Nuclear Weapon Immortal

First of all, the first few chapters are too verbose and useless. Then it says that all knowledge is monopolized, and if it's monopolized, there can be no sects, only aristocratic families. Also, the protagonist who runs a martial arts school becomes crippled after a few years of training, making it impossible for such a school to survive.

By the end of Chapter 6, the protagonist finally finds someone who can potentially save its life and pass on the inheritance. This isn't the efficiency of a chaotic world, where people buy children's lives or even capture bandits. Moreover, the protagonist's mindset is clear: even someone who has spent their entire life in the chaotic world of immortals and martial arts wouldn't be so kind.

Aside from the somewhat unusual beginning, does the rest of the story deviate from the typical cultivation novel formula? Boring.

When other characters take on apprentices, the apprentices are treated like cattle or horses; but when the protagonist takes on an apprentice, it's like finding a set of parents.

Don't write this kind of thing if you don't have a solid foundation. Just use whatever makes you feel good while watching videos. Aside from the decent storyline, it doesn't capture any of the enjoyment of this technique.

System text is inherently fast-paced. You insisted on writing three chapters describing how miserable the protagonist's past was; it's unnecessary and discourages viewers. I suggest deleting it.

I don't want to watch anymore after Duan Ling'er. I don't like her. Good luck, I'm leaving.

I see that the main character can use electromagnetic force, but he can't find his apprentice anywhere. Why not use electromagnetic wave communication? He could directly use the atmosphere to reflect electromagnetic waves to achieve multi-hop propagation and transmit signals over tens of thousands of kilometers.

I came in and saw over fifty pages of completed chapters 😅. What kind of garbage is this daily poison-driving recommendation?

Holy crap, I haven't seen him for a few days and he's already gone.