Who Let This Guy into the Cultivators' Circle?
谁带这家伙进修士圈的
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- Completed
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- 2.7M Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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Is there any evil elixir that can break reproductive isolation, racial segregation, and the separation of life and death? The breeding elixir
By the way, many interesting elixirs are not entirely a good thing if they are one-time use. . . My suggestion is that the protagonist can make these strange elixirs himself later.
It feels weird The initiative is not in the hands of the protagonist but in the hands of the bottle. It feels very strange.
The characters in it have an IQ close to being mentally retarded, making it impossible to watch.
Extremely poisonous, only those with high poison resistance can watch it. The slave of the bottle, the protagonist who is thinking below, is indecisive and extremely aggrieved. If you don't like aggrieved, don't read it.
I still relied on those outrageous pills to read, but I got addicted when I saw the plot of the Bai family. After taking the cultivation pill and fighting a few times, I realized that I was very good. I also had the magical power of water and fire and the path of hungry ghosts, but I still pretended to be a 🐢man. Maybe it's because the author himself is a 🐢, and I don't know how to write a normal male protagonist.
Changing the protagonist to an animal would not affect the storyline. I thought that making elixirs by yourself would have side effects, but in the article, a plug-in directly gives the elixirs. It's very confusing. The protagonist knows nothing. Change the protagonist to an animal and let the natives discover it. The natives will be the protagonist. It doesn't affect the storyline at all because there is no storyline.
Brainstorming
If you have any imaginative elixirs, you can create them. You are not afraid of being outrageous, but you are afraid that they are not outrageous enough. If the plot is suitable, we will write it in. There are many elixirs needed, so we are not afraid of not being able to use them.
I saw 40, and I was really impressed. You could write less and you could see the breasts, legs, and the Piggy figure that makes you swallow your saliva. Is it so exaggerated? It's really annoying to watch too much
Bai Jia and Linglan is a very big failure. You have to think clearly that what you are writing is an invigorating article. Don't write several pages with the same burden, and the readers will be shaken away.