This God of War Is Too Extreme

The monthly ticket is given to the palace. It's time to feel better

The author will update soon! ! !

It is a very nice novel with a novel theme and full of imaginative colors and foreshadowing. The description is delicate, natural and smooth. The plot is rich in content and exciting. The characters are distinctive and full of mystery.

This plot is both new and old, refreshing and boring😃

It's funny how you delete comments when you don't want people to criticize you for not writing well. I spend a lot of money and read them every day. Are you embarrassed to delete comments?

The most powerful person in every civilization is currently the God. Below the God is the Supreme, and the Supreme is like an ant to the Sanqing. If converted into immortals, it is estimated that it is around the heavenly immortals? The protagonist is still a long way from reaching the highest level, that is, there are still many things to write about, such as martial arts, three blockades, uncle's secrets, outer gods, immortals, etc. There are too many pitfalls. I have to spend 5 million+ to finish it.

This author is super invincible and likes to forcefully add drama to characters that have been offline. If the foreshadowing of this character has been written before, then writing it later is called recycling the foreshadowing. But no, there was no foreshadowing at all. A character who was completely offline, it was written that he was suddenly forced to add a scene, saying that he was extraordinary. It can only mean that you wrote this new plot on a whim. If it was a plot that had been conceived long ago, there would definitely be foreshadowing, but no, you have no foreshadowing at all. The reading experience is just that you write whatever comes to mind, very, very, very stretched.

I have basically deleted all the books, except this one, because the author promised to send me a box of hairy crabs, a box of snowskin mooncakes, a PS5, and a 500,000 cash gift package during the Mid-Autumn Festival. The treatment is far ahead of other books.

It's a pure and refreshing article, and it seems that the protagonist is still in the invincible style. I don't know why but it always smells like tomato. The writing style of the author of Tomato is different from that of the author of Qidian. There are very few details in the description, and they all push the plot. To put it bluntly, there is less pulling and the writing is more straightforward. This book gave me such a feeling. There are very few side-viewing descriptions, and the visual sense is relatively small. The plot is quite good, and the writing is smooth and comfortable to read. However, the story line is a bit thin. I don't know if I can open up the emotional line.

I met a 30-year-old young woman on the Internet. We have been chatting very well for more than half a year. Today she asked to meet. I hesitated. I said you have a family and it didn't feel good. But she said it was okay and we were just ordinary friends. So I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty. She lives in my city. Not far away, we made an appointment to meet at a milk tea shop. We didn't choose to meet somewhere else for fear of meeting an acquaintance. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for several hours. While waiting, I looked at the photos and thought it was another "car rollover scene." Most mobile phones have beauty functions, but when she got out of the Mercedes-Benz, I recognized her at a glance. She is much prettier than in the photo, and she is my type. She also recognized me and didn't know what to say. In order to break the awkwardness, she suggested hugging her. I said yes. She smelled very good. I jumped and sat in the milk tea shop for a while. We went to eat. She basically didn't eat much. The whole time Cheng was peeling shrimps and picking fish bones for me. When we walked out of the restaurant after dinner, she held my hand and I didn't break away. She said she would take me home, and I said I would take a taxi back. She insisted on taking me back. When I got home, I found that she had put a note in her bag, which said that if you update 100 chapters a day, you can unlock the subsequent content.

It's almost 1 million words. The other protagonists are all unique. Our protagonist is still taking the college entrance examination 😅😅

My biggest feeling after reading it now is that the author is a bit too careless. There are some typos that are quite normal. Inexplicably, there are so many missing words in each chapter that I really don't understand. There is a saying, even if book lovers can tolerate typos and omissions, most people will vote for other authors who carefully check after writing before publishing, because checking before publishing is a sign of respect for readers. After all, this is not Tomato, all are paid chapters. Also, some of the author's jokes are really not funny at all, especially: Who knows, a scene where a big man is doing something, this kind of writing is a bit too abstract. The writing style can be a little more plain, and does not need to be too exaggerated.

In reality, regions are divided into three, six or nine levels. You are still confused about why the new stars look down on the ancestor stars? That thing, don't talk about it far away. In the past, city people still looked down on peasants? Is that still far away? It is set in the book that after three thousand years away from the earth, there is a powerful force who deliberately blocks the ancestral star. What do ordinary people on the new star know? They know that Ancestral Star's technology and martial arts are not good either. If you come out of the ruins, they will definitely think you are lucky. Why, when I used to go to the city for archeology in the countryside, those people would look at you more because of the cultural relics you have there?

I have often heard that if a wise author has thirty chapters saved, he can stand and talk. If he has four hundred thousand words saved, he does not need to worry about whether to type. If he updates fifty chapters a day, he is destined to be a platinum god. When you update sixty chapters a day, we will use nice words to make you happy physically and mentally. When you update seventy chapters a day, your soul will wander between the yin and yang worlds, without any restraint. This wise author, you must understand this truth!

A small suggestion: there are too many words to praise the protagonist in this chapter, and there are shocks everywhere. There aren't many updates, so there should be less shocking content. Praising the protagonist can be placed in plot advancement.

I met a 30-year-old young woman online. We have been chatting very well for more than half a year. Today she asked to meet. I hesitated. I said you have a family and it didn't feel good, but she said it was okay and we were just ordinary friends. I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty. She lives in a city far away from me. Not far away, we made an appointment to meet at a milk tea shop. We didn't choose to meet somewhere else for fear of meeting an acquaintance. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for several hours. While waiting, I looked at the photos and thought it was another "car rollover scene." Most mobile phones have a beauty function, but when she got out of that Mercedes-Benz, I recognized her at a glance. She is much prettier than in the photo, and she is my favorite type. She also recognized me. She didn't know what to say. In order to break the awkwardness, she suggested a hug. I said yes. She smelled very good. I jumped and sat in the milk tea shop for a while. We went to eat. She basically didn't eat much. The whole experience was Cheng was peeling shrimps and picking fish bones for me. When we walked out of the restaurant after dinner, she held my hand and I didn't break away. She said she would take me home. I said I would take a taxi back, but she insisted on taking me back. When I got home, I found that she had put a note in her bag, which said: Update ten chapters to unlock subsequent content.

To be honest, writing for the Ancestral Star in the early stage was too frustrating. In the novice stage, I should kill all the people who are not from the Ancestral Planet, and then there are thousands of races. The development of the protagonist feels too slow. At the same time, the aliens are oppressing the Ancestral Star very hard. It feels very frustrating. It is refreshing but not so satisfying. I need to quickly improve the protagonist's realm and kill all the disgusting people. It's a bit boring to keep making small fuss.

Many readers are worried about whether they will be whitewashed or something. You can rest assured that there is no so-called whitewash. Everyone is fighting for themselves, and everyone must pay the price for what they have done. Don't talk about the overall situation or being a last resort. If you dare to do it, you will have to pay the price, even if you are logical and reasonable, you will die. There is no general trend, Su Tu is the general trend! I am just a writer of entertaining articles. I can't write any thought-provoking plots. My biggest hope is to make readers enjoy them. All those who are coerced in the name of the overall situation will die, no more than the withered bones on the roadside of Su Tudi! Finally, I wish you all, like Su Tu, good luck in martial arts and become masters in life!

Starting from the three gods, it becomes more and more confusing. I feel that the author wants to write too much. Fantasy immortality, martial arts, body, self, mind, belief in Shinto, and Cthulhu. I want to include everything. There are many conflicts, such as the transformation of the protagonist's best friend, which is inexplicable and forced to conflict for the complexity of the character. The usage of skill points on the panel and other foreshadowings. It has been buried for a long time. I want to write everything. The more complicated I want to write, the better, but the more I write, the worse it gets. Personally, I feel that cheats have become proficiency, skill points have been used to learn racial talents, and god skills have been changed to racial talents. Beliefs, gods, etc. Have been deleted. The main line is a cool article about martial arts and the struggle for hegemony in the starry sky. It looks better than now.

It's too stressful. There are all kinds of secrets and old things behind it. The possibility of the author's collapse is too high.

Isn't your world view too big? According to the current way of writing, those so-called supreme Taoists are just ants. They won't wait for the protagonist to clean up the federation before leaving the novice village, right?

It's time to leave. What I'm writing now is just a pile of rubbish. Sure enough, it's sold.

Can you sort out the typos? Each chapter costs fifty to forty points and there are also typos. As for the author's most basic writing attitude, the work is okay. The typos really need to be corrected. Otherwise, I would feel uncomfortable if I spent this little starting currency and did not get corresponding feedback.

We are already halfway through the article and the Earth has not yet appeared. No matter how hard you lay it out, you can't do this? There are only 460 chapters, and half of them are on this earth, so you might as well not write about the starry sky.

The writing is really rubbish. It was better before it was put on the shelves than after it was put on the shelves. Whoever spends the money gets scorned. Everyone is shocked. What else would you do? There are a lot of weird logics, why is the only prodigy of the family without any magic weapon or props, and can be killed casually without leaving anything behind, and yet he is the only one who dominates me every day?

I keep digging holes but don't fill them to become the Riddler. There are so many stalls and they are so big. How can you write your own story?

Keep it up for half a month first, update more often, don't write too much, and check after half a month if the writing is good and continue to send you monthly tickets

The author should be diligent in updating, it's not enough

Come on, come on, you are much better than the so-called platinum, I wish you can become a god

I really know how to name chapters. I really thought it was over if I didn't read it.