Qingzhu Immortal Clan

It has a sense of life and self-consistent logic. It is not as mindless as relying on the halo of the protagonist. It is very similar to what an ordinary person thinks and encounters. Although the writing is immature, the courage to write like this has surpassed 99% of authors. Hopefully not a eunuch.

Did Lao Mo open a trumpet account again? This profile looks so familiar

I can feel in the text that the author is very serious about writing. He is very careful in designing the story and portraying the characters. The writing style is not bad, but it is not exciting and I have no strong desire to read it. Moreover, skipping subscription does not affect the reading experience at all. I lost interest in reading it. The protagonist's story is too flat, too light, and some of the plot climaxes feel like they have a slight uptick, and then fade away. Then the story of the family is too flat. The growth of a small family should be very difficult. It should be a series of ups and downs, setbacks, plans, accumulations, failures, dedication, sacrifice, and success. It should be reflected in every small story of each family member, which can be strung together or Speaking of reading the same core of the story from different short stories, that is, the rise of Tu Cun, the current feeling is that only the author talks about the difficult growth of the family when it is clearly stated that the family is difficult, but it is not particularly reflected in other stories. The author may have written it, but it did not leave a strong impression on me when I read it. Some of my readings may be wrong, and I haven't finished reading them yet.

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Aren't the formations given to the family? Abandoned

These pictures are a bit confusing! Who is Pig Knuckle?

So far, the rhythm seems very comfortable. I love watching it. More to come.

It feels like the setting is a bit flimsy. Although it is logically self-consistent, it still feels a bit fragmented. For example, here in Changning, if you don't have spiritual roots, you will be separated from your family, but there are still many mortals working in the family residence. The former son-in-law also married mortal wives and lived together, and these mortal wives most likely had immortal cultivators in their ancestors. Then the family's rule of forced separation is a bit too far-fetched. Of course, from the perspective of saving resources for cultivating immortals, this family regulation is of positive significance, but it always feels a bit inferior. For example, the descendants of immortal cultivators without spiritual roots can receive certain preferential treatment in the mortal world, which is better than going up the mountain to do chores for immortal cultivators.

It's almost 200 chapters and I haven't even built a base yet for cheating.

Come on, I hope this book won't be another eunuch.

It is said that spirit stones will be consumed. Why has the world of immortality still used spirit stones as currency for so long?

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

Wow, there are so many banned words. . Rational discussion. .