The Martial God Begins by Tempering Flesh and Bone

What are you writing about? When I first read that you were writing about being alone, what are you writing about now, being a dog wagging its tail?

90% Leaning toward the Virgin style

La la la la la la~ I felt so happy before I pounced~

Please let me know if this book is a SB routine where the body is more powerful than the sword but someone practices weapons. If so, please leave a message to let us know.

I can't stand it anymore. I'm tired of watching it later. Say goodbye.

I hope we don't follow the invincible plus point style. The protagonist has opportunities and others also have them. The world is very big. Now that the latest chapter has that trend, invincible can't be written in the later stages.

But only ten chapters are left to reach the latest chapter, let me briefly talk about my feelings. It starts with the classic Ji Dao Tianmo routine, and then the role of Li Ling is a bit awkward. He is mainly used to write this conflict. I feel that the positioning is a bit similar to the captain of the treasure delivery team and Hua Tiandu in Eternal Life. However, the positioning of this role is too low, and the number of times is a bit too much. It is not as brilliant as Li Lin's writing.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             The last thing is the feeling of the pacing and the character of the protagonist. I don't know if the pacing is because I read it too fast. I feel that the small events in the small dungeon are too dense. They are all conflicts and murders. It is so repeated that it is indeed easier for people to want to read. However, I feel a bit tired after reading it. I can use more side descriptions of conspiracies and so on, so I don't have to focus on the protagonist all the time. There is also the character, which is starting to go a bit. The feeling of victory, followed by a normal righteous protagonist. Sometimes the sense of justice in his heart is crazy and inexplicable. It reminds me of the immortal Fang Han, but it is much better than Fang Han. When I read the book, I was really afraid of him being beaten to death. I also think that the character should be consistent or slowly change. From the low-key and tolerant in the early stage to the arrogance now, I think it is a bit stiff and a bit fragmented. I just said a lot of nonsense, that's all, I hope the author writes better and better.

Why isn't it popular? The author's writing is really good.

The writing is a bit too macroscopic, it should be more realistic and focuses on martial arts killings. Some plots are a bit illusory. The feeling of punching to the flesh suddenly disappeared. You can also refer to the style of Get Out.

The first 25 chapters are good, but the more you write the more you write, the clearer it becomes, I feel~~