Granted Immortal Office, Ascending to Immortality

What the hell is it from an apprentice to an immortal? Isn't it okay to be an apprentice to a seeker?

It's okay, but the plot arrangement of Brother Shao is not very good. It was too blunt. No normal person would seek death like that. His son had not grown up, leaving him an orphan and a widowed mother. I know that the author arranged the plot this way to let the protagonist grow, but in fact this growth is actually irrelevant.

So disgusting? If you don't write any statement and just stop updating, who will order it?

It's good to want to create conflict, but you have to consider the rationality. The last few posts I've written are really messy.

There's nothing wrong with the writing, but the plot is a bit too bland. The clear soup is watery.

Rnm Refund😡😡😡😡😡

Brother, after the protagonist Nascent Soul's magical powers are unfolded, it doesn't feel very cool to write "magnificent palaces and pavilions slowly emerge from the void".

Ninth level of Qi training, never had a fight, zero fighting experience, participated in the inner sect competition 🥵

It's okay at first, but as it gets closer to and after it's released, it loses its appeal. It feels like tasteless

See it and evaluate it now. What keeps me going until now is actually my writing skills. There is basically nothing to say about the feeling of pleasure in this novel. What I can sum up now is that anyway, I always feel that there is someone more awesome than the protagonist "although it may take the protagonist 180 years to surpass". It even feels like the protagonist has a peaceful mind after cultivating immortality. It is not as interesting as the secret cultivation of Gou Wang or Han Laomo, nor does it have the feeling of pretentiousness like Shuangwen, and there is nothing pretending. I felt that the fighting was barely enough, and I didn't even feel that the essence of it was played (here I will talk about one that I remember deeply. The protagonist and his group returned to the sect. They fought to death, and then the enemy stupidly knew how to fight until rescue came. In the end, someone in the protagonist and his group seemed to have his arm broken.) I admit that the author's writing is good, but the plot is really unsatisfactory.