Gao Wu: Ultimate Sword

Tempering the body, opening the pulse, Qifu, condensing liquid, Youxing, and the moon, the condensing liquid only has a lifespan of two hundred, which is barely equivalent to building a foundation. It means that the quenching of the body and the opening of the pulse have not really begun to introduce Qi into the body, and the Qi Palace has just begun to introduce Qi into the body, and the condensed liquid is transformed from gas into liquid. At the same time, there are many things that can be solved in one chapter but cannot be finished in three chapters. The protagonist breaks through the eighth level of Tempered Body in one chapter, and the protagonist breaks through the ninth level of Tempered Body in one chapter. The first trial was written directly from chapter 23 to chapter 38 from beginning to end, and this does not include getting the news to go to the trial to get rewards. The second fantasy forest was written from chapter 50 to chapter 63, which does not include obtaining information and digesting rewards. The third cultist wrote from chapter 78 to chapter 88, which does not include entering the mountain, after the fact. Moreover, he killed a girl who had a crush on him in disguise, and then, regardless of his own safety, he exploded and fell into a coma. If that Huang Huang didn't care about you, would you have sent it, and then Nayu was taken away and became someone else's money-giving boy. Is this enough for two lives?

You are a loser every day and have no ideas of your own. How can you get around at the starting point like this?

It's a very simple story about slowly upgrading. It doesn't seem to have any problems for the time being, but this is also the biggest problem. The old template is really badly written. What you need is to find your own shining point, so why don't you just write an extremely boring first-level upgrading story. I don't object to liking the game, but very simple upgrading is the most boring. Even if you write a plot, because you need to level up slowly, your plot will be leveled due to your realm card, which will lead to a crazy increase in combat power, or if you write a lot of plots in a month and the main character will level up a little, it will make people think it is mentally retarded. I personally recommend not to use the old routine of step by step, which is not suitable for the times.

Isn't it better to combine talents with swordsmanship? It would be more cost-effective to learn a set of water swordsmanship and convert talents into metal, wood, water, fire, and earth. What's the point of separating talents and swordsmanship, which have nothing to do with each other?

Do you know why there are fewer people the further back you go? A trial is written from chapter 23 to chapter 38

It's hard to get ahead, I'll probably be on the street soon

Ordinary skills of other people's proficiency system can also be super powerful. This article is a bit picky. The basic skills are not easy to use. The better the level, the faster it will be.

I read it patiently at the beginning, and jumped at it in the middle to share my thoughts. Feeling shortcomings spiritual writing.                                                               Two talented writers may want to create a dual-cultivation of spells, which has no shortcomings, but it is recommended not to write like this if you are not a master. Many people who write hexagons tend to be biased as the plot develops. Unless the world adapts after all, concentrating on the development of a certain special ability is easier to write than the development of hexagons in most cases, looks better, and is more reasonable, because many resources are to strengthen a certain attribute. There is a book like Sword with a protagonist Fang Xingjian who is similar to a wolf, dog and bear (should it be?), But I think that book has grown too fast. If you write Ji Jian, learn from many well-written ones. If you learn three points, you can read some. Unfortunately, I didn't see it. I only saw that the students were pretending to be good but they didn't pretend well. You can see the extreme of the body, but the basic of the law is a separate system side by side with the world of magic, and there is a lot written about it.       ，，，，， Just leave the weak pretending step to the opponent's younger brother who has enough weight. It's a pity that this book doesn't have enough fun to grow up. There are no excellent teammates who stick to each other at the beginning (but there is an insignificant younger brother), and after reading for a long time, I can't write a distinctive opponent (the public face is there). There is help from the teacher, but I just can't write the feeling, the trust and the cordial relationship between teacher and student. The distance is too far (maybe because of the teacher in the early stage)

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down, work hard and encourage each other 😁

Due to some reasons for recommendation, 4,000 words will be updated every day during the new book period, and 6,000 words will be updated normally after it is released. Please forgive me.