In Order to Get into the Card Pool, I Had to Grab the Leading Role.

They were all very good, but the sudden death of my parents made me feel a bit depressed and left me speechless.

Good, now I want to name a game🤓☝️

Is this a skirmisher? Are you going to play a supporting role in Miyou? No, is it the supporting role in the second game?

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At present, it seems that this is not time travel, but transferring consciousness into the game. If the game is shut down, the protagonist will die? I feel like the protagonist is frustrated.

I came to read the second-game light novels, not the inexplicable battles of wits, riddles, and conspiracy theories!

Confused, difficult to see. After watching part of it, at first I thought the city I was in was in an oriental setting, after all, it was about steamed buns and stuff, and then a Fuyi came out, and the protagonist had to have her surname. After the third chapter, this person suddenly disappeared out of thin air and there was no arrangement. (It was only in the sixth chapter that she was said to be at home. I didn't see her coming home before. I thought she was lost. And does she know where her home is?) Then I went to a city in an instant (I didn't go, I stayed in place for half an hour) to a city with a Western background from the name to the setting (I thought Sir Yan was the city lord, but later he became Victor, so what is Mr. Yan's position), casually became the saint's personal bodyguard and then became friends. The origin of this saint is not mentioned. Does she have real power? Who granted it? The country or the church? Since the Knights of the Temple have a knighthood, is it a theocracy? Why can the city owner just arrange it if he wants, without informing the saint in advance? A city is a country? Reading less of a paragraph is like reading less of a chapter. Many places are quite abrupt, and simple social character backgrounds are not explained. The more I read, the more my head hurts. There are other problems as well. The narrative is a bit thin and the characters are not three-dimensional enough. Depth of plot thinking (can be ignored for cool articles) Remind me that the author's perspective and the reader's perspective are different. The author may think that the character, background, character, personality, and world view are all in his mind. I know that, and there is no need to describe it when writing. But if you don't write it out, readers will never know. Even if you use social background and stereotypes to contrast it? Why should I read the article if I can directly read the outline in your mind. Then let's talk about something that is not tense. In the first chapter, he witnessed his friend being formatted, which "occupied all his thoughts" and then "looking back at the past" (including the experience of the closed beta Eden), he came to the conclusion that "he was a powerless and sad little person". ??? So what are you thinking about? If the conclusion is the conspiracy of the game company/you have to follow your friends as a warning and not violate taboos and work hard to survive/avenge your friends/find the truth. . . This kind of thing is a conclusion. You're thinking very well, don't think about it again.

There is a light novel in which the protagonist changes his gender in order to become a popular king in the card pool.

I'm curious when it will be added to the card pool (

First of all, I would like to apologize to the readers. After you finish sending the manuscript, try to reduce the plot of wits. Of course, fighting without wits does not mean losing one's wits, but it will save a lot of twists and turns.

Well written, well, good. However, 🤓☝️ Here I want to name a two-word big world open mobile game

I feel like the whole thing in the first chapter was out of control, and it was very boring to be discovered just after traveling through time.

Look, let me have a taste.

Chapter 8, the protagonist becomes a traveler, Commander, I want to help my brother, can you help me? 6. The author Huang Mao didn't understand the essence.

It is best not to have sex when the protagonist is unconscious, otherwise it will feel like there is no sex.

Let's give Huang Mao a little shock with some interesting plot.

Harmful, if there are too few, don't raise them anymore. . . Don't feed yourself to death again. . .