Cyberpunk: I Really Don't Want to Be Famous All over the World

After reading about twenty chapters, let me tell you what makes me feel uncomfortable 1. From the beginning to about twenty chapters, the protagonist has been killing and killing. Some people may like it, but I feel a little aesthetic fatigue 2. All the prosthetics on the protagonist are given by the simulator, basically giving up the cyberpunk characteristics of finding a prosthetic doctor to install the prosthetic body (this is a matter of opinion, after all, there is nothing wrong with it from a plug-in perspective) 3. In this book, the protagonist is the digitized protagonist in the game, but other characters are realistic characters For example: the protagonist is injured, Kuang Kuang gives himself blood medicine, and does not consider going to the doctor afterwards When it comes to saving David's mother, David's mother is knocked unconscious by the explosion shock wave (this can be seen from this is a realistic style), the protagonist wants to drag David's mother to find a prosthetic doctor (Lao Wei), So the question now arises: Why not give the opponent blood medicine directly at this time? Instead, go to a prosthetist? And David lives in Santo Domingo, which is on the south side of Night City. Lao Wei's clinic is in Watson District, which is on the north side of Night City. Why do he have to travel across most of Night City to see a doctor instead of going to the nearest drugstore to treat him with Rehabilitation on the hour? Then it's about weapons, because the combat style of this book is realistic (that is, if you hit a vital point, you will die), rather than data style (I hit you, and then the blood will be deducted according to the damage. The person will not die until the blood bar is deducted) In the case of realistic style, the weapon has a very dramatic description: DPS Everyone knows that DPS in the game refers to the damage caused per second, so what is the significance of this attribute in a realistic style novel? Assume that the protagonist has two "unified" pistols in his hand, neither of which has been modified. One of them is a garbage blank, and the other is a golden legend. First of all, according to the author's acquisition of legendary weapons in Chapter 13, and the description of using legendary weapons in Chapter 15, we can know that the DPS of legendary weapons is better than that of ordinary weapons. Secondly, according to general logic, it can be known that the same model of firearms uses the same type of bullets, and because the bullets are assembly line products, there is no big difference in the quality of gunpowder Finally, after we combine the above two "unified" pistols with DPS attributes and the author's realistic style, we will get the following Conclusion The protagonist has a kidney-cutting gangster wearing an ordinary subcutaneous armor prosthetic tied in front of him. The protagonist first uses a whiteboard-quality pistol to shoot the kidney-cutting gangster in the head. However, because the DPS of the gun is very low, it cannot penetrate the protection of the subcutaneous armor. The kidney-cutting gangster feels that he has been hit hard on the forehead, which is a bit uncomfortable, but fortunately he is not dead. In order to strictly control the variables, the protagonist first gave the kidney-cutting party a shot of recovery to restore his blood and allow him to breathe more. Immediately afterwards, the protagonist picked up the legendary-quality unified pistol and shot the kidney-cutting party again in the head. The legendary-quality pistol has a high DPS. The bullet penetrated directly from the front of the head and flew out from the back of the head. The kidney-cutting gang member who had two holes in his head died suddenly on the spot, and there was no need for resuscitation. The above text is an inference based on the combination of the author's DPS description and realistic combat style. Two pistols firing the same type of bullets have very different lethality. From this look, the author directly added magic elements to the world with a science fiction background. . If you want to fight in a realistic style, it is better to link the quality of the weapon to its newness and degree of modification Ordinary: a broken gun that has been in the battlefield for a long time, but has not been maintained at all. The rifling is smooth, jammed, the trigger is loose, the firing pin is damaged, and the parts are rusty. . Maybe there is only one kind, maybe they are all Exquisite: The old gun has been used and has not been maintained very much, but the intensity of use is not that high, and it is generally reliable Epic: New gun, brand new from the factory! It will have all the problems that a new gun will have, but there is absolutely no problem with a broken gun Legend: A gun that has been carefully maintained and adjusted has been tested for many years and will never make mistakes Immortal: A customized gun has everything you want

It's rare to see such a comfortable cyberpunk, and the protagonist's portrayal is also very comfortable, at least not the kind that sounds like Yu Lao Er or Tang San. I just don't know how the author will portray it later. One is the protagonist's current confusion. It seems that it will become clear later. One is the issue of the protagonist's combat power. If it is played too fast, it will easily collapse. If it is too slow, it will be a little watery. The other is the emotional issue. This thing is the most likely to cause problems. It is best to write down in advance whether there will be no female protagonist, single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. Otherwise, it is easy to have comments such as "should you accept xx? If you don't accept it, you won't watch it." Brother, your writing is very good so far. I am really afraid that after hearing this, you will write a mess of emotions, especially the character of Lucy. I have read too many novels where Lucy is controversial. As long as Lucy and David have something to do, they will definitely quarrel about giving away their daughter. Promise me, if Lucy is not the heroine, you will use as little ink between Lucy and David as possible, okay? I'm really afraid that you will get mad because of this. I really like this kind of protagonist who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. I have read very few cyber fan novels of this kind. The pace is okay so far. The author can decide for himself whether there are many women or not. Whether a novel is good or not will not become better because of how many women you write as the protagonist. It depends on the author's writing skills. That's what I'm saying. I think the writing is not accurate. Please give the author a boost

A time traveler, a Chinese disciple blessed by the "simulation ancestor" under the ancestor Fengling. Breaking into the siege of Coconut City with ignorance Not just a dream chaser! Under the pessimistic and desperate background of cyberpunk, in this dystopian long-lasting epic - 👇 A blazing 🔥 It contains the strongest spirit of man's victory over nature and constant self-improvement The impact and integration of culture and culture are truly reflected in Mr. Aaron Walter. Are you a ruthless, profit-oriented player in the game Or are you a GM who accumulates strength to change the world Or am I invincible, you can be Aaron - the supreme supreme Please look forward to everything🥵🥵🥵🥵🤞 (I usually speak freely and have restricted words😭😭😭BYD)

Many readers are asking. I am not going to answer directly for the time being, but let me say it first, she is not the original heroine. I still want to hear what most readers think about the love line. After all, this book has just begun.

I'm probably sick. Now I'm not keen on following 2077 novels, but I am keen on guessing whether the heroine of cyberpunk books is Lucy 😅

It's been several days and there hasn't been a single update. Really a eunuch?

The Night City section is very well written, and it can be seen that the author has polished it very carefully. As for the Badlands section, the writing is a bit delayed, especially after reaching the wanderer camp. The lack of excitement and repetitive combat content make it not that interesting. You can add more simulation times. The simulation content makes the plot a little more ups and downs, and the plug-in can improve the protagonist's combat power. After all, it is quite cool in Night City, but after leaving Night City, you will be in various embarrassments. The "cool" feeling in Night City is the core. Don't abandon the "cool" feeling for the sake of "reasonable plot" service. I hope the author will work hard and keep up the good work.

Ask a question, is there a female protagonist? If there is a heroine, is the heroine Lucy? 🙂🙂🙂🙂

So if the heroine is confirmed, I will start watching it. If not, I will wait.

Let's talk about the advantages first, it's fun, the battle scenes are fun to watch, the simulator plug-in itself is very fun, and unlike other 2077 authors who don't write any swear words, it has a very 2077 flavor. The disadvantage is that the main plot is not clear, and there are always unexpected situations when the protagonist is doing things. He almost gets hacked when he sells something. After finally feeling happy, the buyer sends it again. He is forced to fight while driving, forced to save people, and forced to go to the camp for repairs. The most uncomfortable thing is that it looks like it's all in the clouds, with no description of the environment or anything like a summary.

Aha, I'm on the list

Are you accepting Lucy? It would be a pity for such a good woman to be given to others

Except for the women's part, which is a bit stretched, the rest is pretty good.

How to put it this way, the open hang itself is not particularly strong, it is quite moderate, but the author designed to use one simulation opportunity to change a fixed option, and as long as a simulation does not choose blindly, basically three options are basically stable, which means that unless these options are necessary in very critical times, otherwise changing it is a waste of simulation opportunities, giving people the impression that it is deliberately suppressing the combat power. To put it bluntly, the things given in the simulation are set by the author, so there is no need to worry about too much hang. At present, the protagonist Most of the increase in combat power is the experimental products of the company in reality, and the most critical aspect of the plot is that the protagonist is facing a life countdown. If he does not want to die, he should make survival the first goal. The author wrote a lot of things that are not very relevant, and the protagonist did not react until he was about to die in the end. When he got some experimental products in the abandoned experimental base in Arasaka, it gave people the feeling of dying in martial arts, like falling off a cliff and picking up magical secrets. It is very routine, but not It's not good, but the description feels like shooting an arrow first and then drawing a target. The protagonist chooses where to go and what to do in order to make the plot develop as designed by the author. However, if you bring in a normal person who doesn't want to die but is about to die, you will find that the protagonist seems to be too careless and doesn't take it seriously. If I get to that point, I should do whatever I can to increase my reputation as quickly as possible. Moreover, the reputation value designed by the author is not a real reputation, it is just the kind that increases when you kill enough people. Maybe there are other things. But if there were not those three cyberpsychopaths in the abandoned base, the protagonist would basically be dead. It is really illogical not to kill Night Walkers outside to seek stability. There are also some flaws found by others. For example, the animals in Night City are almost extinct. At least there are no birds, so Night Walkers would not think it was a bird when they saw a drone flying over with a person hanging on it. The codename of the experimental drone made by Arasaka is Taotie, and Si'an Westan is Qingtian. You might as well say this is Kangtao's base.