At This Point, Let's Start Earth Online

I ordered all the last book, but I don't know why it just tastes bad🤔. It gives people a strange feeling. It's not watery, but it just feels a little less attractive. (Then I started raising, and although I am already a deacon, there are still 56 chapters left to read.) Personally, I feel that the beginning of the book is a bit like the warlock manual at that time? Maybe it's because I want to write about everything, which makes the development of the world view and the protagonist too slow. There are no highlights in the first few dozen chapters to catch the readers' attention, and the results are inexplicably stable I hope this book can get rid of the old and welcome the new, and give the new world a good ending PS: By the way, I should get a cover for this sooner.

It's obviously just a layer of cellophane, but it turns out that this routine of shrinking from being a younger brother is too cliche. Although I know that the author wants to leave room for other female protagonists to appear, this method of handling is too bad.

Why isn't the last sentence 'Don't come over here'😃

Author, why don't you try py trading or short video to attract traffic? The writing is quite good but there are few people.

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