
One Person: You Cultivate Superpowers, and I Cultivate Pokémon.
一人:你修异能,我修宝可梦
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 179k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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91Chapters
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Under One Person: I Know Pokémon Skills
The awareness of fighting group monsters is too weak. When being surrounded by all enemies, all you lose are single-target skills, and you still have to use your self-created single-target skills that consume super mana. I saw that the monster group at least threw a few range skills to reduce their numbers, right? That's not too much to ask for, right? There is no need for poison-based skills. If you use a large-scale one to apply poison or hypnosis to them all, wouldn't it be more powerful? You will be stunned when you meet them. Don't you have strong self-creation ability that is suitable for single targets?
The imagination is very attractive, but the indigenous protagonist is difficult to accept. The writing is good even if you don't know the plot. The writing is not bad, but it does not screen the readers. The combination of Pokémon skills and one-person skills is not very good, and there is no real sense of practice.
The strongest trainer?
Liberation, the flamboyant whistle blows away one person, and a female archery assistant is killed in seconds. Among the four crazy ones, Dou Mei, Gao Ning, Shen Chong, Wantao, and Han Dan'er are killed. These are 6 people, right? How many seconds in total? This is still the time after the blessing of the source of energy Let's talk about before the protagonist travels Pokémon has unlimited physical strength? Can I keep using skills? Without planning? How did you become the strongest in the world before time travel? Is it the strongest kindergarten? The name is the kindergarten in the world
Where is Shennong?
Is there any fair evaluation of Shen Nong? Can you read it?
I haven't read the book yet. Apart from anything else, the setting is very novel. I'll read it when I have time.
The author writes really well.
It looks good, the plot is rich but not greasy, and it melts in your mouth. I will repurchase it next time ! ! Attached is a beautiful picture of Changli.
The protagonist seals Cowmon. The protagonist acquires the skill Milk Spray.
Some places are a bit interesting, while others are too self-proclaimed. The biggest problem is that the writing is too plain. What the author writes is enjoyable, but readers may not be able to enjoy it.
The Pokémon skills written are all stupid and crude attack skills. The essence is to discharge fire and grow grass, which cannot be compared with one person's skills. What about the special change skills compared to the one-person world? This is the highlight. Not to mention anything else, a feature swap can become a golden finger to support a book.
Another pseudo-traveler protagonist. You, a semi-native who doesn't know the plot, make it look like you haven't traveled through time.
I just saw that Chai is Lao Dou's biological son?
Not killing Xia He was too deliberate.
Write no less than one million words
Reincarnated in the dirty soil and finished writing. No less than 1 million words
The most annoying thing is that you have one thing in your mouth and another in your hands. Do you respect the original Pokémon books? You deliberately lower the level for others and pay a fee to write them well.
Did Wang also predict that he would suffer from cancer? Look at what you said, Wang was also affected by the Qi situation because Fenghou Qimen opened the formation.
After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel that there are several problems. First, is the protagonist designed to have no enemies? But the protagonist is designed to have no enemies. The various signs of backlash from the protagonist make people feel that he is not invincible. The author should set a goal or reason for the protagonist to become stronger, rather than just aimlessly. The first is to find people to fight, and the second is core skills. The Pokmon skills shown in Chai Chao's first dozen chapters are complicated, and appropriate skill development should be selected. I think it is already very powerful if you can develop one or two of the five elements to the extreme. It will be even more powerful when you can perfect all five elements. Strike power, and then there is the escape technique. To be able to fight, of course you must be able to run and chase. Gold escape, wood escape, water escape, all will do. At present, what makes me feel good about Chai Chao is his eternal body. It is not bad. The pursuit of eight strange skills is actually not meaningful. It is good to get one, but to figure out how to use it, it is said that art It's not overwhelming, but you have to be proficient. Looking at these one-person fandoms, those who pursue strange skills in everything basically don't think about how to use these strange skills, but simply collect them. Therefore, the development of skills must conform to the energy logic of the character, otherwise it will only feel that the protagonist has many skills, but is not strong. The third is the character creation of the protagonist. At present, I feel that Chai Chao is a bit too reckless and too brave, but his own strength is not yet there, so the character creation needs to be consistent with the strength and the creation of an invincible design. In addition to the invincible strength, the most important thing is the character, just like Naruto's class, and Hashirama, a He is domineering and scary, and he is very nervous, but he is reassuring. Different invincibles have different personalities, and it depends on how you shape them. The current protagonist has not made me feel the temperament of a strong man. Although he has strong combat power, I only feel that he is a reckless iron man, but there is no wise wisdom. Above