American Comics: the Road to Becoming a God

The beginning is good, but it's already cheating. Why are you wearing the same clothes? Gone, gone

The writing is so fucking messy. It has the immortality ability of "Asian" and the telekinesis ability in "Hunter", and then the mutant superpowers and the 22 sequence abilities of "Lord of Mysteries". It's so damn messy. A similar setting is added to "Traveling 99 Worlds Simultaneously". Different parallel universes can travel through each other, and there is also a chat group setting that allows them to travel through each other's worlds, so it's so confusing!

Marvel has Cthulhu, but of course, there's a high probability that the author won't be able to write about it.

That's rubbish. The ability of pig's feet is so bad. Why don't you escape when you are a prisoner?

It's so confusing, with all kinds of abilities, demi-humans, Martian cockroaches, and what kind of superpowers there are, and there's actually a split version of myself in the back, so just hang up on the one who desecrated the stone monument alone, it's such a mess, please remember to read the next book soon.

I was very interested in it at first. When I saw the protagonist of the Apprentice Path and the protagonist of the Prisoner Path through the door, I felt a little frustrated. Then there was the Blasphemy Slate. I didn't use it the first time I got it. I had to go to the prison to use it after a few chapters. There were only three paths to choose from, imprisoning criminals and spectators, and then I chose the Prisoner Path. Why don't you add a thief, because there is a desecrated slate, but it doesn't mean that he can't become a Sequence Zero, and find a few more stepsons and stepdaughters to train them to Sequence 1, and be deeply parasitic, and then wait until the ceremony to become a god and replace them. You have to choose the prisoner path, which is a difficult path to become a demigod. The Sequence 4 ceremony requires a demigod mummy. Sequence 5 uses the head to fight Sequence 4?

The mysterious system is very explosive if you choose the prisoner path. The audience's ritual can be completed in ordinary society. How to do the prisoner path?

Originally, the abilities were messy and there was no cutting edge, but it looked pretty good. But as you write, you suddenly change into a different person. It's normal for you to write about the multiverse. From the moment you start to change into a different person, the book plummets.

It's too messy. The real plot only accounts for a small part. It's all written to advance the timeline. It's very poor. The author focuses most on the plot. He keeps adding settings to the protagonist and updating plug-ins. There is no rationality. It's very confusing. As far as I know, The following are: Demi-human bloodline (suppressed), hunter's thoughts (thoughts after death still make people turn into alien cockroaches from Mars, except for the protagonist's ability to hunt and kill the protagonist), mysterious journey (prisoner), and then a parallel world of himself appears, and he knows Tell all the protagonist's experiences and ask for the protagonist's help, etc... It's too messy, I keep writing about cheating, and at the same time, I keep suppressing the protagonist. The plot is all about hanging up and how to suppress the protagonist. When I encounter things, I am in all kinds of difficulties, and I can't think of what to use, and I don't There are exciting battle scenes, and the writing is used to introduce and create a sense of mystery. All the plots that focus on description, such as foreshadowing in the early stage, and more descriptive plot corners, basically do not appear later, and they have no effect. They are very contradictory and confusing.

Even if the protagonist has the ability to kill Japanese soldiers in 38 years, he will not kill them. Because the Japanese soldiers are just a small screw in the whole, they are useless unless they solve the problem of high-level officials, so they will not kill them.

The whole book is pretty good, it's enough food. Why do so many people criticize it?

Emmm One thing I don't like is that wearing the same clothes is not a big problem. But why do you want the protagonists to have different identities and names at different times? Your intangible separation of the protagonist's identity is a group portrait you wrote? If not, how do you let readers identify the protagonist and who to take his place? You will be a different person in a few chapters, with a different name, a different appearance, and even a different species. If so, all the protagonists have the same name and relatively similar identities, for example, they are all male. Perhaps it can also allow people to anchor the identity of the protagonist and substitute it. More than a hundred pictures, I don't even know who the protagonist is. Because you may suddenly have another person appear at any time, and then follow his perspective.

The writing is so fancy that the author wishes he could write the Mathematical Olympiad questions in the book. He probably thinks that the more people cannot understand it, the more awesome it will be.

The writing is quite messy 😂, but you still have to focus on it, otherwise it will be difficult for people to read.

Are there any novels about the mysterious sequence Goldfinger traveling through other worlds? If so, please send the title. Thank you.

Not updated? 😐😐

It's really confusing. Has the author read what he wrote?

Personally, I think the beginning of this work is pretty good, and it only starts to get exciting from chapter 16! The setting of split time travel is no longer novel, but the author's treatment is ingenious. No longer sharing memories and talents with ourselves in the mysterious space, but through the door paths among the twenty-two divine paths in the demi-humans and the Lord of Mysteries, so that we can truly meet ourselves. This is a lot of tricks! It can be seen that the author has put great effort into the characterization of each protagonist. The setting is independent and based on the sequence, age, gender, and circumstances, he strives to make each protagonist distinguishable by readers! The author's intention and efforts can be seen here. The only fly in the ointment is that so far all the protagonists' telekinesis abilities are [Mars Potion]. I hope that as the sequence improves, each protagonist's telekinesis ability can match their own path. After all, telekinesis abilities can be changed. This is my first post, simply because I saw the author's dedication to his work. As an old bookworm, I sincerely hope that the author can write better and better! Above

To be fair, I just want to say that the hammer here and there has exhausted all my interest...

Like the title, I hope the author accepts reality. What the hell are you writing? It's a mess. I can't even write a word well and I wear it everywhere. B raised, if you don't directly engage in massacre, I'm really sorry for the prison sentence.

Let me stop you, why are you so unhappy? I saw a lot of brothers getting on top😅️😅️😅️

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!