After Mastering the Mysteries of Martial Arts, I Became an Immortal Cultivator

The protagonist saves a rich girl, but she's completely oblivious to the situation and spends all her time putting on airs and acting like a spoiled princess in front of him. The protagonist is a real sycophant, still smiling even when she takes advantage of him.

That's great, bro. Keep going on this trend, don't let it lead to a return to traditional cultivation methods. Many versions like yours start out being analyzed, but then they get sidetracked into pursuing ancient monsters and such, and it's back to traditional cultivation. Also, your updates are so slow, can't you be a little faster?

The writing is too slow! And what about all those characters scheming against the protagonist? Why not just kill them all? And what about those rival families, dynasties, and royal clans? After eliminating them, why not collect cultivation techniques, resources, and information for deduction?

If the protagonist had also killed that young master Zhu, I would have accepted this as a ruthless and decisive story. It shows the protagonist isn't ignorant of human relationships, yet he does a lot of messy things. The supporting characters also seem to have intellectual problems; the common soldiers are just fighting to the death. Okay, you say this is elite troops.

The author can't write a female lead, it's really awkward. The male lead is a saint (not a bitch, but a clown).

A bootlicker, addicted to it? Her family repaid kindness with enmity, shouldn't we take them all down? Another AI-generated mass-produced one... Can't Qidian afford editors anymore? Or do editors get a share of the profits?

The game starts with all sorts of toxic plot points: a hero saving a damsel in distress, then in front of others, you effortlessly create a dozen or more martial arts techniques—techniques that others take generations to develop. And then you try to trade your techniques for others'. When they go home and mention it, their families want to recruit you, but you refuse, and you can't even defeat them. Do you really think your safety is guaranteed? What kind of brain-dead logic is this?

No power to protect the protagonist? Didn't the Zhu family know how terrifying the protagonist's talent was through that young lady? Wouldn't they protect him? Doesn't that Liu family member know how to leave a way out for others? Why isn't the imperial court going after the Liu family instead of the main character? How stupid is that department head?

Chapter Four poisoned me to death. I'd never even seen a woman before, and I almost got killed trying to save her. What kind of melodramatic plot is this? 😅

The protagonist has such an overpowered ability, so why does he still insist on saving that woman? He could have developed on his own. Now he's wanted by both the government and the underworld.