Faerûn: the Magic Eye Warlock's Journey Through the Heavens

But there is only setting. The writing technique is quite bad, the writing style is poor, and a large amount of information cannot be given in an organized manner. Instead, it looks like a bunch of colors thrown together randomly.

Summon characters, but there is no guarantee of loyalty, easy to make money

The protagonist should be a warlock rather than a priest. Although he is a god from another world, he feels more like a patriarch. The priest profession relies on perception, while the warlock relies on charm. If not, the priest profession has no sense of existence now anyway.

I feel that there are too many written from other people's perspectives. When reading other novels, they usually focus on the perspective of the protagonist, interspersed with other people's perspectives. You have too many plots in this accessory, and they are added too fast. There are so many named characters that I can't remember who they are, so I just skipped through them.

There are too many perspectives of supporting characters in the early stage, high-level perspectives of both sides, everyone has a plan, blablabla. The problem is that it is not used at all. You spent a few chapters describing what kind of big storm the protagonist is going to be involved in, and then it goes back in time. Are you sure that the readers will still remember the names and events you laid out before after reading the copy of these dozens of chapters?

The setting is quite pleasant, and there are all my favorite characters in the introduction. However, I have never played Baldur's Gate, and there are so many complicated relationships in the beginning. I read about ten pictures of the characters and their backgrounds, but I still have a vague understanding of them, and I was very impatient to read them. If you don't know me, I'll start with another paragraph that I don't know, and then I'll add another paragraph that I don't know. That's not how I write novels. I was able to read more than a dozen chapters sentence by sentence just by relying on the melody and God's Prosthetic Eye. I'm almost done with it now, so I'm posting this comment.

There are too many chapters written in the main world. There are already 46 chapters and there is no second copy. You have to remember that you are investing in the infinite area of ​​​​the heavens, not the fantasy or fantasy area.

Gold and silver are also valuable in Faerûn. Why not search for gold and silver in the apocalypse?

I saw a pretty girl and a demonic appearance in the protagonist's information, but it was not reflected in the reading at all. Whatever I saw required a test, but in the story many people communicated with the protagonist normally unless the protagonist used the charm ability of his eyes. Are these two specialties a bit redundant? If there is a reward for collecting magic eyes, should the ones artificially created by the protagonist count? Before going to Apocalypse, I created two kinds of magic eyes. Not only could the protagonist not add them to his own magic eyes ability, but he also had no rewards to collect. He could only use them as magic props, which felt a bit weird. In terms of recruiting girls, I think the protagonist only accepts certain people. I feel that it is a bit risky to accept girls in a comprehensive comic and miss out. For example, if you feel that you are missing a girl, or your favorite character has been missed. Also, can Melody give me a picture of its original appearance? Just talking about how beautiful she was before she was cursed. I haven't watched Full Time and when I searched, I could only find a bald man with big front teeth. It's a bit unbearable.

The plot is too dry. I was so confused that I slipped away.

It feels okay, and the problem with other viewing angles is actually not too serious. But you have to pay attention to the feeling of drawing a character and taking a character through time. It is best not to have any controversy about the character you choose. After all, some people like the characters and some people hate them, and the melody is quite good. Personally, I don't really like Academy Apocalypse. In comparison, I feel that the main characters in the daily series are stronger than some controversial characters.

I feel like I haven't delved deeply into the system of each world. There is no collision between systems. It was the same before in the modern world. Normally, shouldn't I buy a computer? In the world of Faerûn, we only use raw materials from other worlds to utilize its original system in the world of Faerûn.

The writing style from 20 years ago is too retro

The final analysis of all problems is that the update is too slow, causing other small problems to be magnified ten times. The slower it goes, the more these problems become unbearable.

I don't really like this kind of plot that takes people through time travel and draws characters.

None, single, many? This way everyone can save time. Just don't tell a good story. Everyone has different interests and is too lazy to debate scriptures.

It's okay, but the Hokage is a bit out of place.

Tell the author, if you plan to write a novel that can only be read by a certain type of person, you are destined to not survive 🙂 100% of the time you will either be a eunuch or die violently. Your animation is okay, but DND is too heavy on the audience. After a long time of reading, everyone will not be able to understand it except those who understand it. Do you think people will subscribe to it after you put it on the shelves? Can you finish writing for a small number of dnd readers without subscribing? It's like how few well-written novels about running groups can be completed!

I'm so tired of reading this book. I don't know what's behind it. The first part is almost like a group portrait. The main character disappears from several chapters and a bunch of background characters appear. I can't even remember them all. Moreover, the author occasionally writes the wrong characters in the front and back.

It's normal. It's just that the writing is a bit bad.

It's a pity, I'd love to see it if I had eyeballs. It's a pity that the author's writing is not clear and a bit confusing. Have to read the comments. There is a reading threshold.

The monthly vote has been cast. To be honest, I don't know how I came to see it. It's somehow to my liking. I hope the author will keep writing 😃

The financial system is weird. Sometimes it's valuable and sometimes it's worthless.

Psychic is 100% niche. How can it be compared with FGO? The same goes for the Chainsaw Man world and the Amazing Story world after the author's introduction. Niche worlds should develop fast travel. The faster the better. Only famous worlds are worth writing about.

I just found out that this book has also been voted for next month. I hope the author will persevere.

There are a lot of typos in Chapter 389

How strange. Medicines from other worlds can be taken back to your own world for use. Why can't gems be used as magic materials?

Both Xingyue and Hokage have a lot of things to pick up. It's worth a trip to get the female characters by the way.

There are hundreds of chapters, how come the number of discussions is so small?

Come on