Taiping Zhiyi, the Pregnant White Fox Asked Me to Take over at the Beginning

I hope you don't go down the old road of immortality.

High-quality food, but the title is a bit strange and the pace of the first chapter is a bit slow, so I guess I won't get enough of it in the early stages. It looks interesting, and the story is much better than the last one you wrote. The demons in it are really good with the background of the late Qing Dynasty. It would be more interesting to arrange a warlord demon similar to Zhang Xueliang.

The titles of each chapter look so uncomfortable. The author put a lot of effort into writing a title, but the readers didn't feel it at all and couldn't arouse resonance. I think the author didn't need to write such a chapter title, which was completely superfluous.

At the beginning, the writing was okay and the plot was okay. But the chapters about Zhang Qiu Gongfa before it was released made me sick. It's too unappetizing to ask for a technique that can drag things out like this. Everyone comes to read online articles not to see your ink marks. Either it should be more traditional, and the techniques should be derived from secret adventures and treasure auctions, which should be exciting enough. The plot of your quest for the law is ink-stained and bland. So disgusting😡

This combination of misfortune and blessing makes me sick. I know that disaster is coming and I can't escape, so I can only force it! ! So what if the gold finger has chicken feathers?

Recommended for all cuckolds 😗

The writing is quite good, but it also has shortcomings. The demons kill people at will. Where does the food for the people in the city come from? It is reasonable for mortals to have some countermeasures, otherwise it will not become a mess. You must also give them a comforting environment when raising pigs and chickens so that they can be slaughtered when they grow up.

Let's change the title of the book. I really don't want to click on this title.

Are there enough mortals in this world to be killed by a demon?

I felt that this book was rushed. I was always in danger, and I didn't have time to take a breath. It was so depressing.

The boundaries set by the golden finger in this book are too vague, or in other words, they are not vague, but the author blurred them, which makes the price of erasing the golden finger meaningless and failing to achieve the overbearing effect of the normal golden finger.

When I watched Zhen Yu's Immortality, I felt that this cost exemption was too buggy. I felt that the price was set just to highlight the difference of the protagonist.

Be sure not to have anything to do with revolution or the like, otherwise it will easily change the flavor of your writing. The story of Chang Sheng Zhi Yi was quite good before, but the taste changed after writing about the revolution.

I saw that the protagonist pretended to be Ning Caichen to seize the skills. I hope the author will complete the training system later. So far, I have only seen all kinds of strange things, such as the long-haired monster and the door beam monster. There is no cultivation system and there is no main line. They are all small stories.

In a world of chaos, it's a wonder people can survive

Why does the author like to write about men changing into women so much? .

The biggest problem with fantasy novels is that the power system has no logic and relies entirely on the author's words to say which one is more powerful, so I can't stand it. There are several books out there, but none of the authors gave any solutions. I didn't read any of them and quit after reading just one.

Popular writing is done in the same way as classical writing. Headache