Ghost Slaying Is a Technical Job

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Keep writing, you will be Jiangnan in the new era, Jiangnan who doesn't lick

If the brain waves match, this is a very interesting novel. The writing is good and worth looking forward to.

This may be the first time I have written a book, but it is definitely not the first time I have had a seizure.

The eldest brother is not only discharged from the hospital, but also has the funds to publish a book. The writing style is on par with the youth pain fantasy literature published in the past.

I stayed up late and saw it on the shelves. This book has its shining points, and some paragraphs are written in a very stylish way, which made me feel addicted. But there are many problems. The perspective switching in the early stage was like the seamless transition in the Return of the Monkey King. Suddenly, I was really defenseless, and there would be some interjections and other expressions from time to time. The order of the story was broken in this transition. It was not until the last two scenes of Chapter 40 that ellipses were used, and the narrative logic was much stronger than before. The character relationships and backgrounds are also relatively scattered, but this kind of slowly pointing out the background along with the article is a kind of writing style, and it depends on the individual. There are often missing words and typos that affect understanding. The above-mentioned problems are actually not big problems. After all, the logic is getting better. The narrative is not difficult to accept after understanding the world view. There are ways to correct errors and omissions. This book really feels like it is getting better as it is written, but they appear in the early stages of the book. If you ask me to evaluate it, I would think this is a good story. Compared with the quality of the story, how to make people insist on seeing the explosive points and excitement behind it will be a greater threshold.

Come on, author, love reading

Why do so few people watch it? It's so beautiful.

Don't die, okay? I'll give you the monthly pass

The writing is quite good, but it is too procrastinating and a bit chatty. I feel that the author is more suitable for writing physical books rather than online articles.