Martial Saint!

Lao Tian's book is well written, with plot settings and character characterizations in place. It is also a breath of fresh air in a platform like Qidian where fast-paced and pretentious cool articles are everywhere. Many cool articles are too cool at the beginning. The foundation is not laid well at the beginning, and there are no details and big background to support the content. In the end, the writing cannot be continued or it is unfinished. Be slower, be more detailed, and be more logically logical, and you will naturally have many readers.

I have read many novels, and I want to write the protagonist as a hexagonal warrior. It is too perfect and extremely unreasonable. Even if there are cheats, you can't be a perfect person! ! ! !

When you have money, you have to pay it back, and you have to take the initiative to give back to those who borrowed money before. Only such a protagonist can be three-dimensional and full.

Amateur Tenth Dan Ming Jin Realm, Dark Jin Realm, Transformation Jin Realm, Extreme Realm Breaking the Shackles (Meat Refining) True Jin The four stages of martial arts. The initial realm is the first viewing platform. If you can reach the second viewing platform, you will reach the middle realm. The third viewing platform is the final realm. Reaching the last platform is the end. Break the two shackles (refining the tendons) and the true energy The strength transforms into the true energy, and the river of inner heaven and earth is born in the inner scene. The muscles and blood vessels are the rivers. By forging iron bars, the river is made broad and mighty, and the river banks are strong and stable, so that more true energy can be generated and accommodated, allowing the true energy to flow smoothly around the body, further polishing the body, forming an ecological cycle in the body, and making the world more perfect. Breaking the Three Shackles (Refining the Skin Film) Nine Mountains True Gang The Birth of the Three Mountains and the Five Mountains Kunlun Mountain in the Interior Location Calling the Master Breaking the Four Shackles (Refining the Bones) Four Haizhengang The inner scene is born from all over the world, called the master Break the five shackles (refining the viscera) Star Zhengang The inner scene is born of the vast stars Quenching Refining the five internal organs, crossing the golden internal organs, and fetal breath, he is called the great master Break the six shackles (refining the marrow) Taiyin Zhengang A bright moon is born in the interior scene Washing the chalcedony, condensing the martial arts world , Gather martial arts, and be called the King of Heaven Control the magnetic field, fly to the sky and escape from the earth Break the seven shackles (blood refining) Sun True Gang A sun is born in the interior location Known as the top

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When I was seven years old, I saw my master for the first time. He was a handsome man with a long sword, white clothes and white boots, and his long hair was tied up casually. He took me from Pingyang City to Shanmen. The sect my master belongs to is called Jian Zong. It is located on the Immortal Sword Peak outside the huge Pingyang City. The only true inheritors of the sect are my master and me. In addition to Master and me, there are also several of Master's named disciples and a large number of servants. The master said that our sword sect has only one successor in one generation, and the one chosen for this generation is me. "My name is Jian Yi. From now on, you can call me master and follow me." This was the first sentence my master said to me. "Your name is Lu Chenzhou." This is the second sentence my master said to me. "From today on, your name is Lu Chenzhou." "Lu Chenzhou? Where are we going?" Yes, he didn't say another word from my home to Pingyang City. I only remember that day, the afterglow of the setting sun was particularly gentle, and I walked beside him, trying my best to follow his footsteps. Can a seven-year-old child walk in the footsteps of an adult? I don't know how long it took, but we finally arrived at the foot of the Fairy Sword Peak Mountain. Looking at the mist-shrouded mountains and the sound of trickling water from the distance, at that moment, my heart became quiet. That year, when I was seven years old, I followed a stranger to Fairy Sword Peak. Sometimes, I keep thinking. If I had not come to Fairy Sword Peak at the beginning, maybe my life should not be like this. Master only gave me the most basic skills of using a sword: thrust, chop, point, tease, pick, collapse, intercept, cut, wipe, cut, cloud, hang, frame, press, etc. And the steps to use the sword include bow step, empty step, Ding step, rest step, stoop step, leap step, etc. I asked: "Why do we only have these most basic things? Don't we have magical secrets on swordsmanship?" He said: "I will know it when I come down from the mountain." And I had to rely on the most technical swordsmanship to fight with wild beasts in the mountains, practice swordsmanship in deep pool waterfalls, and chop boulders on the mountain. I was always scarred, but I always persisted. He always likes to say: "A little lower, a little lower, and you will be invincible in the world." I asked: "Am I too tall?" Master: "No, your heart is too high..." I said: "Master, how big is the world?" Master: "The world is as big as Pingyang City." I said: "But my home is not in Pingyang City, how can we say that the world is only as big as Pingyang City?" Master: "A Pingyang City is a world, with thousands and thousands of them. A city is like thousands of worlds. The most important thing is, who belongs to the world?" I asked: "Master, where is our sword sect?" Master: "In my heart, it is at the end of the world." I said: "Master, if you keep pretending, I really don't want to look for it anymore?" But, I have been in the mountain for ten years, and I don't know many things. I have never even seen those three registered disciples, only one or two senior sisters chatting around me every day. I haven't even learned every move. Yes, Master has never taught any other swordsmanship. He only asked me to practice basic chopping, stabbing and other movements day after day. He could chop boulders to cut off human beings, chop down waterfalls to cut off the flow of water, sting the wings of moths without hurting their bodies, and pick at the feet of flying insects without hurting their bodies. I asked: "Master, why don't you teach me martial arts?" Master: "Did I say I will teach you martial arts?" I asked: "When will you teach me martial arts?" Master still said the same thing: "You will know after you come down the mountain!" Ten years ago, I came to Fairy Sword Peak, when I was seven years old. Ten years later, I was seventeen. Ten years on, my life has remained the same. Run across the mist-shrouded mountain peaks with heavy loads, practice cutting off the water in the rushing waterfall, and practice splitting rocks into statues on huge boulders. In the elegant bamboo forest, you can practice using hidden weapons to fly away without damaging the bamboo body, or fighting with wild beasts in the mountains to protect yourself from harm. This has been going on for ten years. Good scenery is good, but people should practice it day after day until one day. The master is going to let me go down the mountain to find my own sword. Master said: "Shen Zhou, please go down the mountain." Me: "Only me?" Master: "Only you". Me: "Why are you going down the mountain?" Master: "Looking for the sword?" Me: "How to find it?" Master: "Look with your eyes. Search with your heart" Me: "..." Me: "Master, but I don't know martial arts, and the world is dangerous." Master: "So..." "Understood." Me: "Then I'm going down the mountain, Master. Take care!" Master: "Let's go Let's go! "Me: "When will I come back? " Master: "Let me go before I leave, how far can I go." "Me: "..." Me: "Then I'll leave, Master. Please take care of me while I'm away... Oh, Master, don't leave?" I went down the mountain. I was seventeen years old, and I went down the mountain with a rusty broken sword and a package given to me by my master. It wasn't until I was traveling around the world and fighting with others, and no one of my peers could catch my sword, that I realized that I had been practicing swordsmanship in the mountains for ten years. The so-called swordsmanship is nothing more than the combination of the most basic attack methods in swordsmanship to form swordsmanship and swordsmanship, and basic swordsmanship has long been practiced, and one can easily master it. After fighting all the way, I became the first in the list of freshmen in the world, but I still couldn't find the sword that the master mentioned about me. But the story of my journey in the world has just begun. (The story is not finished and will be updated as I write)

Drops

So disappointing, much worse than the previous one. If your classmates are just plot NPCs, then don't spend so much pen and ink writing about reunions. There is not enough characterization of their characters, and the fun of using them to praise the protagonist is completely gone. Including the early masters and sisters, the more you write, the more clownish you become. If you don't know how to name, just read more. Looking at the book review section, if you don't know how to name, don't you even have basic aesthetics? Similarly, the dialogue is extremely childish, boring and nutritious. It's perfectly fine to skip reading. It only took me one minute to read one chapter Your highlights are the setting and the description of the protagonist's own training and upgrading. Why not add a little more? The over and over again competition is not exciting at all, there are no ups and downs, no emotional foreshadowing, one after another is inexplicable I ordered two books in a row. Although the previous one had many flaws, the overall rhythm and setting were great. This one has kept all the shortcomings of the previous book and discarded the advantages. Abandoned

How should I put it? The improvement speed of pig's trotters is too different from the background of the world. It was just two days ago that the martial arts master suddenly came to an end. A bunch of fives, sixes, sevens and ten's were almost out. The pig's trotters were still two. It was like he was still in kindergarten. Suddenly he was thrown into the university and he didn't know how to get around 😅

Personally, I suggest that in this struggle for survival between races, don't overemphasize the distinction between justice and evil. Monsters, ghosts and other races also have the right to survive. In the biological world, humans are just one of them. The human race also relies on hunting other races to survive. Why do other races think it is heinous to hunt humans?

First of all, the set up is too low. This type of dungeon is one that has accumulated little experience and is a late bloomer. In the early stage, the protagonist is forced to win the first place in various competitions and grab resources, but the resources to get the first place are not enough for the protagonist to fill his teeth. To integrate it into your own, everyone needs to cultivate hundreds of scriptures. The protagonist practices a book of exercises for at least half a month, and at most for a year or two. What do you think? Is this reasonable? It's so difficult in the early stage, how to fix it in the later stage? Do you still want to become famous at a young age? Still want to leapfrog Lao Deng? Without this condition, nor the strength, since logically there is no way to beat Lao Deng, how could it be any fun? So the author forcibly created a leapfrog fight, either there were not many leaps, or it was illogical to go beyond one or two levels. If there is not much, it is not satisfying enough, and if there is more, it is illogical. Doesn't this become cancer? So, this book has problems at its source and the setting is unreasonable

() 1-3：             ： 4-6：             ： 7-9：            Floating level: high-risk virtual objects 10th stage: extreme realm (still corresponds to floating level virtual objects) Breaking one: martial arts master You level (Shadow resentment level 3 Breaking two: martial arts master Shadow level can also be collectively called Breaking three: martial arts master Resentment Level Big Void) Broken Four: Martial Arts Grandmaster Fierce Level (Void King/Demon King) Broken Five: Martial Arts Grandmaster Disaster Level (Big Void King/Big Demon King) Broken Six: Martial Arts Heavenly King Disaster Level (Void King/Demon King/Tiangui) Broken Seven: Martial Arts Ultimate Peak ??? Level (Xu Zun/Da Tian Gui) Broken eight: ??? (Not yet reached) Broken nine: ??? (Not yet reached) The warrior rank corresponds to the qi and blood value, the number of acupoints, and the lifespan Rank                                                                                                                                                                                                                         1.20-1.44 Second paragraph 1.44-1.73 Third paragraph 1.73-2.07 Fourth paragraph 2.07-2.48 Fifth paragraph 2.48-2.98 1-30 Sixth Stage 2.98-3.58 Seventh Stage 3.58-4.30 Eightth Stage 4.30-5.16 Nineth Stage 5.16-6.19 Extreme Realm 6.19-8.00                                                10-15           30-60          15-25 60-90 End 25-43 90-120 End 43-53 120-150                                                 70-100        150-180          100-180 180-210 The end 210-240 The end 240-270 Break the three shackles and live a long life The first realm 270-300 Middle realm 300-330 End realm 330-360 Ending 360-390 Breaking the four shackles Shou Wujiazi Early Realm 390-420 Middle Realm 420-450 The End                                                                                                      480-510 Break the five shackles                                                                                                                                                        510-540 Midland                                                                                   570-600 Ending 600-630 Breaking the six shackles Shou Jiuzi Early Realm 630-660 Middle Realm 660-690 The End                                                                                                                                                            720 Break the seven shackles Twelve Years of Life First Realm Middle Realm Last Realm End Realm Note: The number of acupuncture points after breaking through the Second Middle Realm is a personal calculation, which seems to be problematic 😰 The above are all personal statistics. If there are any errors, please correct me!

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​I couldn't stand it anymore and stopped watching it. Why? First of all, I feel that there is a strong sense of fragmentation, because the beginning is a very normal Gaowu academy style, and the background is generally stable with a little turmoil. Playing games is a must-have part of Gaowu in the early stage. The author cut off these game plots because he was not very skilled in writing and was criticized by some readers. I think cutting off the game plot is a failure. Why do fantasy novels with high martial arts or modern backgrounds like to write about academies? Because the academy can naturally pass through the early stage when the protagonist is relatively weak. The plot of high martial arts competitions or modern fantasy high school leagues is to pass through more naturally. Degree, to enrich the emotional feedback that the protagonist's training brings to the readers. After cutting it off, there will only be boring and streamlined descriptions such as training, trance, and then practicing the combined god species. In order to prevent the plot from being boring, the oppression of the virtual realm was forcibly added. This is another failure, and it is a big one. The gap between the Gods of the Void Realm and humans is too big. It suddenly turns the original peace of the background into chaos, and forcibly shapes the separation of the Void Realm for hundreds of years. The transition from the original nature becomes extremely blunt. In order to allow humans to catch up and fight against the gods, they constantly cheat and cheat, so that other supporting characters who could have been well described are reduced to passers-by. From here on, I can't stand it anymore. I originally wanted to read a Gao Wu novel in which the main character grows up passionately. I don't know if the author changed the outline midway. It gave me the feeling that the plot was very seriously separated. The original Gao Wu growth turned into a struggle for survival, which was not very comfortable. Above.

What should I do if I can't help myself every few days😱

The god species that took a lot of effort can only be described as slightly, a little, or a small amount. It lacks a sense of volume, and the entry rhythm is slow and unremarkable. Fortunately, the overall writing flow can be seen in the second realm.

It was pretty good in the first and middle stages, but it ended up being inexplicably bad.

Brothers, are there any similar urban martial arts novels that are fun to read? They are at least somewhat logical, not insulting to the IQ, and have no bloody plot. They are also fun and have a climax.

I was very happy to follow it every day, but when I saw the unsurprising protagonist and Yaochi Xian getting together, I suddenly felt that the novel was boring and I couldn't follow it. To be honest, otherwise there would be no heroine. Your writing is really embarrassing. They got together inexplicably. This is the first time I saw the elimination method the protagonist used to choose his wife 😅

The martial arts training part is quite interesting, at least it looks good to pass the time. The disadvantage is that it is not very impersonal in daily life, and many ordinary conversations feel perfunctory. Also, when practicing, the author's bad taste is a bit strong, male and female. No, the male body training is a bit erotic. In the end, it's a bit weird. Logically speaking, the protagonist has average bones and average understanding, which means he has good perseverance and a firm belief in martial arts. The cheat is God's way to reward hard work, and he can exert his power in the middle and late stages of superimposing the divine seed. , The early performance should be above average but he worked very hard, but the protagonist's early performance was outstanding. He started sweeping from the lower root bones and then swept the middle root bones. The martial arts master had surpassed the upper root bones before. It's not that it can't be done, but the problem is, then At this time, you only had a few divine seeds, and they were all of the first level. I have always emphasized the importance of root bones, but the protagonist clearly has inferior roots, and the divine seeds are not stacked up. So just a plug-in that proves to be eternally powerful can surpass the upper-class bones in three years? What's more, the world collapsed too fast. He started to visit various places in the first episode, chaos started in the second episode, and all kinds of monsters and ghosts appeared in the third episode. As a result, the protagonist's strength could only fly quickly, and the plot became more and more dry.

First of all, let's set the tone. This book is much different from the previous one, not even a little bit different. This book is either about cultivation or competition. The content of this cultivation was okay at the beginning, after all, it was just the beginning, but you have practiced so much and you still explain it in such detail. Normally, we don't just talk about breakthroughs, and then write about them when the process requires it. I keep writing until you are here. In addition to this cultivation process, it is to play competitions, such as small competitions in cities, business competitions in cities, local competitions, local business competitions, and then national competitions and national business competitions. Finally these competitions are gone, what competitions are there again, climbing towers, competing with people all over the world and other alien planets. Then I broke into a secret realm and fought with the people inside. I was really blown away and speechless. You clearly have that virtual realm, that 3000 world. Next time, you are the lamplighter and you go to fight the enemies and extend the plot. In the end, you get past me with one stroke every time. Find a way out and wandered into the virtual realm. Then the big guys arranged to go to the new world. No, buddy, can't you arrange this for the protagonist? I keep writing about your game, holy shit, I skipped it without any pressure at all, and it doesn't affect the subsequent plot at all Finally, there is a bit of a bone problem, which is not very conspicuous. Obviously there are suitable medicinal materials, which can at least upgrade the protagonist to a medium-sized bone. However, the result is that he keeps suppressing it. He is obviously the one who needs upgrading the most.

This book is too ordinary to talk about. There is not a single hook. I suspect that the author wrote the novel in the sea. It is all water.

I have collected fourteen chapters and couldn't help myself. It was so enjoyable to read. Next time, try to stock up on Chapter 28 to make yourself feel better.

In fact, it is the same to remove the training and strengthening of the god species in the early stage. It does not affect the reading and it does not feel faster. I use a few roaring special effects and martial arts to overlap. There is no overlap at all and it will not be stronger than others And it is not interesting to not write down the specific amount of strengthening As for the protagonist's ability, it is not good at all and it is no different from others

Amateur 10th Dan Ming Jin Realm, Dark Jin Realm, Transformation Jin Realm, Extreme Realm Breaking the Shackles (Meat Refining) True Jin Four stages of martial arts. The initial realm is the first viewing platform. If you can reach the second viewing platform, you will reach the middle realm. The third viewing platform is the final realm. Reaching the last platform is the end. Break the two shackles (refining the tendons) and the true energy The strength transforms into the true energy, and the river of inner heaven and earth is born in the inner scene. The muscles and blood vessels are the rivers. By forging iron bars, the river is made broad and mighty, and the river banks are strong and stable, so that more true energy can be generated and accommodated, allowing the true energy to flow smoothly around the body, further polishing the body, forming an ecological cycle in the body, and making the world more perfect. Breaking the Three Shackles (Refining the Skin Film) Nine Mountains True Gang The Birth of the Three Mountains and the Five Mountains Kunlun Mountain in the Interior Location Calling the Master Breaking the Four Shackles (Refining the Bones) Four Haizhengang The inner scene is born from all over the world, called the master Break the five shackles (refining the viscera) Star Zhengang The inner scene is born of the vast stars Quenching Refining the five internal organs, crossing the golden internal organs, and fetal breath, he is called the great master Break the six shackles (refining the marrow) Taiyin Zhengang A bright moon is born in the interior scene Washing the chalcedony, condensing the martial arts world , Gather martial arts, and be called the King of Heaven Control the magnetic field, fly to the sky and escape from the earth Break the seven shackles (blood refining) Sun True Gang A sun is born in the interior location Known as the top

It ended inexplicably! ! !

There is no breath of life, just like a top student who is always studying

It's been a year and you haven't published a new book yet? Does anyone have any information about the author?

Additional refinement

It's been a long time since I've read this book so happily. The pace of this book is said to be slow, but for me, it's like entering my comfort zone. I hate slow-paced novels, but the pace of this book is just right. Even if you get used to it, you'll feel a little fast in the middle and late stages. That doesn't matter. In this type of book, you have to hurry up or else you'll get bored easily. I was fascinated by this book as I read it, and hundreds of chapters passed before I knew it. The author's creativity is a major factor, the world view is very interesting, and the description of the protagonist's martial arts advancement is very exciting, without losing too many plot points (after all, this book is also a refreshing article 😏) Overall, it is worth reading, and it is well received 👍