Traveling Through the Myriad Worlds Together, with Top-Tier Talent

The opening scene of Doupo where the protagonist reveals his transmigration is truly disgusting. And the two of them, fellow countrymen meeting for the first time, are really going to open their hearts to each other? Writing this part of the plot is completely self-indulgent.

Reading this book, the protagonist gives the impression of being an inexperienced high school student. Whether it's interacting with people or dealing with things, he acts like a high school student, constantly scratching the back of his head, and easily feeling embarrassed or awkward. It's suitable for children; I personally don't really like high school students making awkward jokes and references.

It's too scattered. Suddenly jumping to another world makes it completely unimmersive. It should focus on one world as the main theme and the others as secondary. Writing a little bit about each world is ridiculous. How can this even be considered a book?

He's doomed to fail; he revealed his transmigrator identity in Battle Through the Heavens. I'll accept it if it's the original world of Doupo, but you've already figured out it's a fanfiction world, and you still revealed it yourself?

Battle Through the Heavens is a bit slow, let's fast forward a bit.

A perfectly good dish is replaced with dog food; how can such a switch look appealing?

Holy crap, this can be called a book? Cang Yuan Tu, a novel from who knows how many years ago. You actually used that as your starting world? Aren't you afraid of failing miserably?

Finally, I've found a book of this type that doesn't glorify Japanese manga.

The plot twist is too large, far exceeding the protagonist's early development; there's not much room for further writing. Unless the pacing is slowed down.

The protagonist is a complete waste. Look at what you've written in "Perfect Volume"—it's utter garbage! It's just copied from the original work.