The Martial God Begins by Tempering Flesh and Bone

What are you writing? At first, I saw you writing about minding your own business, but what are you writing now, about being a dog wagging its tail?

Ninety percent of them lean towards the Virgin Mary style.

La la la la la la~ I was so happy before I even went for it~

For those of you reading this, could you comment below? Is this book just another example of the ridiculous trope where a person's physical body is stronger than a sword, yet someone is also practicing with weapons? If so, please leave a comment and let me know.

I can't stand it anymore, it's too cloying later on, goodbye.

I hope it doesn't go down the invincible stat-adding path. The protagonist has opportunities that others also have. The world is vast, and the latest chapter is already showing that trend. An invincible protagonist simply can't be written for the later stages.

There are only ten chapters left until the latest chapter, so here are my brief thoughts. The opening follows the classic Extreme Demon trope, but the character of Li Ling is a bit awkward. The main focus of the story is on him, making him seem somewhat similar to the "Treasure Delivery Captain" or Hua Tiandu in *Eternal Life*.

Why isn't it popular? The author writes really well.

The writing is a bit too macro-level; it should be more realistic and focused on martial arts combat. Some plot points feel a bit vague and unrealistic, and the visceral, hard-hitting feeling from before is suddenly gone. Perhaps it would be helpful to take inspiration from Gun Kai's style.

The first 25 chapters were good, but the writing got increasingly simplistic and bland towards the end.