Starting as a Lizardman Lord

I've noticed a significant problem with the author: most readers who enjoy Warhammer fanfiction are likely Warhammer Total War players, and those who play these games generally enjoy farming and resource management. The author's previous book was purely war-themed with no resource management elements, which caused me to abandon it after a while.

Daily reading is extremely important, really, really important. Without reading, you can't say you have anything to say; that's the mechanism of Qidian. Thank you again. If you have any comments during the reading process, please feel free to leave them in the post. I will take them into consideration and consider them carefully.

Some 20th-century relics are being shown off, and to make matters worse, it's a fantasy world, regardless of whether it's even relevant... Compared to geography, ties of production are far more important. The author understands Warhammer, but shouldn't be so superficial in other areas.

Another new book! I thought someone on Tieba posted about writing about lizardmen. 😰

At least 100 out of 200 chapters are filled with dry, tedious content about human politics and ideology; I'd rather read a textbook... Even the protagonist, who's supposed to be a farming-and-troop-producing character, doesn't actually produce troops anymore... Wouldn't it be better to just do missions, farm, and produce troops?... Wouldn't an engine be better?... Why be a babysitter?...

Personally, I think the author's writing style is good, but the content is too dry, always ending a major event too quickly. Or perhaps the author prefers the feeling of driving history forward and doesn't want to write about the small details.

Dude, have you thought about what you actually want to write? The story feels too chaotic; it's not like farming, it's not like being a lord, it's not like being behind the scenes. It just reads like a complete diary entry to pad the word count. Give me something substantial!

I want to see the protagonist's development and progress in all aspects, including politics, economy, military, technology, and population, rather than him running around aimlessly.

You should write more about farming and not always focus on other characters. Instead, focus on the lizardman theme and stop constantly suppressing the protagonist's strength.

In a world like the Chaotic Demon Realm, simply taking real-world political theories and applying them to a novel is really unappealing. You might as well write a fictional cyberpunk novel; at least you could depict arguments in meetings and verbal battles between characters.