I Have a Cave in the Sky, Can I Live Forever?

I don't understand that the status of an alchemist is so high. Just because you become an alchemist will you be targeted? If the protagonist is revealed to be able to make alchemy, the plot will not advance. Most authors will find random reasons to deliberately suppress it, and then be persecuted. This is really disgusting. You are not a genius in alchemy, you are just skilled. So what if you expose yourself? It is obvious that there are many benefits to you, so you must suppress it.

In "Mortal", the elixir is as big as a "dragon eye". Many authors feel that it is too big for people to swallow. So there are elixirs the size of "human eyes" and elixirs the size of "ox eyes". I don't understand why the elixir is so entangled with the eyes? Is there such a possibility: The "dragon eye" in "Mortal" does not refer to the "dragon's eye", but a fruit called "dragon eye" (one size larger than a fingernail).

First, you have not popularized some simple common sense. For example, when you go to a new place, you need to know the surrounding environment, the prices of daily necessities in each store, and who are the neighbors. This is normal communication. For example, in alchemy, how much does your Qingling Pill normally cost, what year are the medicinal materials used to make the pill, etc. It feels like the book you wrote is incomplete. The world view is not well written

Too idealistic. Isn't space very versatile? I just introduced one who can farm, what about the others? You don't even have a formula for making elixirs. You listened to a few words from others and made it in one day. You are really a genius. Your speed is amazing.

Are there no spiritual fruits or other things that can improve your cultivation?

Chapter 10 Chapter 11 There, Dan Hui is illogical. It is not easy to make a pill, but is it difficult to break it down?

Maximize the development and utilization of the Immortal Mansion, such as finding some powerful physical spiritual plants to increase cultivation, and raising more spiritual insects and beasts to enhance combat power.

As for the alchemist you mentioned, I think the author's arrangement is very reasonable. A large sect like Xuanyang Sect has tens of thousands of disciples in the outer sect, and there is no shortage of geniuses with high understanding, because the base is large enough and the number is large enough. Why do you have no background and low Qi training? Will a high-level monk become an alchemist? There is no teacher behind him, and no resources to practice. Once exposed, wouldn't you tell them, I am a fat sheep, I have secrets, come and keep an eye on me? There is no foundation-building monk behind the pig's feet, who can reason with you?

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down, work hard and encourage each other 😁

Write a prosperous and exciting world of cultivating immortals, and introduce some different things, such as magical weapons that can speed up cultivation, instead of just elixirs. How about writing spiritual beads, as well as spiritual incense, spiritual formations, and spiritual meals. Write a high-end version of cultivating immortals. Don't present a poor and backward world of cultivating immortals.

The last few chapters have started to feel sluggish and do not advance the plot in any way. You can even skip directly without affecting the future plot.

So far, there are no major problems, but quite a few minor ones. Problems with details