Wuxia Crossover: In the Kingdom of Jin, I Fight My Way Back to the Southern Song

The second chapter is a bit toxic. The protagonist is warming himself by a fire in a dilapidated Taoist temple when Qiu Chuji enters to avoid the snow. The protagonist's first words are, "Taoist Master, come and warm yourself by the fire." The protagonist and Qiu Chuji didn't know each other, and they were already acting like old friends.

I want to see the protagonist single-handedly defeat the entire world!

It would be great if your main text was as engaging as the synopsis.

While reading the first sixteen chapters, I thought this book, even if it wasn't quite "Buddha Jumps Over the Wall," would still be "Boiled Cabbage in Clear Broth." Then came chapter seventeen, which should have been the first minor climax. The protagonist, lacking real strength, resorted to underhanded tactics—disguising himself as a beggar, using others to kill, and leveraging external forces.

Here are some explanations of the introduction for those who don't understand. (The first bracket corresponds to the original work, and the second bracket corresponds to the reference. There are also some that I can't recognize. I hope someone who knows can give me some pointers.) "The Tiger Soul Demon Blade commands the world; without the Heavenly Crystal, who can contend with it?"

Quack! I want to see an update!

The characters in the original work, so vivid and complex, are killed off in just three or four chapters in your version. Does that add anything to the original story? Have you really portrayed characters like Ximen Chuixue and Zhuge Zhengwo well? Can Mu Daoren truly be considered a great figure?

Putting everything else aside, just this introduction alone makes it clear that the author is deliberately going against the readers. Are you just obsessed with generating too much traffic? Are you stubborn? Why not just write it clearly and simply? Why make it so mysterious? Is that really interesting?

The introduction and world-building are quite interesting, well-structured, and the writing is also good.

As I expected, it was indeed abandoned. I told you, with this kind of writing, the power levels would definitely collapse, the character designs would definitely go out of character, and it would definitely end up being abandoned or having a terrible ending.