What Do You Want to Do to the Master!

The protagonist kills all the maid's family. I really can't imagine how such a huge hatred can be resolved unless the maid knows that the protagonist is not the bad person he originally was.

Why is this kind of inexplicable novel popular now? The protagonist's predecessor was a great villain, and then the protagonist was asked to subdue everyone who was harmed by his predecessor. Even if he had killed his whole family, and then he was killed by his predecessor, the current author just deviates from the scriptures and wants to create a magical track by himself, like that magical cannonball, Heaven's Road?

The washing speed was too fast, it was like stirring up a bunch of paste and stuffing it into the female character's head and washing it forcefully.

After reading dozens of chapters, the positive feedback is still too low and there are no rewards. The protagonist's strength has not improved but has become weaker. Then a bunch of legendary characters have appeared. It would be better to give staged rewards in a timely manner.

Is it the reincarnation of Lao Deng? Or is it a new author who imitates old books from the past? It's a legend at the beginning, but writing the plot later is a bit of a test of writing skills. After all, there aren't many levels later, so you can't rely on too many upgraded plots. In the early stage, it is pretty good among the same type. If you have the ability, insist on improving the quality, and the results will naturally improve later on. Don't be the most attractive at the beginning, and then the big ones will come later.

Anyone can understand the harem novel written by Chu Nan 😁

As I write, the protagonist becomes a native.

Um, the protagonist wants to clear his name? It's long been hopeless. It can't be cleaned up.

It felt like it was well written with all kinds of characters coming one after another. I read 70 chapters in one go. The plot is quite compact and the characters have many relationships. It's hard to imagine that the author is a newcomer. Recommendation votes and monthly passes are given.

Is the protagonist a slutty brat? Will he be overturned by the yandere, angry and powerful Grandma Ji and then be beaten to his knees?

The design is grand and the background is well set. You can open another account to sort out the plot and try again. Let's talk about the problem. The various favorability settings are inexplicable, making the male protagonist become a licker and unable to provide timely help to the protagonist. The setting should be simple, so as not to embarrass the male protagonist and at the same time gradually provide props to the male protagonist. Other flashback techniques are not suitable for online articles. For example, the acquisition of divinity should be directly narrated to let readers feel the function of the system. Some forces are inexplicably disabled. The tower mage's daughter is a big failure. She was able to break through 60 in one go. It's too crazy and too deliberate. The last and biggest problem is that the scene is too big, which leads to a lot of incoherence. We should appropriately reduce some extra words and focus more on the male and female protagonists. If the extra NPCs are temporarily useless, there is no need to leave too much words. For example, don't write too much about the whole story between the slave father, his son, and his son's master. If you can't control your writing skills, focus on the layout of the protagonist. At least it gives readers a direct sense of satisfaction

It's okay, but the plot of improving Tanrifu's favor is too casual. It feels like it is just to let the protagonist get the spell scroll quickly so that he can have stronger and more means to deal with the next enemies. I personally think it is a bad idea, and the foreshadowing is not enough, which leads to the decline of the story.

Although the character design is very interesting, in fact, it focuses on the late stage, the writing style is comfortable, and overall it is considered superior.

I'm here to introduce the poison, and I want to ask you secretly, is there a female protagonist?

Why are you doing this to me Author, please come back and update...

I quite like the pace of this book. Support it.

Let's create a group for the author. Although this book is too eunuch, it is still good. Create a group and we can give you a reference next time you want to write a book.

Is there a readership? I want to go in

This book is generally good, the background is relatively grand, the golden finger is neither too high nor too low, and there is room for growth. Before Long Dao Yi Meng, I had been following it, and it was considered a high-quality product. After Long Dao, I felt it was just food. I was cut without realizing it. Alas, there is one less book to read.

Coller

Although some details are a bit rough and the characters are somewhat stereotyped, at least they are not noobs and there are no major poisonous points. In the world of the popular rebirth game, it can be regarded as a novel with a relatively compact and exciting plot. Isn't the most important thing in a novel the plot? Everything else just serves the plot, so if this book sticks to it, it will probably be successful. Unfortunately, it looks like there is a eunuch in the back?

I have collected it and haven't read it yet. Even though I have ordered Eunuch, I have finished it. First of all, I would like to say that the author wrote this story well. Although the protagonist is a villain, the atonement part is not done. It feels good and has a good idea. However, it reads like an outline. The characters have no arc, not enough foreshadowing, and the appearance is abrupt. However, it reads smoothly. In short, it is good.

What's a group? Why hasn't the author created a group yet?

It's been almost a day since I finished reading and I'm still ranked 50th. This makes me feel insecure.

Short and weak🙂

I pinched a golden dragon Lily.