Faerun: The New Master of the Nether Scrolls

DND is finally here. Do you know how many years I have been waiting for a serious DND fan?

It's not very good. The first 2 chapters were okay, but then one sister started to lose the overall writing style. You can also look at it, it's tasteless. Keep looking at it

As expected by the eunuch, the protagonist jumped too much, and the time-traveler who only had one life could not stand up.

The protagonist can be weak, but it must meet public expectations. Expectations come from readers' self-discipline in the introduction and self-introduction to the plot. The role of the protagonist in the team does not give people a sense of substitution. There are ways to write "low grade" as "low grade", but this is by no means a false statement. You can't just say what the great mage says about you and what to do in the future. Running groups can be played like this, but novels cannot. You don't have the basic base of those platinum masters. They can write like this, but if you don't, readers won't wait and will abandon the book if they find it unsatisfactory. In addition, are there any changes before and after it is launched? Some authors will save a wave of plots, and some authors will update and explode, which can attract subscriptions. What did you do? And each chapter is updated just by looking at the title. Why should I follow along? I just subscribed to 85 and read to 82, and occasionally read a chapter or two in between. If you don't like it, just keep it. I suddenly discovered today that it seems that updates have been interrupted for two days. It's not pleasant if you don't vomit, but it's even worse if you vomit. Fantasy novels are in decline. Readers are impatient and abandon the books. Authors insist on their own writing style and stop publishing if sales are not good 😴

No, I just want to say that the protagonist should be an energy-shaping magic barbarian. It can be said to be the mage sewer. Might as well not specialize in a school. At least I can learn all the spells

Let's talk about the advantages first. The subject matter is okay, at least for me. I have just recently started playing group games such as Baldur's Gate 3 and Divinity Original Sin 2. Because I am very interested in it, I thought about looking for novels. This one is quite attractive to me. The introduction is also okay and has a grand narrative. The feeling of the game is in line with my imagination of fantasy. It's just that I haven't fully understood the combat system yet, so I won't comment much on this aspect. Many of the plots are quite interesting, such as the interaction with teammates when fighting side by side, and some of the protagonist's little thoughts. They are all quite interesting and in line with the temperament that an adventurer should have. But here comes the problem. This is a bit separated from the main character with his sister in the later part. After watching it for so long, I was very confused. Is the main character so eager to be a lone wolf? Every time he faces danger alone, he has to take his sister with him. Isn't this just putting his sister in danger? Isn't he so confident that no stronger monster will come? Is the plot arrangement a little too deliberate? The logic in some places is really not strong, and there is also the fear of exposure as mentioned before. I am thinking, you are already friends for life, can't you keep a little secret between each other? Will they really dig into the source of the news that a lich is alive? It's not that he needs to be made public, but isn't it okay to tell the acquaintances who have been taking care of him? And it's just to tell them the news of the approaching danger This is a bit too cautious, and it makes the protagonist's character very stingy. But your character creation of Nina is very elegant and generous. It's hard to imagine why you would make the protagonist so stingy, and your sister. It is the most precious thing in the world, so the scene where he took his sister in the car alone was really awkward. You can already see that the nobleman has malicious intentions and wants to leave his sister alone. Isn't your logic really good? It doesn't fit with the cautious persona before. Many dangers were not considered.

The settings of the 5th and 3rd editions are not well integrated. The level-up effect in the 5th edition is based on the simplified caster level (including spell penetration and spell resistance) and the removal of metamagic feats (spell upgrades). The author uses level-ups but at the same time uses the 3rd edition settings in memorizing spellcasting rules. This is actually contradictory (co-authored spells come with metamagic upgrades). Using the 5th edition spellcasting rules to apply the 3rd edition rules is definitely a thankless task. Including buff duration and ac algorithm, it depends on how the author justifies his explanation.

Parents who died young, sick sister, poor protagonist, broken home

There is no need to write such advanced battles in the early stage. It is quite interesting to do small tasks like the beginning.

Looks like a eunuch!! No update for several days