Isn't There Something Wrong with Your Spell?

Pranks are fine; it's all for the sake of having fun. However, I think there should be at least one prerequisite: the modified spells should be stronger than the original ones. So far, many heavily modified versions are not as good as the original.

The characters' backgrounds are vague and scattered, the supporting characters are too stupid, and the protagonist is forced to have a "low-IQ halo" to advance the plot. I couldn't finish reading more than ten chapters because there are too many flaws. Although there are some new ideas, the author is probably too young, feeling like he is around twenty years old. The behavior and psychological activities of the supporting characters are described too childishly.

The story starts to go idiotic from the third chapter onwards. A county magistrate coming to a village asking for water is one thing, but then the protagonist conjures a sun, and the magistrate finds out. Wouldn't a normal person be terrified and treat the protagonist well, given that the protagonist can create a sun? Instead, the magistrate's reaction is to mobilize troops to surround and arrest the protagonist. That's just plain stupid.

Putting aside the concepts, writing style, and overall quality, I only want to discuss one extremely toxic point. The protagonist takes out the runes in his mind that help him cultivate quickly and gives them to the magistrate to teach him the art of water control. Runes are the main manifestation of cheat codes.

I haven't found such a hilarious book in ages.

In Chapter Three, the protagonist even shot down the sun, yet the magistrate still dared to arrest him. The magistrate might be stupid, but if he dares to arrest me, I'll resist. Why didn't the protagonist just shoot them all to death? Instead, he obediently went to jail. What a headache!

I don't mind the skill parodies, but what's with the protagonist's IQ being at kindergarten level? He's been reborn, yet he acts like he's just started kindergarten. At first, I thought things would be fine once things were explained, but then he gets caught and still thinks explaining things will solve everything. They tried to write some comedic scenes, but I didn't see anything funny at all. All I saw was an idiot jumping around aimlessly. It's truly toxic.

They can create a sun and even dare to capture the protagonist, that's truly amazing.

Personally, I find that so-called human emperor rather disgusting. What does his desire to consolidate power have to do with the protagonist? After disgusting the protagonist, the protagonist still acts like a sycophant, doing this and that for him. Reading novels is about enjoyment, not seeking torture and oppression.

First of all, it's not a case of praising first and then criticizing; it's truly half a masterpiece. Secondly, purely subjective evaluations are not reliable for reference. If we rate it out of 5, this book is at least one in a thousand in terms of "humor and brilliant ideas." It's the kind of top-tier comedy that can make you laugh out loud.