
Death Pirate: I Became Invincible in Both Worlds
死神海贼:我于两界开始无敌
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 208k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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After reading about ten chapters, it's really a bit... I don't read Pirates very much, so I won't comment on it. As for the God of Death, I personally suggest that if the author wants to write, it's best to read it completely before writing. Most of the people who come to read comic fan fiction are old comic fans. Old comic fans are very taboo about changing the timeline and characters of the original work at will - because it will cause drama. There are many shortcomings: 1. In your book, Yagirimaru and Ise become the same grade students, and Kunan Haku is already the vice-captain? ? And let her teach? ? What do you think? Can she teach? ? 2. In this timeline, Zaraki should still be killing people in the Zaraki District or Kusuka District. According to the timeline, the captain of the 11th Squadron is either Kariyashiki or Mole Castle. 3. The original work of Yagiri Maru is not that outgoing and has the performance of "getting drunk when seeing a male body". Although he has a hobby of watching the emperor's uncle (which was only found in the present world a hundred years later), he is actually a facial paralysis who can speak and do things neatly. 4. The reply does not have a number.
The problem is too serious. Lisa Nanao Aizen is placed in the same class, but the age issue is not mentioned. The main drama does not show any old intersection between these people. The answer is that there is no number and the number is added. It is inconsistent with the original setting to drag a few people into the world so early. It's consistent, and the setting of Inuyasha has to be inserted into it. In short, it doesn't have the flavor of the original work. Even if the protagonist is a time travel, other people should be living according to the original rules. The style does not feel like an original light novel. There are a few other points that I really wanted to complain about but I forgot about them when I closed the page, so I won't talk about them anymore.
The beginning is a bit confusing Lan Qi is not a human being, but he is not stupid The God of Death will only go to the real world for internship after his sixth reincarnation
The setting adopted by the author is very different from the setting known to the readers. In this case, it is useless for the author to just express his own opinions in comments or outside the book. After all, most readers read the book. It is better to find a way to explain clearly and cleverly in the book the reasons why the setting he adopts is different from the original work, or to write brilliantly from other places in the book.
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I'm currently reading Chapter 71, and it gives me a feeling like when I watched Japanese anime in the 90s, like Inuyasha's style.
I can't understand the direction of this plot. It's depressing.
I don't understand. The protagonist is a Shinigami through Inuyasha and then becomes a pirate through Tozen?