Douluo Dalu: Martial Soul Shukaku, Sand Burial Across the Continent!

What I hate most is this kind of trope where someone is born with full soul power but is still defined as having a useless martial soul. It's awful and shows a complete lack of common sense.

To be honest, I don't know if the author simply used Shukaku to create trouble and had never watched Naruto, or if the protagonist was just desperate to pick up girls. Shukaku's ability is Sand Release. He has also learned Wind Release and sealing techniques. Sand Release, a bloodline limit technique, is a combination of Wind Release and Earth Release. With this setup, your protagonist has already arrived in Elemental City, but instead of going to Divine Wind or the self-proclaimed Earth Elemental Elephant Armor, he insists on going to Blazing Fire, which has nothing to do with them. Isn't it all just to woo Fire Dance? In terms of the environment for auxiliary training, the wind attribute academy, Kamikaze, is definitely more suitable for your Shukaku training environment. As for Elephant Armor, although it claims to be of earth element, I didn't really see it (can diamonds, which are made of carbon, be considered earth elemental?). In conclusion, either the protagonist or the author is definitely at fault. Either the protagonist gave up a better training environment to pursue girls, or the author didn't understand the Naruto setting and wrote about Shukaku incorrectly.

Author, you've written such a tragic story; if Tu Village doesn't end up in the end, I'm really going to start cursing.

The character development is a bit off. Tang San, who was supposed to be ready to die, has become a mere extra in this story. Even if Dai Mubai is spineless, he wouldn't kneel, would he? Don't tell me it's because the relationship between Ma Hongjun and the others hasn't reached that point. Bowing is the only way to stand up for someone, kneeling is out of the question. And about the bracelet, he provoked them without offering any explanation; it feels like he was just showing off for the sake of showing off.

Two chapters were enough to make me give up; I couldn't stand it anymore. How could someone who's read Naruto, a classic work that profoundly depicts filial piety and deep teacher-student relationships, write the protagonist like a piece of shit? Your romance scenes alone disgusted me.

To be honest, it's still a bit toxic. 1- The protagonist leaves the village to hunt soul beasts. Earlier it was mentioned that the protagonist had just awakened but already knew a lot about soul beasts when he hunted them. 2. The romance in the academy's storyline felt forced, like they were just artificially pairing Huo Wu and the protagonist together without any development. 3. Regarding the skill issue, has the author watched Naruto? 4. The fact that the protagonist went to that Fire Academy is really problematic. His first martial soul is already at level three, and instead of focusing on improving his strength, he goes to a training environment that's unsuitable for him, all because he has a slight connection to his second martial soul. Hmm... Bizarre. Then, maybe it was just my own thought, but after reading the synopsis, I thought it was some kind of chaotic battle in Douluo Continent 🥱, but it turned out to be about pairing up characters. I feel this book isn't suitable for a female lead. I don't know if a harem will develop later, but based on the protagonist's thoughts in the beginning, it's very likely he will. For example, in the Soul Arena scene, the author wrote that Shui Bing'er also became curious about the protagonist. 😐 Overall, this is a light read for beginners, so read with caution!

It's written like a pile of poop, it's poisonous!

Go find a factory job; writing novels isn't for you. 😰

Why are there so many people who like to learn Japanese anime skills? Is it because Chinese things aren't good enough to show off, and the Japanese have an advantage over us? Or do those writers look down on Chinese things? Real-world netizens want to boycott Japanese goods, but as a result, online novels are full of them.

I've heard Douluo Continent fanfics have anywhere from 200 to 150 words, and this is the first time I've seen one featuring Black Saint Soul Village.