Nuclear Weapon Immortal

First of all, the first few chapters are too long-winded and useless. Then he said that all knowledge has been monopolized. If it is monopolized, there will be no sect, only aristocratic families. There is also a protagonist who opens a martial arts gym and becomes disabled after practicing for a few years. It is impossible to open a martial arts gym like this.

At the end of Chapter 6, the protagonist found someone who could possibly save his life and pass on the legacy. This is not the efficiency of troubled times. Any child who buys a body in troubled times will have it. Bandits and the like can be caught, and his thoughts are smooth. He has been practicing martial arts for a lifetime in the chaotic world of immortal martial arts. He is still so kind. His thoughts are smooth. If the child saves his life, it will be his. This is not the idea of ​​living in troubled times for a lifetime.

Except that the front is a bit strange, the back is not an ordinary fairy tale routine? Boring

When someone accepts an apprentice, the apprentice is just like a cow or a horse. When the protagonist accepts an apprentice, he is simply looking for a parent.

Don't write this kind of thing if you don't have some foundation. Just use it if you feel comfortable watching videos. Apart from the fact that the story is okay, the cool thing about this technique is that it's not written at all.

System texts are inherently fast-paced You have to write three chapters to describe how miserable the protagonist's life was before, and you are trying to persuade him to quit. It is recommended to delete it.

Duan Ling'er doesn't want to watch anymore. I don't like this person. Come on, let's go.

I think the protagonist can use electromagnetic force, but the apprentice can't find it anywhere. Why not use electromagnetic waves for communication? Directly using the electromagnetic waves reflected by the atmosphere to achieve multi-hop propagation, the signal can be transmitted tens of thousands of kilometers.

As soon as I came in, I saw more than 50 completed copies 😅 What the hell is the daily guide recommending?

Damn it, I haven't seen you for a few days and it's just like this