Pirates: from Vice Captain to Undead Lord

Chainsaw Demon

Soda and Chopper

The writing is okay, but I'm very curious about whether people who have a role in the original work are not allowed to touch. After the Sand Crocodile is defeated, the sand crocodile does not need to be touched, and the same is true for those who encounter Blackbeard later. Even if they don't kill them, they can always find some reason to let them go. Is it because there are a few supporting characters that the plot of the original work cannot be copied? I don't want to kill you, otherwise you shouldn't write about it. It seems like a pretense, but it's only two chapters away.

Is there only one Nami? My personal hope is to add Robin, Hancock and Yamato to the harem

It should be pretty good if you keep it up and don't drop it. And I don't know why I always think of the protagonist as the dark-skinned, curly, and sinister guy from Maze Rice 😳 Also I always think of the protagonist's story ability as Anubis 😭 I somehow feel that the protagonist's route of running through Maze Rice with a dark underbelly, scheming, and an affable think tank, the king, and his deputy would be great. 😃 Even if it is black skin + Anubis ability, the two-year training period of the sheep can directly go back to Weiwei to explore the secrets of the ancient country (Such a big country, with several islands as wide as a river, a long history, and one of the founding countries, a lot of space for plot writing) ps: By the way, is the author a newbie? Or is it reincarnation/trumpet/studio?

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It's not the original work, so why can't it be done?

The protagonist's writing feels a little inconsistent to me, like what, a kind of deliberate passion, not pretending or anything, it's like a phantom feeling that tries its best to integrate into the world but wanders on the edge. MD can't tell. I don't know if it's my problem or the book's problem. The book itself is okay, maybe I am more serious.

Such a pure boat flow reminds me of the feeling of reading the One Piece time travel novel ten years ago

I hope there will be more female protagonists🤓

Looking at the resume, you can see how it is possible to go around in the Straw Hats. He provokes powerful enemies every time. The crew members are all lucky to be alive.

🙂You can also have an empress

I hate the summoning system, which is the kind that summons other big guys to be thugs. This makes the protagonist weak, and it is best to have the power be attributed to oneself.

The emperor sounds like a sausage seller

Is the author a single heroine or multiple heroines? I personally like beautiful ones, including Empress, Robin, Nami, Stussi, and Kalifa 😍

It's a pretty good-looking story about Ship Flow, but the single heroine is a little bit toxic. This is the age of pirates, and it's pure love! Support multiple female protagonists🙂🙂🙂

Uh... The subject matter is quite good and I wanted to watch it, but when I saw a single female protagonist, I immediately didn't want to watch it... I'm from the harem genre, or you can do it without a female protagonist. The introduction attracted me, and I'm afraid that for someone like you, who is neither good nor bad, say eunuch, you have a female protagonist... Not a eunuch, right? There are so many beautiful female characters in pirates, so you just have to play one 😄

I can't understand why Nami keeps hitting the hero, it's not funny at all.

This book about boating is okay, but the single heroine is a failure. No matter how hard you try to win Nami and Robin on a boat, you can give benefits to the protagonist to coordinate the plot. For other popular female characters, you either don't write about the relationship or write about the plot and then I like the protagonist, but I don't have to get on the ship. I just need to write down the story of the female character in that part of the plot. I just need to write a few sentences to show her appearance later, and it will be perfect. Then I will just take it all away when the ending is approaching. After all, the protagonist cannot sail on the sea for the rest of his life.

There is a bug. The sea rejects all people with abilities. No matter how you think about it, the undead can enter the sea. It is not frozen directly like Aokiji... I think there is a bug in Oda 😰

What book title should I change? The problem with your bad data is not the name, but the amount of updates you make.

Hey, why did you choose Nami as the heroine? It would be better to choose Luo Bin. Nami has been seen naked by countless people. She has a feeling of déjà vu.

Come on, come on. It seems that the writing is quite good so far. The atmosphere is very good. There is nothing strange about the plot. It is a normal hot-blooded comic style.

Um, I feel like there is a problem with the setting of this Devil Fruit. It is a phantom beast species of undead. As a result, the protagonist basically has no fighting power except for creating undead. The animal nature itself is very strong. It would be more reasonable to change this setting to a superhuman type.

There are too many protagonists, Luffy and Zoro, and they don't get the trials and growth they deserve.

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It's a pity, it would be great if it was Weiwei. I have never read a book in which Weiwei is the heroine.

Are there only plug-ins like fruit abilities?

The author has some skills, but I haven't seen any major breakthroughs so far.

Isn't Renren Fruit·Daozu's form more awesome than your skeleton?