
The End of the World: Start Shopping for a Sharingan Online
末世:开局网购一只写轮眼
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 260k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Apocalypse
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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.... A bit of a drama. In less than two days, everyone on the street knew the names of the two protagonists. The key is to cut off the Internet and rely on person-to-person transmission to forcefully promote plot conflicts. Those villains who have activated the whole map radar are 100% able to find NPCs and spread rumors. The key is that when those villains find people, they don't steal their things, but only the protagonist's stuff.
The follow-up plot is too unfavorable, especially the plot about the Will-o'-the-Wisp Motorcycle. It would have been great to end this small plot neatly with the death of the villains in the first stage, but it turns out that it is not the mastermind, and there is a follow-up, which is too delayed Author, you must know that the conspiracy is based on the fact that you are fully capable of surviving, and you are confident that you will live better and better. Only the protagonist can use it, that's all if the protagonist has a plug-in Others don't have a plug-in, and there are zombies and more powerful bugs outside. Even if he is not the protagonist at this stage or has heavy firepower and is invincible, how can the enemy have the confidence to plot and target, or even give others materials, so that people will listen to him without considering the dangers outside? That's it for the protagonist's cheating. How strong is this person's ability? How awesome, don't let this person have no powerful abilities in the end, all rely on high IQ, and then pull a team to target the protagonist, then I can only say that he is a fool
The end of the world! Sharingan! Element detection, it's you Li Jiayu🙂
Relationships change too quickly
Less than two days after the apocalypse, the first villain group appeared, and what they had to face was a plot of drugging and kidnapping that worked inside and outside. No matter how quickly the opposing group was formed, or how it was able to trust outsiders in just two days, it was completely confusing.
The author does not have the power of a great god, but some of the shortcomings of a great god. What is the foundation of other readers, and what is your foundation? I can only say that I will write it later. After everyone has run away, you have a hammer in the late stage, generating electricity purely for love.
In a post-apocalyptic novel, the male protagonist is often frustrated. Have I gone back to twenty years ago?
Is the protagonist a naughty boy and a naughty boy? Will he be beaten to his knees?
Not Wudiwen
I don't have the tag of being invincible. Why are they all eager to come up and kill the apocalypse? Some of them said that they deliberately let the villains escape. They chased after them and killed them when their mana was almost empty. Otherwise, why did they take the initiative to attack later when their mana was full? Do the most basic principles of life-saving first need to be emphasized? I also asked how the rumor spread. I can only say that I will write about it later, but not all of the second volume will be written. If I have to spoil it, it is not only the protagonist who is special.
Twenty-six and twenty-seven are poorly written. I always jump directly to Chapter 28. The plot is really very discouraging. It's a lot of nonsense and explanations. It's annoying to look at. It is recommended that people behind you can jump directly, otherwise it will be easy to delete the book and leave. Just cut it off with a knife and talk nonsense to the villain.
It is obviously a work by a new author testing the waters. There are many logical conflicts and anomalies in the text. I can only say that after more practice, the next book may be better. This book may only survive to be on the shelf.
It has the beauty of 2005 apocalyptic writing, a novice author who has never changed from the past.
I just say that if an ordinary person can be designed like this despite the presence of plug-ins, the author did not want to develop a normal plot.
Hahaha, on the second day of the apocalypse, I offended an archer, killed a hundred people, and killed a T.
I can only say that the author's writing style needs to be refined.
After reading the introduction, what did you buy?
Chapter 27: Directly persuade them to leave. Don't come if you don't want to see those who suffer.
The author shoots first and then writes about the appearance of the gun later
After reading around, the biggest problem the author has is that he doesn't know how to ambush and connect. If a gun appears before in the novel, the gun will definitely shoot later. However, the author shoots first, and then writes the gun appears later, which makes the plot a bit unreasonable.
Rumors are outrageous
The otaku turned into a villain, forcibly strengthened and quickly received the lunch box. As soon as the second volume came out, there were rumors everywhere. It was outrageous. In the end of the world, if you don't want to survive and upgrade, would everyone just eat it? How did it spread?
Those products are probably just like collection cards. They have either one restriction or another. Then it won't appear when it's no longer useful. .
I persisted until chapter 31, but there was really nothing I could do after that.