From Undercover Konoha to Me Being the Hokage!

In the final analysis, Naruto is a setting where great power belongs to itself. Spending too much energy on describing political battles will only make people bored. Political battles can be written occasionally, but they are definitely not the main theme. The protagonist's current strength can be said to be invincible under the Six Paths. It is quite difficult to play house with a bunch of people who have no super shadow strength. This book is quite good except for the political battles.

After reading just a few chapters, I can tell that the author's writing style is sophisticated. Not like a newcomer. However, I have a question. The author has created so many original female characters, so why do he still write fan fiction? At the end of the writing, the protagonist is surrounded by original female characters, and none of them are the original female characters! Then write about fellow Maoists? It's time to open a new original book!

The description shows that Minato Namikaze has super reflexes, has bullet time-like observation reactions, and is invincible in physical fitness. The two of them are evenly matched, but they can withstand the acceleration of the protagonist. Although it is wonderful, Minato himself is a squishy assassin. When his own advantages are suppressed, he is basically an ordinary ninja. How can I do so many things? . .

If Tsunade really wants to become the heroine, this book will become a stallion novel in the future. Two original works are enough, no more will be difficult to grasp.

It has been a little bit obvious since Danzo. He can also create a memory clone to squeeze out Yamato's role. He also forced Black Zetsu to take Uchiha Hikari away, and then let go of the three big wooden swordsmen. He couldn't even catch the Black Zetsu behind him, and even Nagato didn't kill him. It was too deliberate. It was too deliberate to strengthen the opponent. If Black Zetsu could run so well in the original novel, he wouldn't have been caught by Naruto and sealed with his mother. Borrowed from the alien. It is more reasonable for people to come and instigate a filial son to rebel. After all, for Kaguya, the threat to the family is much greater than that of the natives. Then there is a certain incombustible object and the author. The alliance of shells and barrel people has become active. There is no indication whether the Six Path brothers are asleep or not. Several other villages are not prepared to cooperate with an alien. The protagonist Fang is lazy and the hostile parties are united. To summarize, the writing is okay and looks good, but I don't know if it's a problem with the accelerated world line. The jump in combat power is too large. Writing Boruto's boss at a time when Shippuden isn't even available. It doesn't have the sense of satisfaction that the protagonist is truly invincible in the world, nor does the protagonist have a sense of accomplishment through his own training (it relies too much on the system). The most worrying thing is what will happen after the battle power surges too fast. Is there still a role for Naru Sa Madara? If a Naruto fanfic were to miss this part, it would have much less flavor.

Personally, I feel that the author should write less about political struggles, because these days everyone is arguing about politics too much. Unless the author is of a very high level, no matter how he writes, it will make people from different political factions unhappy. Emotional scenes and action scenes can be more intense, especially action scenes. There should be no Naruto fan series serialized more than this one.

There are too many original characters. They don't look like Naruto, but like second-rate Japanese comics.

To be honest, the plot of the Hokage's internal turmoil after killing the Raikage is a bit draggy. A few clowns are dragging their feet and causing trouble for a while, which looks disgusting. The protagonist has completely given up on the prophetic advantage of time travel, and does not collect Shennong, Tailed Beasts, and various ninja world things in advance. It all depends on the broken system. Otherwise, why do you hate the flow of the system? The author will not study the plot of Naruto and the foreshadowing of various theatrical versions, relying solely on the above stuff to make the plot watery.

It's a bit weird, that is, the protagonist always appears at the critical moment, and someone is about to die in the next second. Although this is more expressive, it is repeated too many times, which makes it a bit aesthetically fatigued 🙂 Theoretically, the protagonist is extremely fast and can reach the battlefield in less than a second. The enemy has to completely defeat him, and the protagonist rushes to the rescue.

Let me ask a question. Why is Boruto being scolded? One of the important reasons is that the protagonist of the previous work was overstepped. Readers are emotional and cannot accept it. Therefore, the plot of Boruto must be written steadily. The author must control it well as it directly crosses the big timeline.

I don't understand why everyone likes to make Tsunade the heroine. In the original novel, she is a grumpy old woman 😅

What is foreseeable is that as long as there are too many Boruto elements, Naruto stories will definitely be bad. This is the experience summarized after reading many Naruto stories, unless the ending is too early and hasty. Also, what is the main line of the plot, what are the sub-lines, and what are the hidden lines? There must be choices, otherwise the later stages will be absolutely messy and the viewers will be confused. If the main plot is to be the Hokage to save the world, and the sub plot is to create all kinds of senseless jokes in the harem and make jokes about Liu Bei, then it is already an unpopular level. If there are more such ambiguous plots, it will be even more disastrous. There are already signs of what I am talking about. Unless the role of the system and various messy system sounds are downplayed in the later stage, and the pull of romance is downplayed. You can have it but don't repeatedly jump around, pull left and right, and keep being ambiguous. Focus on the key points and ignore the plot to overturn Otsutsuki. Otherwise, fewer and fewer people will watch in the later stage.

Author, are you confused? Jinghua Suigetsu's ability is hypnosis, or the control of the five senses, not an illusion! It doesn't even affect the spirit! For example, Jinghua Shuiyue controls the five senses, allowing people to think that the ball of air in front of them is a person, and have normal conversations, interactions, battles, and even fights with this ball of air! But Flowers in the Mirror, Moon in the Water cannot make people stand there blankly and let their minds go through an entire fictional plot, nor can it affect the flow of time perceived by the target! That's Tsukuyomi's ability! Based on the original settings, Aizen himself couldn't achieve this effect! If used in combat, the difference between Mirror Flowers, Water Moon and Illusion is roughly as follows: Illusion: The enemy rushes towards you and releases a huge fireball, thinking that he has killed you, but in fact he is under the illusion and stands there without doing anything. The above plot all happens in the enemy's mind. Jinghua Shuiyue: The enemy rushes over, but in the wrong direction. The you he sees is not the real you. However, the enemy's body must have moved, and the fire ball must have been released. It's just not necessarily whether the target is right, and the perception of the flow of time must be synchronized with reality.

The setting of Goldfinger is obviously very interesting, but suddenly it becomes Jianzheng 🙂

After reading for a long time, I always felt that something was wrong. After taking a closer look, the author turned out to be a female author. That was no wonder.

Nowadays, the rules and regulations in the comment area are corrupt and there are traitors everywhere. This is precisely because of the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates ten thousand words every day, then the traitors will retreat in fear, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise from both Yao and Shun! I have heard that calves born in sheep pens do not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are in the online literary world and you often use your computer keyboard, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? Qidian is strong because it has inherited the etiquette and skills of its ancestors. Stop bursting, the pressure has nowhere to release, and instead you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues, great disaster will surely happen! The reason why great gods can earn tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is precisely because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say! However, Pujie cannot get royalties and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference! There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, memorials have often been made with very passionate words. If they are not passionate, they will not be able to move the actor's heart. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who were late, delayed, or late in updating had no time to feel sad about themselves, so they were drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them. I heard that in ancient times, there were half a hundred old women polishing iron pillars for several years, and they could eventually become needles. It is said that there was a bird spirit who spent his whole life just holding branches to fill the sea. Everyone who saw this article liked it, and everyone who read it said good things about it. Now that laziness has become a disease, can it be said to be reasonable? With only three chapters, can it be said to be wise? Is it allowed to have free time without thinking about updates? Sad husband, how cunning can the author's scheme be? It just adds to the jokes. Later authors were sentimental and did not learn from it, and future authors were sentimental about it.

Not Uchiha Nameless? Hikaru was taken later. How could he call himself Hikari when he was just released?

In fact, it's not a bad thing to finish the book about the dormitory stall early. I feel like I'm going to collapse. How can I write it later?

The outline, fighting, and plot of this book are all very well written. I heard that this book is written by a female author. She describes the cruelty of war and describes the character of the characters very delicately. However, this is why the book is written as a group portrait. The description of the enemy's behavior and psychology is so powerful that the reader is too involved, which highlights the cold-blooded and inhumane nature of the protagonist. For example, the author's cruel description of World War II, the psychological description and portrayal of the dead characters in various ninja villages, and the despair of the fourth Mizukage I just saw, I can't stand it anymore. Then the protagonist behaves strangely and has no independent opinions. Although he has been seeking to become stronger, he seems to be trapped in Konoha. The Ninja Village has been reformed for seven years, and the protagonist has become the strongest in the ninja world. He is still sent to do tasks by the village, and the daimyo nobles are still there, and they can even scold his team? ? ? Overall, this book is good in terms of combat and group portraits, but it is not a good read about the protagonist.

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I don't understand. This kind of writing is obviously much better than those with no brainer. Why is the result so much worse?

To be honest, this book's ability settings, combat descriptions, character portrayals, and plot deductions are all very good. Why is the score so bad? I didn't see this book until very late in my browsing list 😓. Is this book not included in Sanjiang? Can't figure it out. . . There is obviously a book with a similar name to this book but the writing is very simple and it can be read by Naruto😓😓

After cutting this one, are you still writing a new book while sitting down? The fashion value of combat power is still recognized👍🏻

This is already the best Naruto novel I have read recently.

The author's writing style looks so familiar. Have you ever written a book about Naruto being omniscient and omnipotent?

It's been almost a month. Author, you have to at least put together a chapter to wrap up, right?

Good looking, love to read, update soon

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Understand?

I have read dozens of chapters and it is quite good. The description of the ninja battle scenes is amazing.