Isn't There Something Wrong with Your Spell?

It's okay to make pranks, it's just for fun. But I think there should be at least one premise, that is, the modified spells should be at least stronger than the original ones. So far, many magic modifications are not as good as the original version.

The background of the characters is blurry, and they move here and there. The IQ of the supporting characters is too low. In order to advance the plot, the protagonist is forced to have a halo of intelligence reduction from time to time. After reading more than ten chapters, I can't stand it. There are too many poisonous points. Although it has some new ideas, the author estimates that he is too young and feels like he is in his twenties. The description of the behavior and psychological activities of the supporting characters is too childish.

The wisdom begins in the third chapter. What is the idea of ​​a county magistrate coming to the village to ask for water? That's fine, but the protagonist makes a sun come out, and the county magistrate knows it. Wouldn't normal people feel afraid and treat the protagonist well? After all, he can get a person to make the sun rise, but what the county magistrate did was to mobilize troops to surround the protagonist and arrest him. This is a bit retarded

Putting aside the imagination, writing, writing style, etc., I just want to talk about one extremely poisonous point. The protagonist takes out the runes in his mind that help him practice quickly and lets the county magistrate learn the art of water control. Rune is the main manifestation of golden finger. Runes help the protagonist to understand and master spells. They are the golden finger of the protagonist. If others know that the protagonist has this kind of rune that allows people to quickly understand the magic of artifacts, why would they be greedy? If nothing else, what does the imperial court think of it, to which the county magistrate is loyal? Don't the imperial court want it? Will the county magistrate give it? Not giving it is disloyal. The court can say that it is to make the world better and bring peace and prosperity to the people, but if it is given, it means it is sorry for the protagonist. He said that the court asked the protagonist to ask for it. Isn't this being disloyal to others? The protagonist gave you a spell, but you blamed the protagonist so much? The protagonist gave it to me, is the golden finger still his? Won't others become more and more greedy? When the time comes, all will be given away. If you don't give it to the protagonist, the fight for rice will rise to the level of hatred. You said that you taught it urgently to help the people in southern Xinjiang. The world is in dire straits, and other places also hope that you will help urgently. Isn't this standing on the moral high ground and showing generosity to others? I have been reading for so many years. For this kind of problem, it is obvious that you can rely on other methods to solve the problem in the sky through various magic methods. You can find the real culprit behind the scenes and defeat him to solve this problem. However, you have to resort to wisdom and teach the runes in order to expose the golden finger. I usually call it, looking for trouble for yourself.

I haven't found such a funny book in a long time

Chapter 3: The protagonist has shot the sun, but the magistrate still dares to arrest him. The magistrate can be stupid. If you dare to arrest me, then dare to resist. The protagonist can just shoot them all, and he has to go to jail. It's a headache.

I don't have anything to say about the skill spoof. But what happened to the protagonist's IQ compared to the kindergarten? He was reborn and acted like he just entered kindergarten. At first, I thought it would be better to explain it clearly. But I ended up making a sun and was caught and I thought I would explain it clearly. I wanted to write a funny plot. I didn't see the funny thing at all. I just saw a mentally retarded person jumping around. It's really poisonous.

How dare you capture the protagonist despite being able to create the sun? This is really nb.

My personal suggestion is that the so-called Human Emperor feels a bit disgusting. He wants to centralize power and have nothing to do with the protagonist. After disgusting the protagonist, the protagonist still does this and that for him like a licking dog. Reading novels is for enjoyment, not for abuse or oppression.

First of all, if it is not promoted first and then suppressed, it will be half a masterpiece. Secondly, it is a purely subjective evaluation and has no reference value. Based on a 5-point score, this book is at least one of the best in terms of being "the king of funny ideas". It is the kind of top-notch funny article that "makes people laugh so hard". As far as funny ideas are concerned, this book is a bit like the Dream Master of All Realms. For example, the core laugh point of this book is magic modification skills. The male protagonist will learn magic from others, but after acquiring it, random magic modifications will appear that even he himself cannot understand, and he will try to develop them to create a laugh point. . . The drought wanted to shoot the sun, but he shot the third sun in front of the official who was mad because of the drought, and was captured on the spot The transformation spell was reversed, and in order to shoot the sun again, he tried his skills and turned the city's bows into prison bars The big portal turned into a big summoning spell, summoning the human emperor to summon the coffins of the eighteenth generation of human ancestors. Summon all the gods 🐎 ghosts 🐎 ancestors 🐎 to cover all the standing positions in the city 🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎 🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎 🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎 🐎🐎🐎 Invite the immortals to become immortals, harass the demon immortals every day, and become Baidu True Lord when troubles arise, and the demon immortals can be transformed There are also flashes that transform into random expulsions, water manipulations that transform into water, killing that transforms into giants and resurrections, etc. They are all top-notch funny skills. But! At the same time, the "logic and plot arrangement" are terrible. The plot so far cannot be thought about cause and effect at all, and the arrangement of details is also confusing. It gives people the impression of "there is no outline, just scribbling". I don't want to give an example, because it's not actually important. What's important is that the author wrote it wrong from the beginning. It's impossible to write this book in the direction of "going with the flow" or "selecting superpowers without hesitation". It really can and can only be written in the direction of "invincible" and "fun people". It's not that I'm limiting you, but that the abilities you wrote are "unconditionally creating the sun", "unconditionally resurrecting" and "unconditionally summoning everything". This kind of reverse The strength of the sky limits yourself to death. With this ability, if you encounter anything like "I'm afraid of the emperor who doesn't take the expulsion spell", "I'm confused by the officials who imprison me casually", "Inexplicable extra consumption and restrictions", "Inexplicable similar authentic cheats that others also have", they are purely disgusting readers. You can only write about me as I am invincible, you can do whatever you want, or I am a fun person and I like to hear and see, otherwise it will insult the reader's intelligence. In fact, there are a lot of things I want to talk about, but there is no need to say more. The basic character of the male protagonist is wrong, the worldview is not good, the logic is confusing, and there is no good way to save it. Either practice slowly, or when you have time, go and see the same kind of Dream Master, and learn the plot rhythm (don't learn the unfinished version) and ability development. No matter what, it's better than what it is now. Your writing style is completely inferior to such a good idea. It's a pity.