White Dragon's Plane Wandering

When I read about dragons, no matter whether they were men or women, they were all black dragons... Are there no other dragons? Or are the time travelers not worthy of becoming other dragons? (Voice-over: Actually there are still a few red dragons...) (Me: Shut up!)

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you read the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously formed, and the voices of praise became louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the attitude of tolerance is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates. So how long has it been and you are still trying to catch fish without updating? Are you doing this justice to everyone?

Seriously, buddy, read it after you finish writing. There are too many typos. If you correct them, the quality of your work will be improved in no time.

Although I picked up several clerical errors in the comment area, I really like this book by the author. There are very few articles about warlocks, which makes this book even more precious. The various interactions and daily life between the protagonist and the goblin master are also very interesting (the heroine is basically confirmed). I hope the author will keep writing. I will keep reading. Finally, let's look forward to it. Since the title of the book has "Plane Wandering", it should go to the outer planes, and Utopia, Mechanical Realm, Joseph's Garden, Sea of ​​Chaos, Twin Paradise, etc. Will also appear. 🥺 Many books only focus on the Nine Hells and the Abyss, which is a bit boring.

Monster Manual

This book is still very interesting, but the author focuses a bit on the plot and not on the characters. Let's first analyze the audience. They like to read DND novels, especially those with non-human protagonists. What do they want to see? 1. It's cool because the protagonist can become stronger along the way and fight monsters to level up. This part is far from enough. The protagonist is still fighting various monsters in the wild, and the battle is really not attractive enough 2. Adventure, Dungeons and Dragons. With dragons, there are naturally dungeons, various strange monsters, and epic stories. This part is not done well enough. In the early stage, it should have focused on describing the growth of the protagonist, and gradually revealed the turbulent undercurrent through the actions of the protagonist. However, the author is more Promoting the development of the plot through the perspective of NPCs or even enemies is a bit putting the cart before the horse Another point is that our protagonist has his own camp prematurely, and started running his own team in his youth, or even as a young dragon. It can be said that the protagonist's pace has been slowed down. As a dragon, he could have soared in the sky, witnessed the magnificent other world, dealt with various legendary figures, camps and even demigods. He would not consider starting his own team until he reached the adult dragon level and touched the threshold of legend. But now the young dragon has become the leader of a small tribe, and the leader is still a creature like the goblin. It can be said that it is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. I can only say that the world of dnd described by the author, or the angle, is not what I like, so I will keep it for now.

When I read Chapter 7, I felt that the bug was so serious. The magician's ability comes from the sect master, which is essentially a kind of borrowing. It is impossible to break the contract and can also cast spells.

On the other hand, I also suggest that the author first conceives the subsequent plot and writes and draws something. Otherwise, if he stops, he may not be able to continue writing. If the fracture is broken, it will not heal for more than a month. Perhaps the author should consider whether to continue writing.

It's another type that starts causing trouble in its infancy. As a dragon that can live for thousands of years, I don't know what it's worried about. Why don't you eat, sleep, eat and jump to a young dragon before going out? Longwen's benchmarks "Green Dragon's Nest" and "Red Dragon" both start their major plots when the young dragon is a young dragon. This is reasonable. As an adult, you can't start fighting monsters and leveling up from a baby, right?

I hope it's not a garbage collector's farm work. I already have 5 dragon books like this on my bookshelf. I really don't want to read them anymore.

It's a pity, there are very few dragons that don't become lords and don't stack up.

Why did the book about Lord Dragon have such a title? I thought it was a fantasy adventure.

I know you are going to be a eunuch, so let's send out the synopsis and see how it ends.

The author, dragons already have advanced professions such as the God-conferring Dragon, the Blood-Scale Fury, and the Skin-carving Dragon. I hope they don't add any weird things, and take your time and don't advance without thinking...

Come and cheat, come and sneak attack, deceive young and ignorant little goblins, is this okay? This is not good.

How are you, author? Can you update next month?

What is the main line? I was a little confused after reading the first ten chapters. The fantasy world completely uses dnd data, which feels so rigid and a bit out of place. Accurate numerical values ​​bring quantifiable improvements, but a realistic fantasy world cannot be like game data. This is a contradiction.

Is this book too cheap? Does the author still write?

Is the author still there?😭😭😭

Is the author still there? It's almost time for another update of this book, right?