Who Said I Didn't Hunt Witches?

I am a bad reader and I don't know how to describe it, but the author can compare it Isn't there a book "Queen's Hypnosis" in the same period, this Wanding Before that there was a book "The More They Oppose", which is even more powerful "People's Book" and the earlier "Warlock" written by Tingri, they have the same subject matter as you The introduction is really embarrassing to you Look at how others started, you can't lose directly at the starting line Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The seedlings have been identified and are non-toxic and edible. I've read Chapter 15 and I feel it's pretty good. There's nothing toxic about it, so it's suitable for reading when you're in a book slump. Advantages: The setting is OK, the plot is smooth, the male protagonist is not brainless, and there are few typos. (You can even defeat about 80% of the newcomers at the same time in the outer station, but the starting point is the cradle of the boss and the grave of the newcomers. Silence) Disadvantages: 1. The plot develops a bit fast, and many things that can be written are skipped. 2. The comprehensive use of language and text is still not good (These two shortcomings are common for novices, and they will disappear after writing a few more books) Finally, welcome to the starting point, and I hope to see you become a platinum writer one day. Dog head

I will work hard to learn how to write characters and atmosphere...

I just don't understand why you just pushed it to me and then became a eunuch.

Dude, what's the use of your first witch pseudonym? You even forgot to give it a pseudonym in your latest update.

The male protagonist, who is about to die in 6 days, has an attitude towards the only way to become stronger. This is the first skill book he created despite clearly seeing problems in the process but still not improving it. It took about 45 minutes to improve and create the second one, but he didn't care.

Elano Iola

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More! 😁

Why was there so little movement after Elano was rescued?

There are not many people watching. A little scared. Let it sit on the bookshelf for a few months. Anyway, I am quite alone.

It's too messy and it's not successful. Try your best next time 😁

Speed, speed, two monthly passes

Don't let the author die. I'm so panicked if you don't update.

The author has great imagination and good writing skills. I visited with his work "Forcing Me to Cultivation of Demons, Right", thank you!

The author's writing style is somewhat lacking😓

The appearance of the episode is very poor... The main plot starts to drag out inexplicably, making it difficult to read.

Have you prepared the outline for your first volume?

Yes, it's a food grade. Except for the fact that most of the characters are thin and featureless, the overall plot context is very smooth to read.

Gkg😡

My grades are too bad, I'm afraid I'll lose my pursuit, so I'll keep my claws and come back to see when I have time.

Apart from anything else, isn't the character of the protagonist a bit too sad 🙂? I majored in character design, but I couldn't bear to listen to the literature, and I couldn't analyze and think. The description of the characters made me feel that the protagonist was as stiff as a puppet, and his brain seemed to be rusty and unable to move. In addition, the protagonist's attitude is like a big salted fish, with no subjective initiative - at least not visible. Is this how learning literature comes out? I'm afraid the author doesn't have any grudge against Xue Wen. I feel like a worker who traveled through time would be more personable than the protagonist 🙂 If this is the author's arrangement, I hope I can tell you. If it is an issue with the author's writing style, I hope it will be taken seriously. Also, sometimes pay attention to segmentation and read a long paragraph on the mobile phone. This experience is not friendly.

The extra is written by me, the ultimate newcomer, please be tortured