sinful blood. They are the real sinful blood. I hope the protagonist will not let them die so happily. It is best to beat the descendants of their family as sinful blood to atone for their sins for the rest of the world.

Doesn't the author update ten times a day? What to watch in the first update?

Is there a female protagonist in this book? If so, she's like a witch.

I think other fan fictions have said it well. The original ancient world, the predecessor of Nine Heavens and Ten Earths, is no worse in strength than the foreign realm. There are dozens of immortal kings in the original ancient world. However, the original ancient immortal king is too upright and gentle.

I have read novels, and it seems that the situation at that time was that the real dragon felt that he was invincible, and was ambushed by ten or a few, and was killed; reincarnation was killed by a wheel battle. When Immortal King Wu Zhong saw this situation later, he rushed into the foreign land and was beaten to death. Liu Shen was not there at the time. When he came back later, he was so angry that he rushed into the foreign land and was beaten into the lower realm.

The original work is unclear. But follow the logic. Liu Shen came back directly from the Boundary Sea to kill foreign lands. Or because he was tricked like Shi Hao and was blocked in the depths of the foreign land by the Immortal King of the foreign land. He could only keep charging and killing, and finally only escaped with a little dead wood. (To explore the Boundary Sea, you need to leave a mark in the original world before you can find a way back. But the mark was dug up by a foreign land. Liu Shen will have to fall into a trap as soon as he teleports back... Otherwise, it stands to reason that Liu Shen cannot be stopped...) There is also the Red King who killed Tianjiao across the long river of opportunity. Those with potential were immediately marked and disappeared. In just a few million years, not a single true immortal has emerged, and even the supreme ones are pitifully few. . . It wasn't until he caused a big karma and was beaten up by a ruthless person that a true immortal appeared in Shi Hao's generation. . . ) . . .

I'll write slowly in the future You can take two months off, author, don't be a pig.

Brother, have you changed it? Several of the books I followed were either discontinued or getting worse as they were written. . . It's all up to you!

Author, are you sure who the heroine is? I just came here, so I don't know.

Personally, I feel that there are too many descriptions. Whether it is people, skills, or appearances, they are all repeated. I personally feel that you are a bit annoyed by the number of water words.

You are just a red immortal, and Liu Shen is a giant of the immortal king, but he has not recovered, making you a red immortal really invincible 😰😰😰