Traveling Through the Myriad Worlds Together, with Top-Tier Talent

The self-destruction of time travel at the beginning of Dou Po is really disgusting. When we just met a fellow countryman, he really felt his heart out when he met a fellow countryman? ? Writing such a plot is completely self-indulgent. Zhu Tianwen's self-explosion of identity is inherently toxic, not to mention that the protagonist and Xiaoyan have nothing to do with each other. A stranger self-explodes his identity to get closer, just for the meager benefit, and he self-destructs completely. Is this a method that a normal protagonist would come up with? Author, why don't you read those popular time traveler novels? Apart from the funny ones about self-declaring a time traveler's identity in chat groups, which novel's protagonist is willing to self-destruct as a time traveler? And what those Zhu Tianwen who are so desperate for the street like to do most is to self-destruct as a time traveler. If the poisonous points are not removed well, there is no reason for your book not to be a hit.

Reading this book, the protagonist gives people the impression that he is just like a high school student with no experience. Whether it is getting along with people or dealing with things, he is like a high school student. He touches the back of his head at every turn and feels embarrassed and embarrassed at every turn. It is suitable for children. I don't really like high school students playing tricks and making awkward things.

It's too scattered. Suddenly jumping to another world has no sense of immersion at all. One world must be the main one and the others are supplementary. Write a little bit about each world. Can this also become a book?

I'm done with it, and I reveal my identity as a time traveler in Dou Po But I recognize all the original worlds of Dou Po, and you've already judged that it's a fan world, and you're still exposing yourself?

Doupo is a bit stretched, please move forward faster.

A plate of delicious food is simply replaced with dog food. How can such a switch look good?

I'm a bitch, can this be called a book? Cang Yuan Tu, a novel written an unknown number of years ago, You actually use him as the initial world. Are you really not afraid of rushing into the street?

Finally I've seen a manga of this type that doesn't include Japanese comics.

The plot is too big, far beyond the development of the protagonist in the early stage, and there is not much that can be written like this. Unless the progress is pressed

Wasteful protagonist, perfect scroll. See for yourself what the writing is and copy it from the original work.