Starting from the Ming Dynasty, It Conquered the World

You have a mirror and know how to practice boxing. Are you Gu Shaoshang?

The author's wording for the fight scenes is truly divine, and it really shouldn't be so unnoticed. I have also been reading books for more than ten years, and I have pointed out some shortcomings from the reader's perspective. If the author can improve them, he will have a bright future. 1. The author completely cultivates the land with a golden hoe, and this writing method is actually used in astronomy. You should conceive a world view similar to the one of the Lord of the World/Heaven and Man Atlas. Even if it is not good for you to write astronomy, you can still write it well. You can also write Gu Shaoshang's kind. At present, your world of heavens and worlds is too flawed. Copies such as White Snake Subduing Dragon and Arhat are really useless. How can you write about this kind of world? 2. Modify the classic dungeon world without authorization and directly forcibly increase the force value of Tianlong World. The reason for your improvement is that you are good at writing about martial arts, but the plot is so compressed that there is no need to choose a classic IP. 3. The plot is not enough and rich enough. As long as you can add a main world, create a family or sect in the main world, and then create a "people list" and the like, and then challenge it and use your battle writing style to describe it, it will be really exciting. It would be much better to add a main world. 4. If you want to keep up with the trend, it would be more fun to create a "Two Realms" and "Xinghai World". Watching the author wielding a golden hoe to dig food in the field was eye-opening.

In the Northern Song Dynasty, there were four famous catchers, the Eight Tribes of Heaven and Dragon. At the end of the Yuan Dynasty, the sea was full of rain and clouds, and there was probably a story about leaning on the sky and slaying the dragon. The Golden Age of Taoism, The Legend of the White Snake, the 2003 version of the TV series A Chinese Ghost Story, and The Legend of Shushan Swordsman by the Master of Huanzhu Tower. I don't know which story it is. In the world of myths, only the legend of Jigong can be seen. Emperor Baosheng may have been a great doctor. I don't know about the others.

Those who failed to read earlier must be because some people have the habit of reading. As long as you persist, your grades will naturally improve. Your writing style has actually surpassed many authors of the same type. You still need to be more patient when writing novels.

How can I put it this way? The writing is good, the rhythm is good, the combat arrangements are good, the characterization is very good, and the IQ is very good. The only thing is that I don't know why, but it feels boring and I don't have the urgency to read the next chapter. . .

The author wrote it well, but I couldn't get into it. I have passed the stage where I like to read chivalrous heroic novels. If other people often appreciate martial arts novels of the martial arts style and like to read novels where a few moves are completed in one chapter and the characters appear for a third of the chapter, then they can still read it. This is a martial arts novel that requires patience and slow reading. Unfortunately, I just wanted to have a quick meal.

According to the author's outline, if you have it, write it, if not, don't write it. This is not a big deal. Writers should all know the consequences of breaking the rhythm of the outline. I don't know where some people come from with so much nonsense and all their excuses.

This is indeed the case, but you can't even take out a complete book? Do you expect everyone to feel free to pursue books? Can't continue reading and continue in an endless loop?

Looking at the table of contents, Super Khitan Man, Shakyamuni's Wonder, I feel that the author is getting more and more excited, so let's take care of him for a while.

The writing is really good and very talented. The layout of a long article is still very important. You can see from the testimonials that the author has little experience. If you have no experience, you should listen to more experienced people. This old bookworm has only one suggestion: The World is Unlimited is too unpopular. Don't combine too many things into one copy. Instead, work out a main line in each copy and finish it in a down-to-earth manner. The dungeon of "Anti-Japanese War" is actually a bit too ambitious. It took a lot of time to move from the arena to the court.

Is it unfinished? Didn't the introduction include the collision between the Heaven-shading Law and the Yangshen Law, and the Emperor's Weapon vs. The Artifact of Creation? But it suddenly disappeared 😥

Nowadays, one chapter seems to have a lot of words, and the plot is summarized in one stroke. There is a feeling of looking at the scroll of infinite glory, and the fighting is well-written and the plot is not interesting.

Can we go to the snow in the next world? I want to watch Xu Fengnian being beaten violently

Forget it, it was good, but at the beginning it told me that Zhengde thing was besieging Wudang Mountain? After a closer look at the explanation, it turned out that the setting of a Pheasant work was used. It is very good to write a combination of history and martial arts, so it must use the Pheasant setting? Goodbye to you for your self-defeating martial arts.

The author likes to strengthen some villains who have a few blows. This is the case in Yuan Thirteenth Limit, and the same is true for Pang Ban.

I would like to ask if there is an emperor who killed the Ming Dynasty. If so, you can still watch it. If not, I can only say that the protagonist has no brains.

Is there a female protagonist? It's just about force, which is a bit monotonous.

Can you change the description of the protagonist? Forget it about demon apes, giant apes, demons, and enemies. Even the people around the protagonist think so in their hearts. Can't you change the description to include gods coming to the world, living giants, gods, laws of heaven and earth?

I have a question, Mr. Xiaoge is so awesome, isn't Zhu Qi from Jinyiwei going to heaven?

I have now seen the testimonials listed here, and overall I feel that they are okay. Come on, author, I took on a lot of foreign debt because of the epidemic. I worked during the day and ran takeout at night. My wife and I paid off the debt at the end of last year ! My wife, the only daughter in the family who has been pampered since she was a child and can't even cook, comes with me to run a takeaway. To be honest, it's not easy! There is no other meaning in saying this, I just want to encourage the author to have a good attitude and overcome these hurdles step by step. The work is complete!

What about the new book? Not out yet?

The narrative becomes more and more grand, from meeting one person to seeing the world. But I still prefer when the protagonist can see a person in subtle ways at the beginning. It's been a long time since I've seen an ordinary person from the protagonist, so I can only put this book aside for the time being.

Chapters are too expensive, three times as much as other books. If this book has 1,700 chapters, it will cost about 600 yuan to read.

From over 10,000 updates per day to 4,000 updates per day 🙂

This novel is somewhat similar to Zhutian Daodao Sect. The writing style is indeed relatively good, but the popularity is relatively low.

Can you also write about Zhetian? Update slowly, the results should be pretty good, it's a shame it ends like this

When will the new book be released? Expect

It's so long-winded, and the introduction to psychological activities is really hard to describe in one sentence.

But I'll also give you a monthly pass. It's written well at the front. Watch it again when you have time