I'm a Outsider in New York

What I feel about this novel is that the title and introduction have nothing to do with the actions of the protagonist. Also, what is the name of the protagonist? Others call him Tom. However, the protagonist calls himself Gao Ning. Also, the protagonist has a system that can be understood, but the key to the mission is to save people. After all, the title of the book is Outlaw. I only read three books and that's all. It's not as good as a book I read before that I forgot the title, but in my opinion, it is much better than this one.

The cool thing about this kind of behind-the-scenes novel is that it is not exposed, hiding in the dark and annoying the enemy, but they can't find you and can't do anything to you (the image is like a keyboard warrior), and you use this to become more and more powerful, both in terms of strength and power. And the protagonist of this book was found out from the beginning that he didn't hide his identity at all, and someone came to the door and put a gun to his head. Alas 😐 I just hope that the author didn't write it like this just to let the protagonist pick up girls. He directly exposed himself just to protect women. Writing this way without the ability to save the protagonist's life is definitely poisonous. It's a pity and a pity😔

Brother, you are all a lawless maniac, can you stop staring at girls? I like it, so please stop pretending to be cool.

The book is pretty good, but I can't read it with my brain. You call the police and send the video to the police operator? How did you receive it? ? There is also global film and television distribution. Cinema tapes appear out of thin air, but why do people show this? If it is a direct replacement, how can others buy tickets to watch it 😅 Globally releasing a game is understandable, but releasing a movie is outrageous

Plant one picture and reap countless pictures the next month.

The first part was okay, but once it got to Supernatural, it was all over the place. I really couldn't stand it anymore. And do you want to highlight the protagonist's decisiveness in killing? Killing people without any reason, without any sense of mystery or strength of the organization behind the scenes. At first, I thought I was going to set up a killer organization that would be more powerful than the killer organization in Speedy Chase. Later, it became a quite big organization, but it was TND al-Qaeda, which carried out KB attacks. Are you really going to throw the reader's IQ into the ground and rub it against yourselves? There are too many bugs in this book, and there are too many unreasonable things. Author, you will know after reading what you have written from the beginning.

What would a eunuch do with so many female subordinates, disgusting readers

I rescued a girl and killed a gangster with a background. I thought the girl escaped from the wolf, but it turned out that this person directly made a movie. Does this mean he wanted to send the girl away?

When I read Chapter 66, the book was actually really good and I liked it too. But after more than 60 chapters, I quit when the protagonist ended up on his own. In the beginning, the protagonist used a game character to be behind the scenes by himself, which was great. Why should he end up on his own? Isn't it bad behind the scenes? Disappointed and gone. If you don't particularly like behind-the-scenes footage, it's actually pretty good. You can watch it.

Well, why did the author include the global release of movies and games in the early stage? Because the author's early setting does not require any exclamation points or similar things, what is the purpose of adding this setting? ? It's already good even if this setting is not needed, but this is a failure. Moreover, the things that the protagonist's avatar does and the people he comes into contact with are put on the screen and made into a game. What's the point of this? ? ? Really, this setting is a burden, the author is great!

It's like a joke, and those who didn't know better thought the protagonist was an invulnerable superman! It's too dangerous to be implicated in the protagonist's true identity everywhere. If you encounter an unreasonable person, no matter how many people are involved, you will be killed. Will the protagonist resist? If you don't resist to the death, you will be hunted down and the police will pay attention to you.

If the male protagonist is not named Zhang San, it will not be interesting.

Good guy. The author was directly criticized as a eunuch. . It doesn't matter what you write about them. Others see your good writing and buy it, so they come here to cause trouble. You are so good, just shut yourself off.

Equipment stores, what kind of winery doesn't have a handle? The connection with the main character is too close. Just like who in Gotham City has money to burn (๑˙ー˙๑) and heavy manufacturing and precision processing, the only person who meets the above conditions is Bruce. Don't treat people like fools.

I always subscribed, but it became more and more boring and I canceled it.

Has the author never seen a woman so horny?

The content of the latest chapter makes me have no desire to read it. Please change the plot as soon as possible, otherwise I will have no choice but to abandon the book.

Damn it, I came to the comment section when I saw the title of the book without even reading it. I just wanted to say: Is your name Zhang San?

Sorry, some of you here say that I know X attainments? Please read The Wandering Taoist, The Clown Game, The Plague Doctor... To have a rough understanding of what novels and this type of plot are about. The part about amusing children in the subway, wow, that is what I would really like to write. It is no exaggeration to say that people with a reflective mood can read it very happily. It is a pity that it is not written in a comprehensive way, but written in a more outrageous and exciting way. I think the author has probably conceived this a long time ago, right? Because of the style, including Santa Claus, the painting style is completely different from the previous plots. Although Santa For the Frankenstein chapter, I can see that the author is still a bit biased towards the traditional idea of ​​science fiction. In the end, it is just assimilation and reverse reasoning. In my words, there may be several alternatives. For example, save a big one and use genes to create a god, which will completely destroy the style of painting. Or it may be like fighting in the interstellar, with flesh and blood bases or mechanical life, and troops with different functions will come out. You decide. The hook itself is enough to support you to do a lot of outrageous and excessive things, but in the end you didn't try it at all. However, in my honest evaluation, the current Gotham story is indeed a little less "crazy" and a bit ordinary. I hope to turn it around and inherit the previous high. Okay, give me some financial support. Remember to add it. The current situation is at a low point, so I can only comment casually. I will give some suggestions when the level is restored.

Has any fellow Taoist tried poison? How about

It's okay in the early stage, but the time machine will collapse. You can't see the True Ancestor anymore

I really don't want to watch it. Please tell me if there's a new plot.

It's different from a lot of movies that you can't understand. Maybe you said that you felt comfortable watching it in the front, but you were disappointed in the back. But to be honest, I didn't enjoy it at all in the front. Although the writing is better than 90% of the novels, Some people say that the vampires are not good-looking at first. Indeed, the protagonist's vampire , missing... Well, the author, you are indeed not very good at writing, you don't have that deep-seated arrogance and overflowing momentum... In other words, you don't really look down on all living beings, including going to Europe. Later, you didn't write anything about the whole Europe being disrupted, and finally there was a big scene or something. It's a pity, Isn't it actually very simple? Advance the speed quickly, break into the Vampire Council directly, seize hundreds of ghosts, big and small, and make them kneel down, crush them if they don't listen, and then directly have a decisive battle, a big scene, bloodbath, then flatten Europe, is the impalement mission not written because of river crabs? Okay, I'm off topic. Originally, I was here to praise the author. I was so excited after seeing the scene between Joker and Loki. Picture, presentation, Setting, conception, From a professional point of view, this really requires a lot of attainments to write well.

The setting of a killer hotel in Gotham is a very good point, but it is a pity that there is too little content in this point... Maybe this can lead to a new book...

The succubus should have the ability to sign a contract, twist desires, and twist thoughts. I forgot to mention this before. I will give you another 20,000 coins to make a leader. I hope the author does not want eunuchs and can end the current one briefly and open an interesting new chapter. Then I I really want to communicate. I am also a writer, but I have forgotten that I have been writing for I don't know how many years. Such crazy novels are really rare these days, and people who don't understand can only criticize them. I'm surprised, why do games like Joker get so many good reviews, and games like Manga and Natural Disaster still get appreciative comments? , The Strongest Warden, um, almost the same type, with poor results, good results in Leap of Faith, 30,000 collected, and turned out to be a eunuch, Although the reflection writing method is criticized, it is quite satisfying to actually write it, I think about it, it is so one-sided, except for the writing Or you are not convincing, maybe other authors are jealous of your talent and ask people to criticize you, (hands spread) Okay, just make fun of it casually, Sincerely, are you not the least bit curious about how to write the angles I mentioned? Unconditionally explain until you understand, If you are willing, we can exchange ideas about the book I am planning to write... Mad Epidemic, maybe it can give you some inspiration, Well, I am still better at writing big scenes, at least I can write them well when I am in good condition, including fighting, and writing about madmen, I have hooked up with so many authors, and I won't just cheat you out of money or something, forget it. Yes, if you are willing to be aloof, I will give it to you, You search Adolf Kueminskes on a certain website, and then click the author ID to go to "Trajectory". There are a few short stories of mine in 2014. You can see my level. Okay, let's do it. I don't know if you are a fast-food writer. If you can't write well, you will change your account. I have written so much that I don't know if it is eye-catching. I am really depressed. Of course it's hard not to be appreciated.

This book is completely anti-human. It destroys and destroys from beginning to end. It is also insensitive.

I subscribed for just over one yuan, but I'm no longer interested. The author's speed is too fast.

It is also a pity that with so many subordinates, my shops are not exaggerated enough to improve the level of force of my subordinates. Why can't the shops enable the upgrade function and make NPCs stronger to keep up with the current plot?

. . I feel pretty good. I don't know why a large number of people suddenly came to write negative reviews. Then I felt like the author was going to cut it off 😥

The book about supernatural phenomena and superpowers crashed immediately. I went and read the previous ones in vain.