Myriad Worlds: Starting in the Late Qing Dynasty

It reminds me of reading Meng Ru Shen Ji's writing style, but a bit more verbose. There's a lot of mystical and rambling stuff, as if he wants to throw out a whole bunch of long explanations all at once. Actually, it's unnecessary. These principles can be gradually integrated into the protagonist's words and actions. There's no need for lengthy explanations that make the reading difficult.

I actually thought my previous book was pretty good, I don't know why it got so many negative reviews... I hope this one will be a decent read.

Before the protagonist revealed his Daoist abilities, no one else possessed them. But after the protagonist acquired these abilities, identical individuals began to appear one after another, like wild vegetables sprouting in a field.

That's it, even shorter than the last one. Thankfully, I've been keeping an eye on it since it was released, just in case it gets abandoned.

After reading a few chapters, I can only describe it with two words: rambling and full of nonsense. Describing each character's single move in hundreds of words is ridiculous. Then there's the added detail of everyone's inner thoughts.

It's too wordy. Some parts are written in a rambling, nonsensical way, making it difficult to even feign sophistication. True sophistication requires buildup, a clean and decisive approach, and a swift and satisfying resolution. Even with numerous reasons to describe it, the overall impression is one of hesitation, rambling, and indecisiveness—the kind of person who can't even kill someone properly.

To strike the heart with fists, to elucidate the Way with technique; fist is heart, technique is action. The Way has no high or low, technique has winners and losers. Generally speaking, walking is one road, driving is another; yet walking is walking, driving is driving—both are simply roads. If one can grasp this point, then such a clash will be absolutely spectacular and captivating. The ways of governing a nation differ between the people and the powerful families.

Your awareness is indeed excellent. But you're talking in a lot of rambling, with too much preamble. Comparing yourself to Shenji is a bit of an exaggeration.

Why did you abandon the project again? Did you go to take a dump?

He probably won't kill his time-traveling master later on and then begin his journey through the heavens, right?